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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 62)

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Posted: 02 July 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
i didnt like the update at all... :((( dont b so cruel yaar..plzzz dont let nupur get married to some1 else..plzzz listen to ur readers yaar...there r thousand of other way out to teach her father a lesson...but dont do such a mistake..

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chandu-mayu

sujata I hate you. aur kitna pain dogi mayank ko. plz dont separate mayur. mayank will die.




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Originally posted by Auroni.92

Yeh kya kiya...Mayur ko separate kar diya...Mayank ws so much hurt...Aur kitna sahega vo...
And now ur saying nupur ki shaadi neel se hone du...A big NO...I want a lesson for nupur's father but not nupur-neel marriage's cost...Plz reunite my mayur...




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I just wanted to tell u, plz trust meSmile

Originally posted by DhanakZ

is it necessary for Giving Nupur's Father a big lesson Nupur Have to marry that stupid Neel
No never ever  plz plz dont separate Mayur na plz plz
Thanks for pm
cont soon




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I just wanted to tell u, plz trust meSmile...  something big ll waiting for uSmile
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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 9:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SamiraARTiMAYUR

Suja u said bare Mayur's sepration for while but this's geting hard to bare dear
i really want big lessen for nups father
if u want to go a head neel n nups shaadi atleast till the mandip
but expose something big about neel which he can't have our nupur plzzz Suja
hun don't get me wrong this's ur story n realy love this verry much
so far the story was fantastic wether is sad or happy parts
n ur fabulous writer but i love to read this FF in Mayur's shaadi instead neel-nupur
but i'll leave u to it n happy to read watever u decide for us hun Big smile
back the update was heart-wrenching
n well written felt vrry bad for mayu he was so heartbroken in nups action
waiting next part soon insha-Allah
n thanks for the pm
 



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I knw, its very difficult to bare Mayur separation, but this is just a part of this story.
n...I just wanted to tell u, plz trust meSmile...  something big ll waiting for uSmile
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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Ho gaya???????????Angry
tujhe tsalli mil gayi?????AngryAngry
u gave two two heart attack on a single day...AngryAngryAngry
Angry
jo bhi tera dil chahe kar-i wont complain abtit...
Nupur ki shaadi neela, pila ,hara jis ki bhi saath tera dil chahe kara de...-mera kya...
sirf meri myank ko dukh maat de...CryCryCry


Suja - i really hate u...AngryOuchCry




Thank u so much for ur precious comment.Smile
Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile
I knw, k tu bht gussa hai...bt Mayur separation is just a part of this story.
n...I just wanted to tell u, plz trust meSmile...  something big ll waiting for uSmile
lolz...main Nupur ki shadi pila ya hara se nhi Neel se karwana chahti huTongue
so SORRY for givign u so much pain.Ouch
Thanks for hating meBig smile
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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

faria plan kiya hai...
 
res...
wil coment whn i'll b able to...subha subha itny shooq se khola update ...aur my heart is sinking...
 
edited
 
Suja u wrote it so beautifully tht...i just cant get out of Mayank's hurt...
 
firstly i thought how diffcult it will b for nupur to tell all this to mayank n i was waitng for her to console him...
 
but thn..the shock for mayank...his family complety disown him...ahh...thw world got shatered n on tht moment th only person whom he can have to cry with ...came with a news so wrongly for me...tht she even has nthing to do with him...
his blank ness ...his pain...he died there ...right there...n i just cant hold my self...u know i read it while giving breaks ,...as i cant take it...
nupur is too going through pain but he has never ever got anythng in his life...the only person he was trying to gather aroung him ...left like sand in hands...
 
 
as reader...agr tu nupur k moo se yeah bolwaly ti k us ny scarfy kiya..aur woh dono ek dosray ko console kerlaytay tu kiya ho ta
 
as writer: i so glad i have a frnd like u who can actually just make ur heart stoped with pain with her words...Clap...im looking fwd to it...but holding my heart...as i know loads of pain is cuming up...
 
u know this is the only update of this ff...i just read once...cause i dont have tht courage...CryCry
 



Thank u so much for ur precious comment.Smile
Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile
I knw, its very difficult to bare Mayur separation, but this is just a part of this story.
n...I just wanted to tell u, plz trust meSmile...  something big is waiting for uSmile
mujhe pata hai...agar Mayur ek dusre ko console karte to story kuch aur hi hota...par main Nupur's father n future pe concentrate karna chahti hun...isliye ye sab jaruri tha.Embarrassed
so SORRY for giving u so much pain.Ouch
m glad that u could feel d pain which Mayank have been suffering since chilhood...n Nupur just adding his pain.Ouch
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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 9:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pearl10

i hate u...hw can u separate mayur?? Shocked they will die...pls jaldi mila jo unko...i cant see them in pain..Unhappy 



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Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile
I knw, its very difficult to bare Mayur separation, but this is just a part of this story.
n...I just wanted to tell u, plz trust meSmile...  something big is waiting for uSmile
Thank u so much for hating meSmile

Originally posted by arjun-forever

an old song dedicated to mayur...
 
YEH KYA HUA...
KAISE HUA...
 
please update the next parts soon...



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awww...this song is perfectly fitted on Mayur in current situationSmile
its so heartbrokenCry

Originally posted by crazymayurian

no comments

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 9:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ridi_onasis

ya you r right this siggy was really bad...ami sopneo ei jinish chinta korte chai na..r tumi amare dekhaiteso...how could u...shob taratari thik koira dau ...ami eto kosto porte parbo na...

b/w this is for Mayank...one of my favorite song from Rabindranath

Dukkho jodi na pabe toh dukkho tomar gusbe kobe?

Bishke bisher dhaho diye dohon kore marte hobe||

Jolte de tor aguntare, bhoy kisu na korish tare,

Chai hoye she nibve jokhon jholbe na r kovu tobe||

Eriye tare palash na re, dhora dite hosh na kator|

Dirgo pothe chute chute dirgo korish dhukkho ta tor|

Morte morte morontare shesh kore de ekebare,

Tarpor she jibon eshe apon ashon aponi lobe||



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I knw, its very difficult to bare Mayur separation, but this is just a part of this story.Smile
Ei Rabindra Sangeet ta amar khub priyo...tabe ektu wait karo...jaldi sab kichu thik hoye jabe... plz trust meSmile

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayur_eternal

Oh no!!this is really distressingOuch
Mayur getting separated..Cry
pls dnt do it Suja..Mayur are meant to be together


 

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I knw, its very difficult to bare Mayur separation, but this is just a part of this story.
Yes, Mayur r meant to be togetherSmile   
Just wait... n I hope, u ll like in future story.Smile

Originally posted by ronojoy_ria

hi
the up is good
so naupur agreed to marry neel just for her father's sake
why always daughters ahve to sacrifice
i hate this thing
anywyas how  can shipa and avinash  make gunjan the new  MD of their company when mayank is more capable and deserving of that candidate of the post
they are openly humiliating mayank
why they r doing this i doubt that mayank is not their real son
poor mayank today he lost his nupur also
i am feeling really bad for both of them
plz cont soona dn pm me



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I knw, its very difficult to bare Mayur separation...even i also felt bad for them.
but this is just a part of this story.
so, just wait n watchSmile

Originally posted by -moona-

plz dnt separare MayUr, i cant see them like this..
after reading this update i am ny able to stop my tears..
plz i dnt want their separation, i cant see mayank like this



 

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Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile
I knw, its very difficult to bare Mayur separation, but this is just a part of this story.
Mayur r meant to be togetherSmile
so SORRY for giving u so much painCry   





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