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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 46)

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

OMG OMG SUJAAA

What a beautiful update Janu

Awww so sweet and nice parttt yaar

So romantic, so beautiful , veryyy niceee

I just loved it

            Loved it

                Loved it

 

Sujaaa it was wowest and awesomest update yaar

Mayur kiss- was totally out of d world' haye me blushing yaar

My mayur r so cute and innocent------- kahi kisi ka nazar na lag jaye

Oyeee khabardar agar tune mera myur ko alag karneki kosoish  ki tou??

Main tera jaan le lungi

Yaar kya hai- ur the convo b/w tree and wind scared me..

Something gona happen ' something very wrong'

 

Plz let them be happy

Awww nups gave her feather of blue bird------- so sweet''..

 

Btw I loved ur caption .LOL LOL LOL

 

 

Note: beautiful song and beautiful translation

Thank u suja and jiya

 



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Thanks again for liking mayur kissEmbarrassed... i was lil scared for that, coz it came in between a bengali song, so i was scared that shayad kii pasand na kareEmbarrassed

yes mayur alwz sweet n cute n innocent...thatsy i love them.

well, mayur k kismath me kya hai ye to main bhi nahi janti.Smile

so, just wait n read n also give ur lovely comment.Big smile

love yaHug

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

hey suja
this the bstest evry update
it has evry thing ...love fear ...sweetness...cute...passion...ahhh waht not...n my most beautiful nature
 
it was amazing...song was waooo so at the spot for the update ..lovely ...
 
 n this prt
Maynak nodded, "Nupur, I love you very much, but-" he took her hand and placed on his cheek, " Nupur, I believe in destiny and this destiny never gave me what I wanted!" he kissed her palm, "I love you Nupur and I don't want to loose you!"  a shadow of immense pain and an unknown fear was clearly visible on his face
 
u made my eyes moist
 
i hope it doesnt happen to them...destiny ...never gave wht v want...so true..
 
n ya finally the hero of the ff arived..n the way it has ..im more scared...pls..if even in the bengali story ...ths idiot destiny has played sumthing cruel...pls dont act so...
 
loved it a loot
 
n if i say im gonaa read this also agin
n i havent lost it
my frnd write that best...dont u dare say anything abt her...samhji...
ahhh i am stil lost


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awww...i alwz waiting for ur comment and alwz ur comment give me something which i cant explain in wordsStarT
i just want to thank youHug

well, mayur k kismath me kya hai ye to main bhi nahi janti.Smile

so, just wait n read n also give ur lovely comment.Big smile

ok ok, tere friends k bare me kuch nahi kehti ab to thik hai naLOL

love yaHug


Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 07 May 2011 at 12:55pm

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chandu-mayu

mindblowing part sajata. but I am scared too for mayank's destiny. plz mayur ko alag mat karo . mayank is alone. use aur akela mat karo



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Originally posted by DhanakZ

Oh That Was so sweet 
I loved the way you write this Ff
So near to nature
its Give so pleasant effect
Thanks For Pm
cont soon



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awww...thanks Gul that you feel the neatureHug

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Originally posted by SamiraARTiMAYUR

wooow that was totally Romactic update Suja Blushing
it was realy adorable n verry sweet part
i wish this time the destiny won't go against mayu
Faria beautiful siggy hun
thanks Saju for the n pm Hug



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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Amazing part. Smile


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Originally posted by RiddhiB

reserved!!
very romantic parttt!! loved it!!
song was also nice..but i didn't understand a word..hehe
"the feather of the blue bird"..their symbol of love!! and i love their love..
cont. soon!!




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Thanks for liking the songSmile, and i thot, you missed our d translation which given below after every bengali line.Smile

yes, feather of the blue bird is symbol of their pure loveSmile

Originally posted by valiyah27

 Utterly Romantic update Suja...7th times i read but still can't get over it...will read agn after commenting...Magical update with most Magical Jodi ever known...but please don't let destiny play cruel game with Mayur...n waise bhi here destiny is in ur hand dearLOL...don't be cruel to them...cont soon...n update other FF's too please...thnx for pm...!!!


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you read it 7th timesShockedShockedShocked OMG!!!! my head is spinningOuch...bt m too happy that u like this update that muchBig smile

thanks dearBig smile

i knw destiny is my hand...par kavi kavi destiny ko v chance dena chiye naWink


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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ronojoy_ria

hi
the up is good
mayank and nupur met each other and nupur she is as usuall late but she knew very well how to make mayank understand and laugh
i love this
they were enjoying the baul song along the atmos[here which is adding a ziaka
so finally mayank kissed nupur and expressed his love
wow beautifully written
plz cont soon and pm me


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Originally posted by mayur-ki-diwani

awww its lovely

beautiful

sooo sweet

continue asap


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Originally posted by -moona-

Really Nice Part Suja di, awesome and too romantic, i hope this time Destiny will not play any game with Mayank, and Really Nice song, Thnx Jiya..Embarrassed


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Originally posted by mahakmev

i loved it sooo cute



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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ridi_onasis

suja tui kotha theke khuje khuje gan gula niye ashish...ei ganta ami onek din aage shunesilum...it was really an amazing song...nd mayur er jonno toh ekdom perfect silo...eto perfect j er theke beshi perfect hoite par ne...loved it yaar...nd love u too




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gaan ta Jiya suggest korechilo, ami to sudhu likhechiEmbarrassed, tabe gganta mayur er jonno ekdum perfect...r sudhu ei gaan ta noy, prithivir jato gaan ache, sab gaan mayur k suit kareEmbarrassedBig smile

love u tooHug

Originally posted by love.mayurarti

fabulous update
luved mayur small nok-jhok...they r sooo adorable
wow!!!the mayur first kiss was amazing...n loved the wind n tree convo...bt dat scared me abt mayank destiny...their symbol of love "The Feather of Blue Bird"...loved it
n sig is really beautiful
cont soon n tnx fr pm



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Thnks for liking nature's convoBig smile...mayur alwz adorable...anytime anywhereBig smile

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Auroni.92

U've updated after so long...But i forgave u for giving this out of the world update.HugHug..Now im nowhere on the world...Im flying in the sky...Day DreamingDay Dreaming
What an update suja...
First the song...'Valo achi valo theko...Akasher thikanay chithi likho'...Goshhh i love this song.Day DreamingDay Dreaming..Jano chotobelay je eita ganta koto gaitam...Onek sriti ache ei ganta niye...
Then Mayur...Im speechless...Everything ws sooo mesmerizing...And the kiss.Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming..Conveying all the emotions...Just perfect...
But now im sacred...Whats this mean ki mayank didnt get what he wants...Ouch
Cont soon...Noyto raate ghum asbena...Now humming the songgg..Day Dreaming.



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ur nowhere in earthShocked...oye if u arent come down from sky, then how you will read my next updateShocked

lolzLOL...jocks apart...gaanta amaro khub priyo, khub bhalo lage gaiteBig smile

well, mayank k kismath k bare me jaldi pata chal jayegaBig smile

till then just wait.

luv yaHug

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arjun-forever

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wow!!!!...sujata amazing yaar!!!...

that was superb!!!!
but i just wanted to know which book have you adapted this story from!!!!
amazing!!!!...Clap



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actually its a bengali book, name> neel pakhir palok, writer> manjil sen.

i dnt took this story from this novel, i took the background and some character form this book.

enjoy readingHug

Originally posted by nightdreamer_mn

It's an amzing upate...luved each n evry part of it...story line is amazing...Clap



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Originally posted by maria-soniarti

@sujal
 
Sorry for late reply...
 
it was beautiful updateDay DreamingDay Dreaming
 
Mayur little nok jhok,their kissBlushingBlushing
 
beautifully written update
 
do continue soon..
 
 


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i also luv their cute nock-jhok n kissEmbarrassed

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