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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 79)

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Posted: 02 August 2011 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
NupurTum ye shadi nahi kar sakyi
Aray Wha wHa wha mera sher kya dhmakadar entry Ki  ha
Per suja agar agla update ma mujha shock nahi laga na to tum shock ke lia tayar ho jao
Thanks for pm
cont soon 

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SujaLuvsMayurdrfizaahmed

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Posted: 02 August 2011 at 1:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by -Faria-

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res Party


Akhon main asu k liye tu party de rahe hai- fizaaa what is this??
yeah ansoo mjhy baray aziiz hain
yaar update mil raha hai yeah hi buhat hai...karachi mein pani ki kami hai...suja ny rolla rola ker pori kerdi


pher tou aj tera karachi dubne wale hai
suja ki jaan khatre main hai
main ab killer KALTU  se contact kar rahi hu
wo GUN lekar ready hai

aur mein mayank k sath america ja rahi hoon ...us ko ek supprt ki zaroorat hai

besharam- mayank ki saath sirf nuypur jayegi- tu nehi

tu jab tak woh nhi mein hi sahiLOL...kam se kam meray hotay hoo nupur ko koi daar tu nhi hoga...states mein kya pata larkiyoon k .
uff bechara mera mayank ..itna dard k ufff


@ Fari : ye update tere liye special hai...or mujhe lagta hai tune special scene pe dhyan nhi diaWink...dnt worry hota hai...akhir teri umar bhi ho gyi haiLOL


@ Fiza : tu states ja rahi hai Mayank k sath...haila...ye to mujhe pata nhi thaShocked...hmmm...lagta hai mujhe story change karna paregaOuch...shayad nupur ki jagah fiza ahmed likhna paregaTongue

par ek baat to hai...maine tere karachi ko sukhe se bacha liyaLOL


faria ki umer hogai hai...lol
hay hay humaray asay naseeb kaha ...mayank tu nupur k hi hai...
mein doob gai...aur ek sur update as tu doob k marja gi ...ufff

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valliyahSujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 02 August 2011 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
you know today i was wondering if i missed your update

nice -thanks for the pm

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SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 02 August 2011 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
waiting for twistTongue

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SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 02 August 2011 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
part uno
heyyy sis sachi mein loved da first part to core na !!Hug
sope Mayu with his family going to west bengal n he lost in his own world
looking out window
n lol loved da part where hiz sister Gunjan waz like Bhaiyya iz lost when his mother told him to close the window since it waz soo hot outside
n den his dad sed he lost in Raja Rani dreamzz LOL
nice part na
loved da title too, sachi mein gr88 work na sis Hug
-Linu


Edited by .PINK. - 02 August 2011 at 1:53pm

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part 2

awww diz partzz choo beautfully written, sachi mein Suja loved reading it na
sope Mayu in da garden n Nupz there too, n he caught her leg by mistake ROFL
one thing I don't understand
whoz Jetumoni??
waised loved it, sope Mayu'z parent sed dey have to go back
but den he insisted staying there where "his girl" waz LOL
awww I just love dat he already feelz attracted towrdz her na !!
now kant wait to read more !!!
-Linu

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part 3
awww diz partzz choo cutee na sis, loadzz of wordzz I dunn understand since my hindi/urdu weak :(
but wat I understood waz choo cutee na
sope Mayur felling in love with Nupz more n morE
n he alwayzz saying dat he shouldn't b thinking like diz,
dunno y na, but den in end did upz trip :S
well den dey say blue bird n Mayur tried finding it, n den it flew away. but lovely part na Suja, loved reading it!
-Linu

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Posted: 02 August 2011 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
nyc ff ...luvd it

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