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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 57)

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 7:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria-soniarti

Sujal
 
fantastic update
 
loved every bit of it
 
i hate Nups dad...i dont see Mayur seperation
 
plz do something
 
do continue soon
 
 


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plz bare this mayur separation...it ll teach nupur's father a tough lesson.

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SamiraARTiMAYUR

why Suja Cry
plzzz don't seprate mayur CryCry
this was so touchin nn emotinal part
1mnt my nups was happy next her whole life was shattered
u potrayed soo beautiful their emotinal in the song
1 of them wa happy n the other was so sad
ohh my heart goes my mayur
i really hate them to see mayur in this kind situation
n the siggy u used nups face said all b4 reading
i was ready b4 i read but still it's heart-wrenching
plzzz it's request don't makemayur seprate
 my be for a while but latter happy mayur
n don't make nups to marry this NEEL
thanks or th amazin update n the pm


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Thanks for linking this song...actually this is one of my fav songStar

plz bare mayur separtion...there llb a surprise for uSmile

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 7:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DhanakZ

Plz Plz dont do this Dont separate mayur
Feeling so bad for mayur

Plz pzl My Sweet sis plz together them soon

Very beautifully Written part
thanks For pm
cont soon



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i knw, u feel bad for mayur...n m also feel bad for mayur.

bt we all are pupet of destiny...so just wait n watch.


Originally posted by Auroni.92

Oh no yeh kya ho gaya...
How cud nupur's dad do this...I dnt think neel is a good person at all...The way he staring at her and took her hand i feel slap him hard...
And nupur's father is a damn cruel person...He even shouted on udita, that lil girl...He just wants everything in his way...He shud be happy on his kids happiness...Hate him...
Poor mayu...Aab vo yeh sochega jisse bhi vo pyaar karta hai vo usse dur chala jata hai...
Plz reunite them...I cant bear nupur's pain...
Cont soon...


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i also feel bad for mayank...u r right, ab to wo yahi sochegaOuch

bt dnt worry, mayur ll together soon.Smile

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by valiyah27

U JUST CAN'T DO THIS...U R NOT ALLOWED TO...!!!



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i knw, m nt allowed, bt still i request u that plz bare this mayur separation...n it ll bring lots of happiness laterWink


Originally posted by arjun-forever

hey sujata...great update girl...but this new twist...omg!!!!...
 
thank god i read the promo and update togethere...wouldnt have been satisfied with the promo only...
 
continue sooner...
eagerly waiting...


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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 7:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by varsh-mayur

Cry pls dont seperate them...pls



Originally posted by pearl10

nooo...u cant do dis...!!!!
u r going 2 sperate mayurrr!!!!! pls dnt do dis...
 
nyways cont soon...
 
payal_


Originally posted by mahakmev

osom but why is this happening to my mayur



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Plz i request u to bare this separation...its for mayur's good.
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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

chappl...sirf chapppl...tu mil mjhy...PC utha ker maroo gi...
 
 after wht like ages i was reading it ...n i was crying...
 
suja..it was extrmly painful...the pain she was going the helplessnes...n thn the song..waoo i m in  love with the poetry...he was just telling het the depth of hs love..enjoying her inside...
n there she was dying with pain in knowing wht holds for him...
dont take away frm him the only person who loves him..plsss
 
it was amzing...
i was holding my self but thn the nature...
there talks made me cry...
true God never answer...
but i trust there love...moreover i trust u...
n i knwo u love urslf...tu tu marna nhi chay gi meray hath se
 
but plss update soon...else mein mar jao gi intezar mein...
lov ya
..
it was n outstndingly beutiful update...with emotions at there peeak


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OMG!!! tu mujhe chappal or PC se maregiCry 
phir to main mar jaungiCry...aur phir tera update kaun karegaLOL
bol...ab jawab deLOL

FIza, i just love ur comment...thanks a lot dear of liking this song...actually its one of my fav song...aur wo bhi Shaan k voice meDay Dreaming 
hayyyDay Dreaming
i just loved his voiceDay DreamingHeart
awww...u were crying...plz dont cry...tujhpe ye suit nahi karta.Embarrassed
bilkul churail dikhti hogi tuLOL
i ll update soon...so tujhe marna nhi paregaTongue
bt plz i request u to bare this separation...nups marriage ll brought a big twist in this story.

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 7:49am | IP Logged
wow are u updating now???...
please do soon...
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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 7:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ridi_onasis

tumi jodi ulta palta kisu koro na tahole tomar khbr ase...this is my one of the most favorite story...so ja korba chinta bhavna koira korba...nd eto thanks deoyar dorkar nai...nything for this sweet story...


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ami jani tomra sabai amar upar khub rege acho...tabe plz amar upar bharsa rakho, amio mayur k alada korte chaina...tabe nupur er baba-r jonno ei separation ekta bhalo sikhsha habe.Smile
so, just wait n watch n enjoyBig smile

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