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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 36)

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Auroni.92

Another awesomest update...ClapClap

Everything ws so perfectly placed...Specially the atmosphere...It ws so beautiful and soothing to imagine...BlushingBlushing

And what can i say about THE MAYUR MOMENT...It ws damn romantic.Day DreamingDay Dreaming..And the sig ws cherry on the cake...Suited so perfectly with the scene....Beautifully made...But what happened with mayank in the last.DisapproveConfused..Making me worried...
And nupur made her decision...What decision...Plz update soon...

Thank u so much for ur lovely commentBig smile

Thank u so much for liking this updateBig smile

Thanks for loving Mayur scene..........n as u knw, they r my altime favoriteBig smile

just wait for nupurs decision..........i cant tell u nowTongue

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DhanakZ

Yupiee They hugged and he Kissed her 
i am so happy
But why he didnt understand his emotions
So lovely update
Thanks for Pm 
cont soon

Thank u so much for ur lovely commentBig smile

Thank u so much for liking this updateBig smile

Mayank understood his emotions.............bt he was scared to accept this.

dnt worry, they ll confess soonBig smile

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DhanakZ

Yupiee They hugged and he Kissed her 
i am so happy
But why he didnt understand his emotions
So lovely update
Thanks for Pm 
cont soon

Thank u so much for ur lovely commentBig smile

Thank u so much for liking this updateBig smile

Mayank understood his emotions.............bt he was scared to accept this.

dnt worry, they ll confess soonBig smile

Originally posted by samiralovemayur

hey Suja don't say it's boring

it was dreaminly romantic Day Dreaming
mayu beaing hero n mayur hug so cute
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L update hun loved it Hug
thanks  for the pm

Thank u so much for ur lovely commentBig smile

Thank u so much for liking this updateBig smile

Originally posted by varsh-mayur

hey suja.....loved it............new type of mayank..so shy and so insecure........and nupur.....loved it.......u write really well......do continue soon...

Thank u so much for ur lovely commentBig smile

Thank u so much for liking this updateBig smile

awwwww.........u really like mayank??!!! thanks dear........actually i was scared to wrt mayanks ch'ter like this!

thank u for liking my writtingBig smile

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Sujaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

OMG OMG ' mayur were alone on the empty road at night.

Hayeeeeeeeeeeee what a romantic environment-perfect for our mayur

Hai ALLAH goons were attacked our angel oops maynks angles NUps

By God Mayank was fuming in anger and he has beat them very badly

Wah wah superb Mr. Mayank'''Ye huye na baat

 

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww  Mayur scene was so dreamish .

The hug and kiss just magical- totally Mayurish

Yr buddhu Mayank 'why didn't he say that , he loves Nups

R a kuch tou bolo- sadu kahika

Oh ho so uday is nups bro but nups dad didn't accept them

Why????????????

Whats the reason behind it?????????????

 

Suja it's a really very beautiful update

Fantastic

Loved it to the core

Do update next part soon


note:sorry for commenting late.actually i m busy with my study and will b busy next 3/4 days...


 


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentBig smile.

Thank u so much for liking this updateBig smile.

so, u like mayanks fight........thank u thanku...........actually i was scared to wrt this portion....... i thot, it was not mayankish (as per this FF).

bt thanks for liking this fight.

dnt call my mayank as sadu........he's so sweet, bt scared to confess his love.

well, uday ka reson to update me hi pata chalega!!Wink!

hope u didnt mind to waitTongue

ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAM *thumbs up*


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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by jiya_angel

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wow.... awesome updateClap
Mayank is such a gentle man... love him....

and Nupur is so matureBig smile

thnx for de pm

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment

Thank u so much for liking this update.

bt u r the one, who deserve whole credit to this update.......to correcting my grammatical mistakes.Smile

thanks u so much JiyaBig smile


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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 2:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by itzMYattitude

finally read it
sorry for being late
 
ok
awesomeeeeeeeeee
amazinggggggggggggg
superbbbbbbbbbb
rockinggggggggg
really great job dear
*thumbs uppppp*
goons scene was really well written
was really sweeeet
loved that one completely
n al the other scenes just supeerbbbbbbb
last one too really well written
 
do continue sooooooooooon

Thank u so much for ur lovely commentBig smile

Thank u so much for liking this update.

i'll update soon.

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is good
toh mayank nupur aur pranjal after enjoying the whole day headed towards their respective houses
where pranjal and nupur are carefree about the time mayank was really tensed
the duppata scene and the goons fiassco are just like films
mayank ka nupur ko bacchana wahhhhhh
i loved it their hug
its really nice
plz cotn soon and pm me

Thank u so much for ur lovely commentBig smile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Big smile


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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 2:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiya_angel

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by jiya_angel

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wow.... awesome updateClap
Mayank is such a gentle man... love him....

and Nupur is so matureBig smile

thnx for de pm

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment

Thank u so much for liking this update.

bt u r the one, who deserve whole credit to this update.......to correcting my grammatical mistakes.Smile

thanks u so much JiyaBig smile


u saying Thank You againEvil Smile

sorry Ouch
i withdrawn my Thank u.Star

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