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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 36)

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DhanakZ

Yupiee They hugged and he Kissed her 
i am so happy
But why he didnt understand his emotions
So lovely update
Thanks for Pm 
cont soon

Thank u so much for ur lovely commentBig smile

Thank u so much for liking this updateBig smile

Mayank understood his emotions.............bt he was scared to accept this.

dnt worry, they ll confess soonBig smile

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DhanakZ

Yupiee They hugged and he Kissed her 
i am so happy
But why he didnt understand his emotions
So lovely update
Thanks for Pm 
cont soon

Thank u so much for ur lovely commentBig smile

Thank u so much for liking this updateBig smile

Mayank understood his emotions.............bt he was scared to accept this.

dnt worry, they ll confess soonBig smile

Originally posted by samiralovemayur

hey Suja don't say it's boring

it was dreaminly romantic Day Dreaming
mayu beaing hero n mayur hug so cute
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L update hun loved it Hug
thanks  for the pm

Thank u so much for ur lovely commentBig smile

Thank u so much for liking this updateBig smile

Originally posted by varsh-mayur

hey suja.....loved it............new type of mayank..so shy and so insecure........and nupur.....loved it.......u write really well......do continue soon...

Thank u so much for ur lovely commentBig smile

Thank u so much for liking this updateBig smile

awwwww.........u really like mayank??!!! thanks dear........actually i was scared to wrt mayanks ch'ter like this!

thank u for liking my writtingBig smile

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Sujaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

OMG OMG ' mayur were alone on the empty road at night.

Hayeeeeeeeeeeee what a romantic environment-perfect for our mayur

Hai ALLAH goons were attacked our angel oops maynks angles NUps

By God Mayank was fuming in anger and he has beat them very badly

Wah wah superb Mr. Mayank'''Ye huye na baat

 

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww  Mayur scene was so dreamish .

The hug and kiss just magical- totally Mayurish

Yr buddhu Mayank 'why didn't he say that , he loves Nups

R a kuch tou bolo- sadu kahika

Oh ho so uday is nups bro but nups dad didn't accept them

Why????????????

Whats the reason behind it?????????????

 

Suja it's a really very beautiful update

Fantastic

Loved it to the core

Do update next part soon


note:sorry for commenting late.actually i m busy with my study and will b busy next 3/4 days...


 


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentBig smile.

Thank u so much for liking this updateBig smile.

so, u like mayanks fight........thank u thanku...........actually i was scared to wrt this portion....... i thot, it was not mayankish (as per this FF).

bt thanks for liking this fight.

dnt call my mayank as sadu........he's so sweet, bt scared to confess his love.

well, uday ka reson to update me hi pata chalega!!Wink!

hope u didnt mind to waitTongue

ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAM *thumbs up*


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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by jiya_angel

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wow.... awesome updateClap
Mayank is such a gentle man... love him....

and Nupur is so matureBig smile

thnx for de pm

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment

Thank u so much for liking this update.

bt u r the one, who deserve whole credit to this update.......to correcting my grammatical mistakes.Smile

thanks u so much JiyaBig smile


u saying Thank You againEvil Smile
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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 2:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by itzMYattitude

finally read it
sorry for being late
 
ok
awesomeeeeeeeeee
amazinggggggggggggg
superbbbbbbbbbb
rockinggggggggg
really great job dear
*thumbs uppppp*
goons scene was really well written
was really sweeeet
loved that one completely
n al the other scenes just supeerbbbbbbb
last one too really well written
 
do continue sooooooooooon

Thank u so much for ur lovely commentBig smile

Thank u so much for liking this update.

i'll update soon.

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is good
toh mayank nupur aur pranjal after enjoying the whole day headed towards their respective houses
where pranjal and nupur are carefree about the time mayank was really tensed
the duppata scene and the goons fiassco are just like films
mayank ka nupur ko bacchana wahhhhhh
i loved it their hug
its really nice
plz cotn soon and pm me

Thank u so much for ur lovely commentBig smile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Big smile


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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 2:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiya_angel

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by jiya_angel

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wow.... awesome updateClap
Mayank is such a gentle man... love him....

and Nupur is so matureBig smile

thnx for de pm

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment

Thank u so much for liking this update.

bt u r the one, who deserve whole credit to this update.......to correcting my grammatical mistakes.Smile

thanks u so much JiyaBig smile


u saying Thank You againEvil Smile

sorry Ouch
i withdrawn my Thank u.Star

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

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yupiii
 
jaldi kero im dying to read...warna meray mental status k tu tum ko pata hai naTongueEvil Smile
 
 
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very long n uterly boring part ....i tell u ...such stupid moments ...n angry young man....n these stupid cold winds dont know how to fly ......
 
 
oki dont get shocked .......u have made fun of my mental status so itna tu banta hai
 
yeah maynk mjhy se zaroor maar khay ga.....i thought ab bola ab bola...but he stupid idiot ...wht else assurance he wants ....a girl hugged him ...let him huged again let him kiss.......pagal..n she doent love me....errrr
 
this was an awesum update...beautiful part ....the fight ...was cool.....n thn after tht was awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwDay Dreaming......y it ended.....
 
i hope nupur made a decision to confess first kyun mayank k kuch nhi hosakta ....
 
than her father ....oh so uday bhaiya might got married to sum1 from big city thts why he hates people frm ther....hm
 
but uterly beautiful update ....really gr8
continue soon
n if u have forget ur an os , an ff and an short story are dying to get ur attention.....mein chuti per hoon islyan i want  u all to work day n night ....WinkLOL
 
lov ya .....


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile

Fiza, u shocked me........kya comment hai............by god!!!!!

awwww.........u didnt like mayank??? bechara, koi usse pasand nahi karta!!!Cry

shayad nupur v pasand nahi karegi!!!Ouch

i knw......i knw........i hve so many pending FFs n os........yaad dilane k liye sukriaBig smile ............i'll sure update soon.

just wait n watch n read..................n comment after readingLOLWinkTongue

hey
dont u dare think i dnt like mayank
i can never except in ruchs ff....
i so much relate to the charcter of mayank personlly ...
this one of the reason apart frm the peace ths ff has ...tht  i like this ff so much

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