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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 82)

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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

res Confused

Evrytime ur pm arrive and her I hold my heart..phew'.

 

Haha 'such a joke'mayank alive only in house'.is ther any sort of life left in him'

 

No one just evn give a dam to him'its too much to handle whn one those r called ur loved one'are mere audience who just laugh, taunt, mock and criticize u thts it'Ouch

 

I hate this sentence of his'mein kisi ko khushi nhi day sakta'.usay ko khushi nhi day sakta

 

The scnce to jharna 'aww it was so perfect'so much perfect'..loved the way she was excited, thn his love..and thn his gesture'u made me yet again fall for him'Embarrassed

 

I was reading whole part an I was smiling pitfully..u wont leave me'thy didn't ..yet thy did

 

Aww he is a cutepie'mera pass tu kcuh sweet nhi hai'lol..just love himEmbarrassed

 

The proposal'gosh another beautiful part'his mischief of getng the box, his word..her feeling.,...her fears'.yet all cuming so true

 

There were so many pleasant loved filled, cute moments, yet there was pain in remebring all those soo much tht it sinked my heart'so much'..

 

And thn they way he said mayank is finished..im fearing his reaction towards life'Ouch

 

But thn all of a sudden

 

Is this possible'is really any ray of hope'.who is neel n wht he has done..

 

God this update was a roler coaster of emotions'so much to take in'and the l;ast is such clif hanger'.

 

Suja huts off tu such a beautifully wriiten part'ur making me heads over heal in love with this ff'.n moreover so glad to have a writer like u..

Lov ya

But im having my fingers cross for the hope'Nupur will trust his words na'.no plss'.nt this shock'.OMG'..

 

And congrats suja ny romance likha 'wahh'

 and thnks

Ramdan mubarak



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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

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Suja i was scared u know- pata nehi ye update parke mera kya haal hoga- asia he sch rahi thi main.. but today ur update made me feel good.Yesss though it was again a painful upate but I loved a lot- at least baat tou kuch age bara. yaar mere mayank and nupur were in so much pain... why r u giving them so much pain????? khush rehne do in dono ko Flashback part of Nupur  and Mayank  was just amazing hun.. loved it so much. the jhora scene and then their cute shararat , the proposal scene everything was outstanding... u had shown that how pure there love was... they were d most innocent couple of the world..They were madly in love with each other.. but destiny ko tou kuch aur he manzoor tha' GOSH ' they r made  4 each other- and I know no one can separate them' Suja I didn't expect the last part of this update- u moron ' u've changed d story line' huh change kya aur job hi kya ' I really liked this part'. Fantastic update janu'.. lovelyyy'.. u know na it was one of my fav  FF's. And now I m loving this FF more n more'''.. Well-done Suja'.. thank u so much 4 ur update' muahhh.. next time plz jaldi update karma'.. take care'




 





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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chandu-mayu

I cant see ayank in pain . beautiful part . sujata why did not you pm me. plz pm me


Originally posted by 18anila1

loved it lodsss


Originally posted by np18

you know today i was wondering if i missed your update

nice -thanks for the pm



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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by varsh-mayur

waiting for twistTongue

 
Originally posted by DhanakZ

NupurTum ye shadi nahi kar sakyi
Aray Wha wHa wha mera sher kya dhmakadar entry Ki  ha
Per suja agar agla update ma mujha shock nahi laga na to tum shock ke lia tayar ho jao
Thanks for pm
cont soon 



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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .PINK.

part uno
heyyy sis sachi mein loved da first part to core na !!Hug
sope Mayu with his family going to west bengal n he lost in his own world
looking out window
n lol loved da part where hiz sister Gunjan waz like Bhaiyya iz lost when his mother told him to close the window since it waz soo hot outside
n den his dad sed he lost in Raja Rani dreamzz LOL
nice part na
loved da title too, sachi mein gr88 work na sis Hug
-Linu

Originally posted by .PINK.

part 2

awww diz partzz choo beautfully written, sachi mein Suja loved reading it na
sope Mayu in da garden n Nupz there too, n he caught her leg by mistake ROFL
one thing I don't understand
whoz Jetumoni??
waised loved it, sope Mayu'z parent sed dey have to go back
but den he insisted staying there where "his girl" waz LOL
awww I just love dat he already feelz attracted towrdz her na !!
now kant wait to read more !!!
-Linu

Originally posted by .PINK.

part 3
awww diz partzz choo cutee na sis, loadzz of wordzz I dunn understand since my hindi/urdu weak :(
but wat I understood waz choo cutee na
sope Mayur felling in love with Nupz more n morE
n he alwayzz saying dat he shouldn't b thinking like diz,
dunno y na, but den in end did upz trip :S
well den dey say blue bird n Mayur tried finding it, n den it flew away. but lovely part na Suja, loved reading it!
-Linu


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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by luvumjht

nyc ff ...luvd it

Originally posted by crazymayurian

osom
fingers cross

Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Ramazan mubarak!
Lovly part.
plz update soon.
 





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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ridi_onasis

suja my xam is going on aur main ye tension effort nehi kar sakti so jitne jaldi ho sake update de dena...plzzz

Originally posted by mayur_eternal

Beutiful part..
I literally felt like crying reading about Mayank's condition..
He seems to be lifelessOuch
But the last part is again full of mystery..
Hope Mayank stops this marriage soon and get his Nupur backEmbarrassed

Originally posted by maria-soniarti

sujataHugHug

love y for this updateHugwhat a beautiful update
finally a ray of hope.Mayu ne kya entry mari hai..BY GOD..:)
 
i hope now everything ll be fine.drem sequence was fabolous,mezmerising
 
continue it soon
 


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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ronojoy_ria

hi
the up is touchly yet hopeful
so mayank came back to his hometown and now waiting for the next day when he will leave this country and his love forever
really life have been very diskind to him
neither his family nor his friends understood him
only nupur was there in his life but now she was going away from him
it really painful to see him like this
here nupur's state is also like this she too going through the same phase of life
for her family she is sacficing her love her life
but in this tragic up also the romantic esence which u added is really impressive
i must say my student is inproving LOLgood keep it upClap
why parents dont understand our feelings
anyways the last part is really intresting have to wait what is the matter with neil
cont soon and pm me

Originally posted by arjun-forever

very nice part suja...
fabulous...
wow i loved this update...
very touching...and the last bit...wow exciting...!!!!



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