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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 41)

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
update please.................!!!

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 5:22pm | IP Logged
Fantastic update Suja
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 10:55am | IP Logged
updte plishh
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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

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yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Sujaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
By GOD kya update tha janu-
muah muah muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

love u dear
it was the bestest update of this ff................................................

Hayeeeeeeeeeeeeee - finally my mayur confessed their love.
                  

OMG Nups confessed it first- hahahahaha ye tou thoda ulta he hogaya........but i loved it suja......
i feel really very good  to see them happy.............. both r perfect 4 each other...........
i can say mayu is very lucky that he has got nups loves.
and nups is lucky too.......................both r innocent,down to earth, and vey good human being

at first u started it with the convo of uday and mayu which was very nice
but when myus family joined with then and made fun of mayu i couldn't control  anger.......
isnt it too much
why they alwz insulted mayu???
he is too shy to response- is it his only fault????
did they give any chance to proof  himself??????????????
they alws praised gunjan- disgusting
r a koi tou saath dena chaiye na- its one type of mental torture yaar........

i hope maynak ko apne apko defend karneka mauka mil jati.
anyway forget it...............

coming to the most beautiful partof this update.
mayur scene near the lack- it was totally out of world
haye nups daar gayi thi and thats why she slapped nups
u know what when maynk said-"gir jata to mar jata ' aur kya"-my heart ached.
wokitna dard k saath ye baat kaha- hai na
but now everything is fine mayur jo saath saath hai

and the convo b/w wind and sun- by GOD it was outstanding
i have no word to desctibe this beautiful convo
and then moon mama also joined them- sujaaaaaaaaaa u r awesome writer..........

what a beautiful update
mind-blowing
acha i forgot to tell one thing- uditi and mayu scene was very sweet
even this lil baby recognize hw sweet and nice maynk is.

btw i think its enough of my non-stop bhashan
plz buda maat manna
thoda padne ki kasht karlo

love u dear
take care
and do update next part soon





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i knw, mayur confession thoda ulta ho gya..........par tujhe to pata hai na............mera FF me sab kuch ulta hi hota haiTongue
nt only u, bt everyone angry on mayanks family..............bt dnt worry............with time they would realized itSmile
maynak is very very reserved person.......thatsy he couldtn expressed his feelingsSmile
m happy that u like nature's convoSmile
i love to read ur non stop vashanStar
thanks againSmile

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiya_angel

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Grr!! Fari first aa gayiAngry

*edited* 

uff!! i loved the confessionDay Dreaming
and i told you the sun-moon-wind convo was super cuteEmbarrassed... see, even fari agreesApprove
grr!! I hate Mayank's parentsAngry... who does dis to their own childErmm
poor mayu... "gir jaata toh kya hota... marr jaata" no wonder he said thatUnhappy
but I am so happy for him nowBig smile... Nupur is here to ease all his painBig smile

Thnx for the pm




Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
i knw, mayur make everyone happyBig smile...............thatsy they are the best couple Big smile
u r right, jab nups mayank  k sath hai, to kya problem haiStar

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chandu-mayu

amazing story. beautifully written. u are very good writer. I am bengali so I can relate to the nature. plz update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this storySmile
m really feel glad that one more bengalee friend liking this storyStar

Originally posted by mahakmev

lovely and amzing feeling sad and happy for mayank


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Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile

Originally posted by ridi_onasis

i'll kill mayank's family.......how could they did this to mayank.......Angry
bt i'm very happy for the confession.........this was one of the best confession.........loved it......finally they confessed........


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
thanks again for liking this confession...........i was really scared before posting............actually it was very first confession i wroteSmile
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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 11:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kirti123

omg felt bad for mayank how his family was humilating him
but wow mayur confessed that was superb 
just loved the nature talk
thanks for the pm
do continue soonSmile


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
m really glad that u like nature's talk ...........n confession tooStar

Originally posted by valiyah27

So pure n serene............only Mayur can create this magic...............full of innocence...................great update....................................but dear what abt other FF's plssss update soon.....................thnx for pm..............!!!


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
m really very happy to see ur commentBig smile
offcourse dear.............i'l update all my pending FFs.............just give me sometimeSmile...........m really tied up with works these daysOuch

Originally posted by love.mayurarti

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!dat was beautiful update
mayur confessed their love...totally mesmerizing
they r sooooo sweet cute n adorable....luved them
bt hate mayank family...why they r so rude with him n humiliating him
the last part was amazing.....wind moon n sun convo....dat was amazing
beautifully written
cont soon n tnx fr pm


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
Thanks again for liking this confession scene.....,,,,,,,,,,,n nature's talkStar

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

awwwwwwwwwwwwww......heavnely heavnly
this was so beautiful....
 
strt was so painfull....so much..i hate them ...y people dont think once before saying .....aww
 
n thn the slap......so full of love she has for him....this was awesum...
thy she confess ...the innocnce he had....
n the perfect thing is whn nature talks.....awww...this style of this ff make is blissd .....beyond sumthing....
 
lovely ....gr8 gr8.....
 
n ya ya im cuming up with long updates
lov ya
awww..im going back to read it again


Thank u so much for lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
well, some people like that Fiza.............we cant help itOuch
Thanks again for liking this confession scene............n nature's talkBig smile.............u dnt knw, m alwz waiting for ur commentBig smile
u r going to read againShocked...................ohhh........u r lost ur mindOuch

Originally posted by DhanakZ

O Wao They Finally confess 
I am so happy 
The way U portray the whole scene was so beautiful
The Conversation of wind sun and moon was so so beautiful
thanks for lovely update
cont soon

Thank u so much for lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
m really glad that u like hole updateStar

Originally posted by maria-soniarti

@sujalHug
 
wow sis what a beautiful update....
 
MaYur confessionDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
 
loved it
 
i loved all Mayur scenes,their hugDay DreamingDay Dreaming
 
do continue soon


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
m really happy that u like mayur confessionStar

Originally posted by .PINK.

hey nice part
do continue soon :_)_


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