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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 38)

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 6:57am | IP Logged
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yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Sujaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
By GOD kya update tha janu-
muah muah muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

love u dear
it was the bestest update of this ff................................................

Hayeeeeeeeeeeeeee - finally my mayur confessed their love.
                  

OMG Nups confessed it first- hahahahaha ye tou thoda ulta he hogaya........but i loved it suja......
i feel really very good  to see them happy.............. both r perfect 4 each other...........
i can say mayu is very lucky that he has got nups loves.
and nups is lucky too.......................both r innocent,down to earth, and vey good human being

at first u started it with the convo of uday and mayu which was very nice
but when myus family joined with then and made fun of mayu i couldn't control  anger.......
isnt it too much
why they alwz insulted mayu???
he is too shy to response- is it his only fault????
did they give any chance to proof  himself??????????????
they alws praised gunjan- disgusting
r a koi tou saath dena chaiye na- its one type of mental torture yaar........

i hope maynak ko apne apko defend karneka mauka mil jati.
anyway forget it...............

coming to the most beautiful partof this update.
mayur scene near the lack- it was totally out of world
haye nups daar gayi thi and thats why she slapped nups
u know what when maynk said-"gir jata to mar jata … aur kya"-my heart ached.
wokitna dard k saath ye baat kaha- hai na
but now everything is fine mayur jo saath saath hai

and the convo b/w wind and sun- by GOD it was outstanding
i have no word to desctibe this beautiful convo
and then moon mama also joined them- sujaaaaaaaaaa u r awesome writer..........

what a beautiful update
mind-blowing
acha i forgot to tell one thing- uditi and mayu scene was very sweet
even this lil baby recognize hw sweet and nice maynk is.

btw i think its enough of my non-stop bhashan
plz buda maat manna
thoda padne ki kasht karlo

love u dear
take care
and do update next part soon



 






Edited by -Faria- - 21 March 2011 at 7:52am

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Grr!! Fari first aa gayiAngry

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uff!! i loved the confessionDay Dreaming
and i told you the sun-moon-wind convo was super cuteEmbarrassed... see, even fari agreesApprove
grr!! I hate Mayank's parentsAngry... who does dis to their own childErmm
poor mayu... "gir jaata toh kya hota... marr jaata" no wonder he said thatUnhappy
but I am so happy for him nowBig smile... Nupur is here to ease all his painBig smile

Thnx for the pm




Edited by jiya_angel - 21 March 2011 at 11:30am

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 7:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiya_angel

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Grr!! Fari first aa gayiAngry

Kyun humesha ap he first hona chati ho kya????
huh thoda space mujhe bhi do
yeeeeeeeeeeeee jiyaaaaaaaaaa main first agayi...............lol
gussa maat ho- love u

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 7:38am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by jiya_angel

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Grr!! Fari first aa gayiAngry

Kyun humesha ap he first hona chati ho kya????
huh thoda space mujhe bhi do
yeeeeeeeeeeeee jiyaaaaaaaaaa main first agayi...............lol
gussa maat ho- love u

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par ye batana muskil hai k kaun Tom hai aur kaun JerryTongue
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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 8:02am | IP Logged
amazing story. beautifully written. u are very good writer. I am bengali so I can relate to the nature. plz update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 9:00am | IP Logged
lovely and amzing feeling sad and happy for mayank

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 9:39am | IP Logged
i'll kill mayank's family.......how could they did this to mayank.......Angry
bt i'm very happy for the confession.........this was one of the best confession.........loved it......finally they confessed........

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 9:59am | IP Logged
omg felt bad for mayank how his family was humilating him
but wow mayur confessed that was superb 
just loved the nature talk
thanks for the pm
do continue soonSmile

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