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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 42)

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

awwwwwwwwwwwwww......heavnely heavnly
this was so beautiful....
 
strt was so painfull....so much..i hate them ...y people dont think once before saying .....aww
 
n thn the slap......so full of love she has for him....this was awesum...
thy she confess ...the innocnce he had....
n the perfect thing is whn nature talks.....awww...this style of this ff make is blissd .....beyond sumthing....
 
lovely ....gr8 gr8.....
 
n ya ya im cuming up with long updates
lov ya
awww..im going back to read it again


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well, some people like that Fiza.............we cant help itOuch
Thanks again for liking this confession scene............n nature's talkBig smile.............u dnt knw, m alwz waiting for ur commentBig smile
u r going to read againShocked...................ohhh........u r lost ur mindOuch

Originally posted by DhanakZ

O Wao They Finally confess 
I am so happy 
The way U portray the whole scene was so beautiful
The Conversation of wind sun and moon was so so beautiful
thanks for lovely update
cont soon

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m really glad that u like hole updateStar

Originally posted by maria-soniarti

@sujalHug
 
wow sis what a beautiful update....
 
MaYur confessionDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
 
loved it
 
i loved all Mayur scenes,their hugDay DreamingDay Dreaming
 
do continue soon


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m really happy that u like mayur confessionStar

Originally posted by .PINK.

hey nice part
do continue soon :_)_


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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Auroni.92

Awwwwwww, hayeeee, OMG, ishhhhh, Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming...cant help but giving this expression...
This ws sooooooooooooooooooo romantic suja...
I lost myself in Mayur dreamland...Day DreamingDay Dreaming
Ettoooo sundor kore je ki kore likho...Mone hoche sobkichu jeno amar chokher samne ghotche...
They CONFESSED!!!!! SillySillyIm dancing in happiness...DancingDancing
Sobcheye valo legeche batash r surjer kotha...Mone hochilo puro world jeno oder love witness korche...Day DreamingDay Dreaming
Oshomvob sundor ekta part chilo...Clap
Cant wait to read more nd more romantic update like this...
Joldi update koro...Hug


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m really feel very happy that u like entire updateStar...............n specially mayur confession n nature's talkStar
abosso...........e chara ei update a r kichu chilo naLOL

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nightdreamer_mn

IT was really amaizng m speechless...hw can any1 write so deeply n touching...da conversion btw moon,sun n wind was superb....LOL..really luv u r amaing writer seriously....n finally mayur r 2gether poor mayyu...really felt very...bad 4 him...u noe in our sicitey it actually happns....


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Originally posted by mayur-ki-diwani

awwwwwwwwww its lovely

mayur were awesomeeee

the nature talk was very sweet

loved it alottttttt

continue soon


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m glad that u like mayur n natureStar


Originally posted by samiralovemayur

Saja wat a beautiful n romantic update
i hate mayu's family Angry
but my nups is allways star Star
n u hun thanks for the amazing update ur Star
i loved the confo between the wind n the sun hilarious
thanks for the pm


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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Amazing part.


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Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Beautiful upd8

loved it

cont soon


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Originally posted by Alisha-MJHT

Fantastic update Suja
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm


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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by itzMYattitude

omgggggggggggggggg
amazinggggggggggg update dear
finally the confession
yupeeeeeeeeeeeee
the scene was out of the world
much more than my expectations yar
hats off for such an amazing job
awwwwwwwwwww
mayu is really sweeeeeet na
loving his character more n more
dialogue writting just outstanding
the wind n sun part was cuteee
love reading it
sorry for being late
m a lil busy these days
 
do continue sooooooooooon


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m really very very happy that u like this update that muchStar

Originally posted by ronojoy_ria

hi
the up is good
so everyone is n chatting mood
but mayank as per his nature he is all quite
and this quiteness of his is irritating his parents who considered him as un smart and shy
this kind of behaviour is really torturing mayank he is feeling really low and sad
his eyes are becoming all teary
but his pain cant be understand by anyone except nupur
nupur took mayank with her so that he could overcome his pain
the confession is really sweet
finally nupur and mayank confessed and i love it
plz cont soon and pm me


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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Thank you so much for linking this story.Smile
 
 






Thank u so much guys for pressing the Like tab and also urs precious comments.Smile
 

 
here is the next update........i hope u like it........Smile

here i add a song.........hope u like it.

bt the song selection n translation..........all credit goes to Jiya (jiya_angel)Big smile

if u like the song..........then dont thank me.........thank JiyaBig smile
 

so, tell me how it is..................waiting for ur commentSmile 
 

 
 
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:: You are in my heart ::



 

                                                                                                       

                                                                                    <Sig Credit : -Faria->

 

Mayank was waiting for Nupur near the Jhora. It was a hot day, but the huge leafy trees made the area cool. There was no sound except the squirrels; they were running, jumping '.. making noise, playing all over the jungle. Mayank was happily watching them.

Suddenly someone hugged him from behind, "Mayank!"

"why are you always late?" Mayank freed himself from her hands, "I don't want to talk to you!"

Nupur came in front of him, holding her ears, " I am sorry."

"what sorry, it has been almost ten days since we confessed and you-"

"and I am always late!" she completed his sentence.

"right!" he crossed his hands against his chest, looking at another direction.

"ohhh, toh Mr. Mayank is angry! Let me check '" Nupur held his arms and turned him to face her, but Mayank was still looking around.

Nupur made a serious face, "hmmm, your eyes are red" she checked his eyes, "nose is red" nudged his nose with her fingertip, "lips are pressed together tightly" Mayank was trying to suppress his smile, "you are trying to smile, but you can't." She put her hands on her hips, "hmmm, now it's confirmed, you are really angry on me!"

Mayank couldn't help, but laughed out, "Nupur!"

Nupur also laughed, "Mayank!!"

Mayank pulled her and hugged her tightly, "do you know, you are totally impossible." He said.

"I know." She hid her face on his chest.

"you always make me laugh." He tightened his arms.

"I love to make you laugh." She adjusted herself for more comfort.

 

They stood there silently; hugging each other '' there was no sound except the nature. They heard their unsaid words through their heartbeats, which beat for each other '' they felt complete in each other's arms ''. They parted slowly only to hear the sweet sound of an Iktara.

They slowly parted and looked at the direction. A Baul and his mate were passing by, on the earthen road, the Baul was singing, playing with his Iktara, and his mate playing the Khanjani.

 

 


<  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vw2hd7CLQOI&feature=related

Here is the Youtube like...Plz click the link if u want to listen the song Smile>

 



Amar bhitoro baahire.. ontore ontore.. aacho tumi.. hridoy jure

{In and around me' deep within my soul' it's only you' in my heart}

 

Mayank-Nupur looked at each other, smiling, before they sat on the nearby boulder.

 

Ooo'. Amar bhitoro baahire.. ontore ontore.. aacho tumi.. hridoy jure

{In and around me' deep within my soul' it's only you' within my heart}

 

Mayank placed his hands on hers from behind. He literally hugged her, and entwined his fingers with hers softly. Nupur smiled before tightening her fingers around his.

 

Dheke rakhe jemon kushum' Paprir abdale fosoler ghum

{as the flower hides the sleep of the grains inside the petals}

 

She leaned against his chest before closing her eyes. Mayank held her hands around her stomach '' Nupur breathed deeply '.. she felt safe '.. content in his arms.

Mayank brushed aside her hair and rested his chin on her shoulder.

 

Temni tomaar nibir chola' moromer mul poth dhore

{such is your intimate hold' in the core of my heart}

 

He bent his head and touched her shoulder with his lips '.. slowly. Nupur squeezed her eyes in anticipation, she was a little surprised by Mayank's sudden act! She couldn't imagine him like that.

He held her tightly before dragging her nearer. He again kissed her shoulder before kissing her neck ''

"Mayank" she moaned.

 

Amar bhitoro baahire.. ontore ontore.. aacho tumi.. hridoy jure

{In and around me' deep within my soul' it's only you' within my heart}

 

Mayank quickly withdrew, loosening his grip on her, "I am sorry."

Nupur was surprised, she didn't imagine such reaction!

He felt guilty,. "she didn't like that! How could I did this to her!" he thought. He was ashamed by his act.

 

Pooshe raakhe jemon jhinuk' kholosher aaborone muktor sukh

{as the oyster holds within' the joy of a pearl beneath the shell}

 

Mayank about to go, but was stopped by Nupur, she was holding his wrist tightly.

"I am sorry Nupur" Mayank again apologized.

Nupur smiled before facing him, she cupped his face," I am not angry with you Mayank. It's ok ' its your right." She smiled before rubbed her nose-tip with his.

He felt relieved. He quickly hugged her, "thank you Nupur, I was so ashamed." His fingers were playing with her hair as he hid his face on her neck.

 

Temni tomaar gobhir chhoa' bhitorer neel bondore

{such is you deep touch' on the blue harbor inside my soul}

 

Nupur shivered as unconsciously his lips touched her bare skin '' but she couldn't react, now she understood him well.

"Mayank" she called.

"hmm '."

"I love you."

"I love you too."

 

Amar bhitoro baahire.. ontore ontore.. aacho tumi.. hridoy jure

{In and around me' deep within my soul' it's only you' within my heart}

 

They sat under a big leafy tree. and next moment he found himself dragged and pulled down on leaves.

Mayank rested his back on the stream '''..  nupur rested her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes. Mayank rounded his arms and started playing with her hair '.. nupur smiled'

She pulled herself little closer, buried her forehead on his neck '' Mayank tightened his arms around her '. Whether few moments passed or hours or days ''' it did not matter '. they were lost in each other '' silence played the role here '..

 

Bhalo achi bhalo theko' akaasher thikanay chithi likho

{I am fine, I wish you joy' write to me at the address of the sky}

 

"nupur, are you happy with me?" Mayank broke the silence.

Nupur opened her eyes; deeply looking at him, perhaps searching a logical reason for this out of the blue question!

"why are you asking this?" her eyes were still buried in his.

"I am sorry Nupur." He lowered his head, "actually, I am scared '. I am too much scared of losing you."

"losing me???" Nupur was surprised.

Maynak nodded, "Nupur, I love you very much, but-" he took her hand and placed on his cheek, " Nupur, I believe in destiny and this destiny never gave me what I wanted!" he kissed her palm, "I love you Nupur and I don't want to loose you!"  a shadow of immense pain and an unknown fear was clearly visible on his face.

 

Diyo tomaar maala khaani' baauul ei montaare

{Please do give the crown of yours' to this vagabond irrational heart of mine}

 

"don't be scared Mayank." She clung to him, "I am with you." She kissed his cheek. "your destiny wouldn't do anything wrong this time" she smiled before resting her head on his chest.

Cool wind ruffled her hair.

Mayank tightened his arms around her, almost squeezing her, "Nupur" he whispered in her ear.

"hmm"

"can I kiss you?"

Nupur looked up to him with great surprise '.

 

Amar bhitoro baahire.. ontore ontore.. aacho tumi.. hridoy jure

{In and around me' deep within my soul' it's only you' within my heart}

 

Mayank cupped her face, caressed her cheek with his thumbs '.. Nupur closed her eyes, her lips were trembling ''

He admired her beautiful face as the dark shade of pink color crept on her cheeks. Although her eyes were closed, yet she could feel his gaze on her. she could feel his hot breath on her face '' she was waiting for THE moment'.

Mayank brought her face closer '' their lips touched each other ''

Nupur caught his shirt tightly as he pressed his lips on her '.

 

Amar bhitoro baahire.. ontore ontore.. aacho tumi.. hridoy jure

{In and around me' deep within my soul' it's only you' within my heart}

 

They broke apart only for need some breath. they rested their foreheads and smiled '.. They looked at the horizon only to see the Baul and his mate walking to the direction of the setting sun, and his song slowly faded away ''. Leaving behind a sweet atmosphere ''

 

 

 

"Everything was so perfect" the wind sighed.

"yesss" the trees murmured, reciprocating the wind, "but I am scared."

"why?"

"Mayank was right '' his destiny never gave him what he wanted!"

"NOOO" the wind shouted only to make a small whirlwind, making dry leaves scattered.

 

 

Mayank removed the dry leaves from Nupur's hair carefully.

"Mayank, this is for you." She open her palm in front of him.

Mayank was surprised and happy '' there was a beautiful blue feather '..

"Nupur '. You '. You remembered???" he asked happily before he took the feather.

"yes, Mayank '. I couldn't forget anything which related to you." She rested her head on his arm, "this is the symbol of our love '' The Feather of Blue Bird!"


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yippeeee yippeeee yippeeee... i'm first
Dancing


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 haaye di... it was a totally adorable updateEmbarrassed
loved the cute nok jhok in de firstLOL
and den de kissBlushing
awesome awesome awesomeBig smile

but ye kya hua?Ouch plzz don't do this to Mayank.... wo aise hi bahut akela haiOuch

loved it... waiting for next

~jiya~

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