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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 50)

ronojoy_ria IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 12:08am | IP Logged
hi
the up is good
so mayank and nupur met as usuall and here nupur 's dad is remembering the older days
anyways the way u portrayed nupur in the bengali saree its just awesum
mayank got mesmerised by her look wow
and nupur is was blushing
mayank took so many pics of her
but yaar who are the two person who saw mayank and nupur together
anyways we will knowing it soon in ur next up
so plz cont soon and pm me

valliyah Goldie
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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Suja do update plss...!!!
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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 5:07am | IP Logged
SUJATA Please update...
SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiya_angel

reserved!!! =)
yippee me first again =D

*edited*

m so sorry for being lateOuch
gosh!! di this was just a beautiful updateDay Dreaming... 
i loved Nupur in the traditional sareeEmbarrassed... mayank ka reaction toh banta haiLOL
loved it di... mindblowingStar

~jiya~


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u r right, nupur ko aise saree me dekh kar koi bhi flat ho sakta haiWink
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by valiyah27

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Fantabulous update...u r back with a bang...can truly visualize Nupur in traditional saree...Mayank was soo lost in her divine beauty...the scenario is soo serene n as much pure as Mayur's love for each other...agn the sweet part is soo adorable...accha is this Niladri a new twist or what...don't u dare bring any Nila da in between Mayur else im with Fiza n Faria u knowLOL...hope destiny or should i say U don't play crucial game with our innocent sweet n cute couple...curious to know who the two ppl were...cont soon...!!!


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u r right, nupur ko aise saree me dekh kar koi bhi flat ho sakta haiWink...aur mayank already flat ho cuka haiLOL

lolz...Fiza n Fari k sath ab tum bhiOuchOuch
ab to pakka nahi bachungi...by god!!!!LOL
well, there is twist in Neeladri...he's a special person.Wink
just wait for sometimeSmile

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chandu-mayu

Beautiful. Hope nup's dad does not create problm between mayur. Plz mayur ko alag mat karna


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well, mayur k destiny me kya hai, ye to mujhe bhi nahi pataWink


Originally posted by SamiraARTiMAYUR

Suja welcome back
it was beautiful n romantic update adorable hun
mayur were Day Dreaming loved it
plzz olso udte Game soon n thanks for the pm 


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i'll update GAME soon.Smile

Originally posted by varsh-mayur

aww they are so cute...pls suja dont  part them pls pls pls...usse kisi ki nazar na lage...


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mujhe bhi accha nahi lagega agar Mayur separate ho jata hai to...par destiny k aage koi kya kar sakta haiOuch

Originally posted by mahakmev

osom

Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Lovly part.


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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 3:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DhanakZ

Wao Dear That was really so beautiful update
I really loved mayur beautiful moments Specially that Sweet wala scene
Hope Nothing bad will gonna happen to them
Thanks for pm
cont soon



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Originally posted by -moona-

i was Imagining Nupur in that Saree, and she was Looking Breath taking..Day DreamingLoved the Update Suja di


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Nupur looks really breathtaking in that sareeSmile


Originally posted by arjun-forever

wow really happy that you have updated...
ClapClap
really really nice part!!!...
but would really want to know who the two people are...
are they jeethumoni and nupur's father???
 
please continue soon...Smile


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the razz of two people will revel soonSmile


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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 3:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

reserve
edit...



Sujaaa

Thanx GOD ' at last u updated my fv FF..

i was waiting for it ' but u d lazy girl d dint update it on right time'

any way I just want to say it was fab update as usual

awesome one re''''

I knew it- I knw Uday got married to chitra without his dad's permission'.

And I think  that's why  he hate love issue '

 

Accha tell me who is Niladri- iska chakkar kya hai

Now plz don't tell me that- nups dad is going to fix nups marriage with Niladri- then I'll kill u for sure'..

 

 

Awww my mayur-they r just amazing yaar

Haye nups was in red and white saari- and she looks beautiful

Mayank tou gaya ' he was totally mesmerized by hear beauty

Loved mayur scene a lot''

Loved their convo

GOSH mayur scene was too good- so cute and lovely'

But why u stopped at crucial point???

U said 2 ppl noticed them-one was happy and another was not happy'

Who r dey???? Hmm  person who was not happy may be nups dad but the person who was happy- kaun hai who- jethumoni????

Ok lets c- btw plz next time update soon

  Take care

 





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i knw fari, i was late...nt this time only, bt everytime.Embarrassed
actually i am busy ths daysOuch...n i knw, u understand my situation.Smile
n Neeladri ka chakkar to baad me pata chalega...par he is most important person in this FF.Wink
so dnt be impatient...just wait n watch...n give me LONG comment.Big smile
well iss saree me nupur ko dekh kar to kai bhi flat ho sakta hai...to mayank kya cheeze haiLOL
n d razz of two people will revel soon.Wink
keep replyingSmile

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