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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 58)

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --jiya--

di!! i just wanted to say that i love you and will always do..Hug
and dis is ur rishwat for not separating mayurEmbarrassed
awesome update di!! nice translation ridi!!Clap
~jiya~



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Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile

Jiya, u r giving me bribeShocked

i wont aspect this form u...bt dnt worry...i already take ur bribe.

i love u too my sweet sisHug

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -moona-

plz dnt separate mayUr i want them togetherUnhappy


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dont be sad...i also dnt want to separate mayur.


Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Omg wht a promo

Font soon


Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Wth how can u separate them

Plzzz don't do tht

Font soon



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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha

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edited:
 
sujaaa...wht a ff...  
 
i just fall in love wid it...WinkWink...
 
.wht a beautiful title...god...Clap ...loved it...
story line, the way u beautifully  portrayed the naturl scenes...i just losted...
 
now update...

to see mayank as a shy person was lil bit surprinig but then he changed coz of nupur...    beautiful...dil ker raha tha k baar baar yeh ff padho...and most important part which i loved it is the nature talk... how romantic and soothong it was...Day Dreaming Day Dreaming ...
 
i just hope tht nupurs father would forget their son and daughter in law...but now wht will happen to mayank and nupur...?/?Unhappy
uff...hops tht no one creates hurdles between their relation...
 
suja loved it to the core truly...
update soon...where r u?
pls aab aur w8 na karao...SmileSmile




Day Dreaming



Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this FFSmile

awww...i just love ur comment...n m very happy that u like this ff ...m really feel gald.Smile

thanks dear.Hug

nw everyone like nature talk...bt at first, i was very very much nervous, bcoz i thot, nature talk was so much childish...n nobody loved this. bt m totally surprised that u all like nature talk more than this story.Tongue
its realy surprising for me.LOL
dnt worry dear.
i ll update soon.
thanks again for ur commentHug

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 8:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by palz_ArTi4ever

why did u do this yaar??plzz unite mayur asap..this is so heart wrenching n disappointing to read tragic updates again n again...


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i knw, u dnt like this tragic updates...par kya karen...its only for mayur...mayur separation ll teach nupur's dad a good lesson.Smile
so just wait n watch n enjoyHug
m sure, after tragic updates end, u ll surely happyBig smile

Originally posted by love.mayurarti

superb update
bt plzzz...dnt separate mayur


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i also dnt like mayur separation...bt theres on other choice...plz bare this separation, i request uEmbarrassed

Originally posted by nightdreamer_mn

Omg...Shocked...shockin one...who's dis neel...Angry..frm he cam nw KABAAB MAI HADDI...
hop evrything get well soon...want mayur 2gether...


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just wait...Neel's identity ll reveal soonWink
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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 9:28am | IP Logged
update...??/?Angry

buhat saber kerliya...but still couldnt get tht meetha fruit...Cry


 jaldi update karoo suja...
plshhh
Unhappy

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha

update...??/?Angry

buhat saber kerliya...but still couldnt get tht meetha fruit...Cry


 jaldi update karoo suja...
plshhh
Unhappy



koi faida nehi
koi humare nehi sunti...CryCry
sab kapni ap man mane karte rehte hai

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

chappl...sirf chapppl...tu mil mjhy...PC utha ker maroo gi...
 
 after wht like ages i was reading it ...n i was crying...
 
suja..it was extrmly painful...the pain she was going the helplessnes...n thn the song..waoo i m in  love with the poetry...he was just telling het the depth of hs love..enjoying her inside...
n there she was dying with pain in knowing wht holds for him...
dont take away frm him the only person who loves him..plsss
 
it was amzing...
i was holding my self but thn the nature...
there talks made me cry...
true God never answer...
but i trust there love...moreover i trust u...
n i knwo u love urslf...tu tu marna nhi chay gi meray hath se
 
but plss update soon...else mein mar jao gi intezar mein...
lov ya
..
it was n outstndingly beutiful update...with emotions at there peeak


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OMG!!! tu mujhe chappal or PC se maregiCry 
phir to main mar jaungiCry...aur phir tera update kaun karegaLOL
bol...ab jawab deLOL

FIza, i just love ur comment...thanks a lot dear of liking this song...actually its one of my fav song...aur wo bhi Shaan k voice meDay Dreaming 
hayyyDay Dreaming
i just loved his voiceDay DreamingHeart
awww...u were crying...plz dont cry...tujhpe ye suit nahi karta.Embarrassed
bilkul churail dikhti hogi tuLOL
i ll update soon...so tujhe marna nhi paregaTongue
bt plz i request u to bare this separation...nups marriage ll brought a big twist in this story.

tu pc se nhi marny wali dont worry
haay me too was so lost in the song aur tu...
mein soch lay jab chuaril hoon tu nupur ki marriage...tera ff k tu mein kuch ker nhi sakti but mein tujhy tu buhat kuch kah sakti hoon...but i trust u morethn tht i trust this u as writer ,..so i m prtty much looking fwd to where its gonna lead

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Thank you so much for linking this story.Smile
 
 







Thank u so much guys for pressing the Like tab and also urs precious comments.Smile
 
i knw, m late...actually very late. i had some important work.
 
and m here and also with a update...i hope u like it...Smile


waiting for ur commentSmile

i know, after reading this update, everyone planned to murder me.LOL

but, i just wanted to say, just wait n watch, everything will b fine soon.Embarrassed

till then, enjoy this update. Smile

update on next pageSmile
 

 
 
Love
sujaHeart


Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 29 June 2011 at 12:45pm

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