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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 59)

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
sujata I hate you. aur kitna pain dogi mayank ko. plz dont separate mayur. mayank will die.

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
Yeh kya kiya...Mayur ko separate kar diya...Mayank ws so much hurt...Aur kitna sahega vo...
And now ur saying nupur ki shaadi neel se hone du...A big NO...I want a lesson for nupur's father but not nupur-neel marriage's cost...Plz reunite my mayur...

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
Suja u said bare Mayur's sepration for while but this's geting hard to bare dear
i really want big lessen for nups father
if u want to go a head neel n nups shaadi atleast till the mandip
but expose something big about neel which he can't have our nupur plzzz Suja
hun don't get me wrong this's ur story n realy love this verry much
so far the story was fantastic wether is sad or happy parts
n ur fabulous writer but i love to read this FF in Mayur's shaadi instead neel-nupur
but i'll leave u to it n happy to read watever u decide for us hun Big smile
back the update was heart-wrenching
n well written felt vrry bad for mayu he was so heartbroken in nups action
waiting next part soon insha-Allah
n thanks for the pm
 

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
is it necessary for Giving Nupur's Father a big lesson Nupur Have to marry that stupid Neel
No never ever  plz plz dont separate Mayur na plz plz
Thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 5:19pm | IP Logged
Ho gaya???????????Angry
tujhe tsalli mil gayi?????AngryAngry
u gave two two heart attack on a single day...AngryAngryAngry
Angry
jo bhi tera dil chahe kar-i wont complain abtit...
Nupur ki shaadi neela, pila ,hara jis ki bhi saath tera dil chahe kara de...-mera kya...
sirf meri myank ko dukh maat de...CryCryCry


Suja - i really hate u...AngryOuchCry


Edited by -Faria- - 29 June 2011 at 10:54pm

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
faria plan kiya hai...
 
res...
wil coment whn i'll b able to...subha subha itny shooq se khola update ...aur my heart is sinking...
 
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Suja u wrote it so beautifully tht...i just cant get out of Mayank's hurt...
 
firstly i thought how diffcult it will b for nupur to tell all this to mayank n i was waitng for her to console him...
 
but thn..the shock for mayank...his family complety disown him...ahh...thw world got shatered n on tht moment th only person whom he can have to cry with ...came with a news so wrongly for me...tht she even has nthing to do with him...
his blank ness ...his pain...he died there ...right there...n i just cant hold my self...u know i read it while giving breaks ,...as i cant take it...
nupur is too going through pain but he has never ever got anythng in his life...the only person he was trying to gather aroung him ...left like sand in hands...
 
 
as reader...agr tu nupur k moo se yeah bolwaly ti k us ny scarfy kiya..aur woh dono ek dosray ko console kerlaytay tu kiya ho ta
 
as writer: i so glad i have a frnd like u who can actually just make ur heart stoped with pain with her words...Clap...im looking fwd to it...but holding my heart...as i know loads of pain is cuming up...
 
u know this is the only update of this ff...i just read once...cause i dont have tht courage...CryCry
 


Edited by drfizaahmed - 30 June 2011 at 10:13am

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Posted: 30 June 2011 at 12:19am | IP Logged
i hate u...hw can u separate mayur?? Shocked they will die...pls jaldi mila jo unko...i cant see them in pain..Unhappy 

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Posted: 30 June 2011 at 12:52am | IP Logged
ya you r right this siggy was really bad...ami sopneo ei jinish chinta korte chai na..r tumi amare dekhaiteso...how could u...shob taratari thik koira dau ...ami eto kosto porte parbo na...

b/w this is for Mayank...one of my favorite song from Rabindranath

Dukkho jodi na pabe toh dukkho tomar gusbe kobe?

Bishke bisher dhaho diye dohon kore marte hobe||

Jolte de tor aguntare, bhoy kisu na korish tare,

Chai hoye she nibve jokhon jholbe na r kovu tobe||

Eriye tare palash na re, dhora dite hosh na kator|

Dirgo pothe chute chute dirgo korish dhukkho ta tor|

Morte morte morontare shesh kore de ekebare,

Tarpor she jibon eshe apon ashon aponi lobe||




Edited by ridi_onasis - 30 June 2011 at 5:17am

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