Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 40)

SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
SujaLuvsMayur
SujaLuvsMayur

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6714

Posted: 08 April 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiya_angel

reserved

Grr!! Fari first aa gayiAngry

*edited* 

uff!! i loved the confessionDay Dreaming
and i told you the sun-moon-wind convo was super cuteEmbarrassed... see, even fari agreesApprove
grr!! I hate Mayank's parentsAngry... who does dis to their own childErmm
poor mayu... "gir jaata toh kya hota... marr jaata" no wonder he said thatUnhappy
but I am so happy for him nowBig smile... Nupur is here to ease all his painBig smile

Thnx for the pm




Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
i knw, mayur make everyone happyBig smile...............thatsy they are the best couple Big smile
u r right, jab nups mayank  k sath hai, to kya problem haiStar

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

--jiya--

SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
SujaLuvsMayur
SujaLuvsMayur

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6714

Posted: 08 April 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chandu-mayu

amazing story. beautifully written. u are very good writer. I am bengali so I can relate to the nature. plz update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this storySmile
m really feel glad that one more bengalee friend liking this storyStar

Originally posted by mahakmev

lovely and amzing feeling sad and happy for mayank


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile

Originally posted by ridi_onasis

i'll kill mayank's family.......how could they did this to mayank.......Angry
bt i'm very happy for the confession.........this was one of the best confession.........loved it......finally they confessed........


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
thanks again for liking this confession...........i was really scared before posting............actually it was very first confession i wroteSmile
SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
SujaLuvsMayur
SujaLuvsMayur

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6714

Posted: 08 April 2011 at 11:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kirti123

omg felt bad for mayank how his family was humilating him
but wow mayur confessed that was superb 
just loved the nature talk
thanks for the pm
do continue soonSmile


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
m really glad that u like nature's talk ...........n confession tooStar

Originally posted by valiyah27

So pure n serene............only Mayur can create this magic...............full of innocence...................great update....................................but dear what abt other FF's plssss update soon.....................thnx for pm..............!!!


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
m really very happy to see ur commentBig smile
offcourse dear.............i'l update all my pending FFs.............just give me sometimeSmile...........m really tied up with works these daysOuch

Originally posted by love.mayurarti

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!dat was beautiful update
mayur confessed their love...totally mesmerizing
they r sooooo sweet cute n adorable....luved them
bt hate mayank family...why they r so rude with him n humiliating him
the last part was amazing.....wind moon n sun convo....dat was amazing
beautifully written
cont soon n tnx fr pm


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
Thanks again for liking this confession scene.....,,,,,,,,,,,n nature's talkStar

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

valliyah

SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
SujaLuvsMayur
SujaLuvsMayur

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6714

Posted: 08 April 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

awwwwwwwwwwwwww......heavnely heavnly
this was so beautiful....
 
strt was so painfull....so much..i hate them ...y people dont think once before saying .....aww
 
n thn the slap......so full of love she has for him....this was awesum...
thy she confess ...the innocnce he had....
n the perfect thing is whn nature talks.....awww...this style of this ff make is blissd .....beyond sumthing....
 
lovely ....gr8 gr8.....
 
n ya ya im cuming up with long updates
lov ya
awww..im going back to read it again


Thank u so much for lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
well, some people like that Fiza.............we cant help itOuch
Thanks again for liking this confession scene............n nature's talkBig smile.............u dnt knw, m alwz waiting for ur commentBig smile
u r going to read againShocked...................ohhh........u r lost ur mindOuch

Originally posted by DhanakZ

O Wao They Finally confess 
I am so happy 
The way U portray the whole scene was so beautiful
The Conversation of wind sun and moon was so so beautiful
thanks for lovely update
cont soon

Thank u so much for lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
m really glad that u like hole updateStar

Originally posted by maria-soniarti

@sujalHug
 
wow sis what a beautiful update....
 
MaYur confessionDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
 
loved it
 
i loved all Mayur scenes,their hugDay DreamingDay Dreaming
 
do continue soon


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
m really happy that u like mayur confessionStar

Originally posted by .PINK.

hey nice part
do continue soon :_)_


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

drfizaahmed

SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
SujaLuvsMayur
SujaLuvsMayur

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6714

Posted: 08 April 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Auroni.92

Awwwwwww, hayeeee, OMG, ishhhhh, Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming...cant help but giving this expression...
This ws sooooooooooooooooooo romantic suja...
I lost myself in Mayur dreamland...Day DreamingDay Dreaming
Ettoooo sundor kore je ki kore likho...Mone hoche sobkichu jeno amar chokher samne ghotche...
They CONFESSED!!!!! SillySillyIm dancing in happiness...DancingDancing
Sobcheye valo legeche batash r surjer kotha...Mone hochilo puro world jeno oder love witness korche...Day DreamingDay Dreaming
Oshomvob sundor ekta part chilo...Clap
Cant wait to read more nd more romantic update like this...
Joldi update koro...Hug


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
m really feel very happy that u like entire updateStar...............n specially mayur confession n nature's talkStar
abosso...........e chara ei update a r kichu chilo naLOL

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Auroni.92

SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
SujaLuvsMayur
SujaLuvsMayur

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6714

Posted: 08 April 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nightdreamer_mn

IT was really amaizng m speechless...hw can any1 write so deeply n touching...da conversion btw moon,sun n wind was superb....LOL..really luv u r amaing writer seriously....n finally mayur r 2gether poor mayyu...really felt very...bad 4 him...u noe in our sicitey it actually happns....


Thank u so much for ur lovely comment Smile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
m really very happy that u nt only like this part............n also feel itStar

Originally posted by mayur-ki-diwani

awwwwwwwwww its lovely

mayur were awesomeeee

the nature talk was very sweet

loved it alottttttt

continue soon


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
m glad that u like mayur n natureStar


Originally posted by samiralovemayur

Saja wat a beautiful n romantic update
i hate mayu's family Angry
but my nups is allways star Star
n u hun thanks for the amazing update ur Star
i loved the confo between the wind n the sun hilarious
thanks for the pm


Thank u so much for ur lovely commetSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
thanks again for like mayur n nature's talkStar
SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
SujaLuvsMayur
SujaLuvsMayur

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6714

Posted: 08 April 2011 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Amazing part.


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile

Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Beautiful upd8

loved it

cont soon


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile

Originally posted by Alisha-MJHT

Fantastic update Suja
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
SujaLuvsMayur
SujaLuvsMayur

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6714

Posted: 08 April 2011 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by itzMYattitude

omgggggggggggggggg
amazinggggggggggg update dear
finally the confession
yupeeeeeeeeeeeee
the scene was out of the world
much more than my expectations yar
hats off for such an amazing job
awwwwwwwwwww
mayu is really sweeeeeet na
loving his character more n more
dialogue writting just outstanding
the wind n sun part was cuteee
love reading it
sorry for being late
m a lil busy these days
 
do continue sooooooooooon


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
m in cloud nineStar
m really very very happy that u like this update that muchStar

Originally posted by ronojoy_ria

hi
the up is good
so everyone is n chatting mood
but mayank as per his nature he is all quite
and this quiteness of his is irritating his parents who considered him as un smart and shy
this kind of behaviour is really torturing mayank he is feeling really low and sad
his eyes are becoming all teary
but his pain cant be understand by anyone except nupur
nupur took mayank with her so that he could overcome his pain
the confession is really sweet
finally nupur and mayank confessed and i love it
plz cont soon and pm me


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile
Thanks again for liking entire updteSmile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Silent.Dreamer

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Blue Blood - Arshi 4S Part 4 pg 26 [27/11]

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 26 27

Author: angeldream14   Replies: 215   Views: 13181

angeldream14 215 13181 26 February 2018 at 2:31am by kowshira9
THE CAGE BIRD ---completed---sultan & madhu

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Author: prabha.abha   Replies: 76   Views: 7207

prabha.abha 76 7207 27 March 2015 at 11:25am by prabha.abha
Bird in the cage 2 MN FF

Author: --unknown--   Replies: 2   Views: 390

--unknown-- 2 390 05 May 2014 at 9:36am by --unknown--
The Feather of Blue Bird#2 [MN] *Completed*

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 95 96

Author: SujaLuvsMayur   Replies: 760   Views: 57611

SujaLuvsMayur 760 57611 13 May 2013 at 3:23pm by .rumki.
FF: Love of a Caged Bird~MG~ Part 4 Page 27 ~ 7/23

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 28 29

Author: .Regal.   Replies: 230   Views: 27340

.Regal. 230 27340 09 April 2013 at 3:44am by ..sweetchilly..

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index