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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 80)

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Posted: 02 August 2011 at 9:27pm | IP Logged
Beutiful part..
I literally felt like crying reading about Mayank's condition..
He seems to be lifelessOuch
But the last part is again full of mystery..
Hope Mayank stops this marriage soon and get his Nupur backEmbarrassed

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Posted: 02 August 2011 at 10:51pm | IP Logged

sujataHugHug

love y for this updateHugwhat a beautiful update
finally a ray of hope.Mayu ne kya entry mari hai..BY GOD..:)
 
i hope now everything ll be fine.drem sequence was fabolous,mezmerising
 
continue it soon

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Posted: 03 August 2011 at 1:46am | IP Logged
Ramazan mubarak!
Lovly part.
plz update soon.

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Posted: 03 August 2011 at 2:21am | IP Logged
suja my xam is going on aur main ye tension effort nehi kar sakti so jitne jaldi ho sake update de dena...plzzz

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Posted: 03 August 2011 at 5:18am | IP Logged
hi
the up is touchly yet hopeful
so mayank came back to his hometown and now waiting for the next day when he will leave this country and his love forever
really life have been very diskind to him
neither his family nor his friends understood him
only nupur was there in his life but now she was going away from him
it really painful to see him like this
here nupur's state is also like this she too going through the same phase of life
for her family she is sacficing her love her life
but in this tragic up also the romantic esence which u added is really impressive
i must say my student is inproving LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLgood keep it upClap
why parents dont understand our feelings
anyways the last part is really intresting have to wait what is the matter with neil
cont soon and pm me


Edited by ronojoy_ria - 03 August 2011 at 5:23am

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Posted: 03 August 2011 at 6:02am | IP Logged
very nice part suja...
fabulous...
wow i loved this update...
very touching...and the last bit...wow exciting...!!!!

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Posted: 03 August 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
fantastic update
they were going through sooo much pain and heart-broken n shattered.
the FB part soo sweet..luved mayur
the last part brought smile on may face:-)
plzzz update sooon 

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Posted: 03 August 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged
suja wht a update atleast it reduced sum pain...but the way u described theire past uff amazing..how mch they loved each other... but i cant see mayank in pain...
he is shattered completely...
mai kisi ko khush i nai daisakta... uff Cry this made me cry...
chaloo kch tu change hua life mai,...
but wht is neil suspense? wht he is upto? wht ha has done?
itna suspense rakhoo gi tu  yar heart fail na huayei...

i simply loved it...
thanks for the beautiful story...

love ya dearest...

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