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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 58)

SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -moona-

plz dnt separate mayUr i want them togetherUnhappy

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dont be sad...i also dnt want to separate mayur.

Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Omg wht a promo

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Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Wth how can u separate them

Plzzz don't do tht

Font soon

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SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha

sujaaa...wht a ff...  
i just fall in love wid it...WinkWink...
.wht a beautiful title...god...Clap ...loved it...
story line, the way u beautifully  portrayed the naturl scenes...i just losted...
now update...

to see mayank as a shy person was lil bit surprinig but then he changed coz of nupur...    beautiful...dil ker raha tha k baar baar yeh ff padho...and most important part which i loved it is the nature talk... how romantic and soothong it was...Day Dreaming Day Dreaming ...
i just hope tht nupurs father would forget their son and daughter in law...but now wht will happen to mayank and nupur...?/?Unhappy
uff...hops tht no one creates hurdles between their relation...
suja loved it to the core truly...
update soon...where r u?
pls aab aur w8 na karao...SmileSmile

Day Dreaming

Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this FFSmile

awww...i just love ur comment...n m very happy that u like this ff ...m really feel gald.Smile

thanks dear.Hug

nw everyone like nature at first, i was very very much nervous, bcoz i thot, nature talk was so much childish...n nobody loved this. bt m totally surprised that u all like nature talk more than this story.Tongue
its realy surprising for me.LOL
dnt worry dear.
i ll update soon.
thanks again for ur commentHug

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SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 8:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by palz_ArTi4ever

why did u do this yaar??plzz unite mayur asap..this is so heart wrenching n disappointing to read tragic updates again n again...

Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile

i knw, u dnt like this tragic updates...par kya karen...its only for mayur...mayur separation ll teach nupur's dad a good lesson.Smile
so just wait n watch n enjoyHug
m sure, after tragic updates end, u ll surely happyBig smile

Originally posted by love.mayurarti

superb update
bt plzzz...dnt separate mayur

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i also dnt like mayur theres on other choice...plz bare this separation, i request uEmbarrassed

Originally posted by nightdreamer_mn

Omg...Shocked...shockin one...who's dis neel...Angry..frm he cam nw KABAAB MAI HADDI...
hop evrything get well soon...want mayur 2gether...

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just wait...Neel's identity ll reveal soonWink
drmaha IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 9:28am | IP Logged

buhat saber kerliya...but still couldnt get tht meetha fruit...Cry

 jaldi update karoo suja...

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Faria. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha


buhat saber kerliya...but still couldnt get tht meetha fruit...Cry

 jaldi update karoo suja...

koi faida nehi
koi humare nehi sunti...CryCry
sab kapni ap man mane karte rehte hai

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drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

chappl...sirf chapppl...tu mil mjhy...PC utha ker maroo gi...
 after wht like ages i was reading it ...n i was crying... was extrmly painful...the pain she was going the helplessnes...n thn the song..waoo i m in  love with the poetry...he was just telling het the depth of hs love..enjoying her inside...
n there she was dying with pain in knowing wht holds for him...
dont take away frm him the only person who loves him..plsss
it was amzing...
i was holding my self but thn the nature...
there talks made me cry...
true God never answer...
but i trust there love...moreover i trust u...
n i knwo u love urslf...tu tu marna nhi chay gi meray hath se
but plss update soon...else mein mar jao gi intezar mein...
lov ya
it was n outstndingly beutiful update...with emotions at there peeak

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OMG!!! tu mujhe chappal or PC se maregiCry 
phir to main mar jaungiCry...aur phir tera update kaun karegaLOL
bol...ab jawab deLOL

FIza, i just love ur comment...thanks a lot dear of liking this song...actually its one of my fav song...aur wo bhi Shaan k voice meDay Dreaming 
hayyyDay Dreaming
i just loved his voiceDay DreamingHeart
awww...u were crying...plz dont cry...tujhpe ye suit nahi karta.Embarrassed
bilkul churail dikhti hogi tuLOL
i ll update tujhe marna nhi paregaTongue
bt plz i request u to bare this separation...nups marriage ll brought a big twist in this story.

tu pc se nhi marny wali dont worry
haay me too was so lost in the song aur tu...
mein soch lay jab chuaril hoon tu nupur ki marriage...tera ff k tu mein kuch ker nhi sakti but mein tujhy tu buhat kuch kah sakti hoon...but i trust u morethn tht i trust this u as writer , i m prtty much looking fwd to where its gonna lead

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SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Thank you so much for linking this story.Smile

Thank u so much guys for pressing the Like tab and also urs precious comments.Smile
i knw, m late...actually very late. i had some important work.
and m here and also with a update...i hope u like it...Smile

waiting for ur commentSmile

i know, after reading this update, everyone planned to murder me.LOL

but, i just wanted to say, just wait n watch, everything will b fine soon.Embarrassed

till then, enjoy this update. Smile

update on next pageSmile


Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 29 June 2011 at 12:45pm

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SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 12:22pm | IP Logged

<sorry, for this bad sigEmbarrassed>

Nupur was sitting on the bed, her head rested on bed stand, her red puffy eyes were the witness of sleepless teary night; her face was dull, but so many thoughts running in her mind. Today was a big day, the day of fulfillin her decision which was very difficult, but necessary.

She glanced at the watch, its breakfast time. Her father must be awaked and waiting for breakfast.

She wasn't in mood to cook, but she couldn't ignore her responsibilities.

After sometime, she went to garden, she notice, her father was very light mood, showering plants while humming a song.

She forcefully pasted a big smile on her face, "Good Morning Baba, your breakfast."

He turned behind and saw a happy Nupur. Now he become more happy.

"Good Morning beta." He turned off the water tap and sat on the chair, "so, whats today's menu?"

"nothing special, but be ready for a special launch." Nupur said in full nautanki.

Mr.Sengupta bites the toast, "you are looking very happy today. whats the matter?"

"nothing Baba" she sighted, look straight to him, "Baba, I have made a decision that- that-" a lump formed in her throat to chocked her voice, tear formed in her eyes and her heart screaming  to stop her to say anything further, but with great force she kill her inner voice, she made all of them stop, "that, I am ready to marry Neel."

"really?" her father almost jumping in joy.

Nupur nodded with a false smile on her lips, but only she knew, how difficult to stretch her lips to show her smile.

Mr.Sengupta was very happy, "main abhi Neel ko call karke ye good news deta hun!" he quickly finished the breakfast and entered into house to call Neel.

Alone tear slipped from corner of her eye, she quickly removed it, "sorry" she whisper before leave from there to do another big pending work.


 "Baba, can I go to Jethumoni's house?"

Mr.Sengupta put down the receiver on the cradle and turned. Nupur standing there, she lowered her eyes, she was doodling with hem of her dupatta.

"offcourse beta" he placed his hand on her head, "I have full trust on you."

"Thanks Baba."

Nupur went to Jethumoni's house. She already took her decision for sake of her father, but now she wanted to face Mayank, either she'll break down '. Its very difficult to hold her emotion longer.

She was very surprised to see some decoration in Jethumoni's house, Shilpa aunty was very busy, constantly scolding servants; as usual Gunjan was nowhere in this scene and Abinash uncle busy in phone to inviting someone, but in her most surprise, Mayank wasn't there too.

Nupur wonder, where is he??

"arey Nupur" Shilpa now notice her, "please, help me beta." She said.

Nupur nodded, "aunty, ye sab kisliye?" she asked while decorating a wall, "aaj koi special din hai kya?"

"haan beta, aaj bht special din hai" Shilpa grinned, "tum aaj party me jarur aana. Abinash will invite you later, but I inviting you personally, and please, invite your friends also."

Nupur smile, "ok aunty."

The decoration was almost finished, the hall looking heavenly '.. stylish sitting arrangement with dance floor and disco lights. Everything looking so rich and gorgeous '.. Shilpa and Abinash was very happy to see the final result.

Nupur tried to asked about Mayank, but before that, Abinash called Mayank and asked him about someting '. After listened their conversation Nupur understood that Mayank wasn't at home right now, he'll come before party as he going to town for some arrangements.

Nupur was disappointed and leave from there.




At the party.


Nupur entred into the party. She wore a simple white anarkali, her braided hair looked awesome in pearl-setting hairpin, and she was holding a bouquet.

The party in full swing. The disco lights were flashing brightly '.. the party was so crowded, but most of the people in the dance floor '. Shacking their hips in the madness of music with their partner '.. some peoples were sitting on the temporary bar and enjoying their drink, and she notice, very few people, they look like reporters were roaming around the party.

Nupur stopped for few second on the doorstep, as she was not familiar of this kind of party, and she wasn't feel nice to see people drink openly. She feels very uncomfortable in this atmosphere '. Her eyes roamed every corner of the party, she was searching for Mayank, but he was no where, finally she spotted Shilpa and went near her to handed over the bouquet. But Shilpa smile, "Nupur, give this flower to Gunjan, today is her day."

Is today Gunjan's Birthday??? Nupur was confused.

She sheepishly handed the flower to Gunjan and stood in corner.

Suddenly someone poked her shoulder. She turned '. Its Pranjal.

"Pranjal, tu yahan kaise?" she was surprised to see him.

"wo '. Mayank ne invite kia hai" he smiles.

"oh" she smile faintly, and her eyes again searching for Mayank.

"are you looking for Mayank??" Pranjal asked, with naughty smile playing in his lips.

"haan-wo-nahi '. I ' I just wonder '" she stammered, but Mayank's name made her heartbeat faster, not for love, but for fear. She was now fear to face him, morning's confidence was finished '. But she knew she have to face him by any cost. Her thought clearly showon her face.

"what happened Nupur? Any problem?" Pranjal asked in concern.

"no, its ok." She smile, and it could help to hide her dull face, "bdw, where is Mayank?"

"oh don't ask me!" he said in sarcasm, "the party is running, everyone enjoying, but Mr.Mayank is very busy to inspecting foods. He's a fool ' arey yaar, you handed this work to one of your servant na." he said in annoy, "par nhi '. khud ki party koi miss karta hai kya!!"

"sach kaha tune, bht bara fool hai wo!" Nupur smile painfully.

Before Pranjal could react, suddenly the music stopped, the crowed start buzzing as the hall become dark slowly, only a spotlight there, which following Mr.Abinash Roychoudhury on dance floor, holding a mike.

"Ladies and Gentlemen" He starts, "I know you all are surprised of my sudden interruption in between the emtertainment '. I am so sorry for that. But I know after knew the reason, you'll enjoy double." He stopped for a second, then continue, "today is a big day for me and my company. Actually I am facing some difficulties to handle all of my business together '.. arey ab main thora buddha jo ho gaya hun" he chuckled, " So, with permission of my beautiful better half and business partner Shilpa, we are going to announce our next MD '. So, please welcome our new MD miss Gunjan Roychoudhury."

Gunajn come into the spotlight with huge smile on her face, she was standing between Abinash and Shilpa.

The crowed broke in applause.

Nupur and Pranjal was shocked to hear this news ' "this is wrong! This is a clear insult of Mayank!" Nupur muttered, Pranjal also surprised, "Nupur, did Mayank abdicate his family business?"

"I don't know." She said in low voice.

Reports are asking questions to Gunajn and she answering their queries with a big smile. Abinash and Shilpa looking at their daughter with a proud look.

Nupur felt restless, she felt like go and asked Abhinash about Mayank '. Why not he become MD?? He has a great ability, then why they abandoned him. Suddenly her eyes a sight of Mayank, who was standing on the doorstep, looking blankly at the stage '. His face was clam, but his eyes were conveyed pain.

Nupur's heart was aching to see Mayank like this. She want to run and hug him tightly to ease all his pain '. But she was helpless. She didn't want to listen to her heart. She was listening her mind amd stood there silently, thinking about Mayank.


Nupur come back from reverie as someone snapped fingers in front of her. She was in great shock to see him '. Its Neeladri. She didn't aspect him in this party, but in next moment her shock converted into disgust. She turned her face to other side as she didn't want to talk to him.   

Neel's eyes are sparkled in anger, but gulp down his anger and pasted a broad smile on his face, "Hey, Nupur. You look gorgeous in white." Nupur still silence, but Neel continue, "do you know, all guys in this party are burning in jealousy of me!"

Nupur couldn't help, but look at him in questing eyes.

"arey Nupur. You are looking breathtaking today and they wanted you as their partner, but I know, I am your only partner." He look naughtily, "right wifey."

"I am NOT your WIFE!" Nupur hissed.

"ok ok sorry, its my fault" he apologies with a smile, " so my would be wife '.. can you dance with me?" he forward his hand.

Before she could react Mayank entre into the scene.

"hey Nupur, kya kar rahi ho?" he smile, then his eyes fell on Neel, "ye-ye kaun hai?"he asked innocently,"tumhara friend?"

"hello dude, I am Neeladri Basu." They shook their hands, "I am Nupur's would be husband, humari kal hi shadi pakki hui hai!" Neel grinned as he side hugged her.

"WHAT!!!" Mayank was totally shocked ''' this news was totally unexpected. He couldn't think Nupur's marriage with another guy. It seems like nightmare.

"yes dude, aur lagta hai, Nupur ne tumhe bataya nhi."

"nahi '. Wo '. Actually '." Mayank stammered, he didn't know how to react, like someone stabbed him. He was surprised of Nupur silence all the time.

"why Nupur so silence?" he thought, " will she agree of this marriage unwillingly??? But why Nupur didn't tell me about this??"

His thought interrupted by Neel, "you know dude, she was so kind. At first she refused of this marriage, but when I told her about my love for her, then she happily agreed."

This was another blow in Mayank's face, "Nupur ye shadi apne marzi se kar rahi hai?!"

On the other hand, Nupur was the silence viewer. She could clearly saw the extreme hurt on Mayank's eyes. She was in terrible state '.. she wanted to give Neel a thank that he did exactly what she wanted to do '. But the other hand, she start hating herself for hurting Mayank!

Nupur looked up and saw Mayank gaze on her. He looked so vulnerable '. So many question, disbelief, heartbreak mixing with extreme pain and utmost hurt. She broke the eyelock as she could bear his gaze on her '.. it piercing her heart. She want to run from there.

And again Neel become her rescuer, "can you dance with me wifey?"

"sure sweetheart" Nupur placed her hand on his, "excuse us Mayank." She approach to dance floor with Neel, leaving behind  heartbreaking Mayank, who didn't know what was his fault!!


"this song dedicated to Miss Nupur from Mr. Neel."

Mayank startled of this announcement. He look at the dance floor and saw Neel held Nupur in his arms.


Hooo '. Ho Ho Ho '.. Hooo

Tu Hi Ehsason Mein '.. Tu Hi Jazbation Mein

Tu Hi Lamhaton Mein '. Tu Hi Din Raaton Mein


The song started. Neel smile at Nupur sweetly before asked her for dance.. On other side of the dance floor, two people meet very first time and also like each other from their first meeting, they are Pranjal and Gunjan.


Bkhuda Tumhi Ho Har Jagah Tumhi Ho

Haan Mein Dekhu Jahan Jab

Uss Jagah Tumhi Ho


From very first line, Atif Aslam slowly creating the magic. Neel placed his hand on her waist and pulled her near. Nupur was little shocked and in anticipation her eyes fell on Mayank. He stood there like statue '. Constantly looking at Nupur with blank expression.

Her heart was aching to see him like that, she knows how hurt he was, but she was helpless '. "this is all for your good Mayank." She thought, and placed her hands around Neel's neck with a sweet smile.


Ye Jahan Tumhi Ho   Wo Jahan Tumhi Ho

Iss Zameen Se Falak Ke

Darmiyaan ''.. Tumhi Ho

Tumhi Ho Beshumaar ' Tum Hi Ho

Tum Hi Ho Mujh Me Haan

Tum Hi Ho ''. Tum Hi Ho


Pranjal and Gunjan dancing in rhythm. They are talking constantly '. They have least interest in dancing, their all focus on each other.

Pranjal twirled her slowly '.. Gunjan's soft hair brushed against his face. He feels like heaven.


Kaise Bataye Tumhe  Aur Kis Tarah Yeh

Kitna Tumhe Hum Chahte Hai


Mayank stood their silently. Nupur's marriage was nothing but a death for him. After listened Neel, he still had little hope. But he lost his all hope after saw them dancing so closely, as if they are in very much love. Nupur snaked her arms around Neel '.. he also closed his arms around her waist '. They are so close '. Their nose almost touching '. Neel whispered something in her ear and Nupur smile shyly.


Saaya Bhi Tera Dikhe To Paas Jake

Usmein Simat Hum Jaate Hai


Pranjal closed his arms around her, and pulled her closer '' a strand of hair disturbing her, Prajanl slowly placed behind her ear. Gunjan blushed before placed her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes.

Abinash and Shilpa saw their daughter in love with Pranjal. They chuckled happily to see their new blossoming love.


Raasta Tum Hi Ho Rhnuman Tum Hi Ho

Jiski Khwahish Hai Humko Wo Panah Tum Hi Ho

Tumhi Ho Beshumaar '.. Tum Hi Ho

Tum Hi Ho Mujhme Haan '.. Tum Hi Ho


"Mayank, I hate you '. You forgot my chocolate" Nupur pouted before crossed her arms against her chest.

"Nupur, listen to me ' please." Mayank pleaded, "I am sorry Shona. Please forgive me!" he's making cute puppy face.

"I wont forgive you '. I am very angry." She turned, facing her back to him.

Mayank hugged her from behind, "my Shona is angry with me!" he kissed her cheek lovingly, "so you hates me?" Nupur blushed, but nodded in yes. Mayank shows her a big chocolate box, "and now?" Nupur's face lit up, she hugged him tightly, "I still hate you '. You stupid."


Tu Hi Ehsason Mein Tu Hi Jazbaton Mein

Tu Hi Lamhaton Mein Tu Hi Din Raaton Mein


A drop of tear slipped down from his eyes as Mayank remember his lovable memory. He quickly removed before anyone notice, but he couldn't hide it from Nupur.


Kaise Bataye Tumhe Shab Mein Tumhare

Khawaab Haseen Jo Aate Hai

Kaise Batye Tumhe Lamhe Wo Saare

Jism Ko Jo Mekhate Hai

Iftida Tum Hi Ho Intehaan Tum Hi Ho

Tum Ho Jeene Ka Maksad Aur Wajah Tum Hi Ho


His tear torn her heart into pieces '. She couldn't control her own tear. She hugged Neel before he could notice her tear. "I am sorry Mayank!" she pleading silently and removed her tears.

You only hurt the person you love the most! How true, Nupur thought as her tears rolling down from her cheek '.. she had just doen that. She gave Mayank pain whom deeply loved her '.. may be true love wasn't in her fate.


Bakhuda  Tumhi Ho Har Jagah Tum Hi Ho

Haan Mein Dekhu Jahan Jab Uss Jagah Tumi Ho

Yeh Jahan Tumhi Ho Wo Jahan Tum Hi Ho

Iss Zameen Se Falak Ke

Darmiyaan ''.. Tumhi Ho

Tumhi Ho Behsumaar '''  Tum Hi Ho

Tum Hi Ho Mujhme Haan

Tum Hi Ho'''..Tum Hi Ho


Ho Ho Ho '' Hooo

(Lyrics Credit :

They come back to reality as everyone applause.


Guys, here is the update.Smile

i knw, after read this update, u all put ur best effort to murder me.Embarrassed

bt guys, just wait...everything has a reason.

dont you want someone teach Nupur's father a gud lesson???!!!

i know, u all want this.

so guys, Nupur ki shadi Neel k sath hone do ...please.

and i promise, i ll give u a big shock.

and one more thing...u must be wonder that why i used a Hindi song, as i ve mostly used Rabindra Sangeet for this FF.

and d reason behind it is Gunjan...bcz its her party, and her father tried his best to made this party according to her taste...n she dnt like Rabindra Sangeet. 

till then...enjoy this update.Smile

waiting for ur comment.Smile

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 25 October 2011 at 8:59am

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