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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 35)

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:43am | IP Logged
finally read it
sorry for being late
 
ok
awesomeeeeeeeeee
amazinggggggggggggg
superbbbbbbbbbb
rockinggggggggg
really great job dear
*thumbs uppppp*
goons scene was really well written
was really sweeeet
loved that one completely
n al the other scenes just supeerbbbbbbb
last one too really well written
 
do continue sooooooooooon

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 5:55am | IP Logged

hi

the up is good
toh mayank nupur aur pranjal after enjoying the whole day headed towards their respective houses
where pranjal and nupur are carefree about the time mayank was really tensed
the duppata scene and the goons fiassco are just like films
mayank ka nupur ko bacchana wahhhhhh
i loved it their hug
its really nice
plz cotn soon and pm me

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

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yupiii
 
jaldi kero im dying to read...warna meray mental status k tu tum ko pata hai naTongueEvil Smile
 
 
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very long n uterly boring part ....i tell u ...such stupid moments ...n angry young man....n these stupid cold winds dont know how to fly ......
 
 
oki dont get shocked .......u have made fun of my mental status so itna tu banta hai
 
yeah maynk mjhy se zaroor maar khay ga.....i thought ab bola ab bola...but he stupid idiot ...wht else assurance he wants ....a girl hugged him ...let him huged again let him kiss.......pagal..n she doent love me....errrr
 
this was an awesum update...beautiful part ....the fight ...was cool.....n thn after tht was awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwDay Dreaming......y it ended.....
 
i hope nupur made a decision to confess first kyun mayank k kuch nhi hosakta ....
 
than her father ....oh so uday bhaiya might got married to sum1 from big city thts why he hates people frm ther....hm
 
but uterly beautiful update ....really gr8
continue soon
n if u have forget ur an os , an ff and an short story are dying to get ur attention.....mein chuti per hoon islyan i want  u all to work day n night ....WinkLOL
 
lov ya .....


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile

Fiza, u shocked me........kya comment hai............by god!!!!!

awwww.........u didnt like mayank??? bechara, koi usse pasand nahi karta!!!Cry

shayad nupur v pasand nahi karegi!!!Ouch

i knw......i knw........i hve so many pending FFs n os........yaad dilane k liye sukriaBig smile ............i'll sure update soon.

just wait n watch n read..................n comment after readingLOLWinkTongue

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nightdreamer_mn

It was mindblowing update...loving it....by god luved mayur each scene.....first i was scraed ut wen mayyu cam ...so nupz dad is upset wid udya...well i hop he 4give dem soon....waiting 4 more mayur scene's...


Thank u so much for ur lovely comment.Big smile

Thank u so much for liking this updateBig smile

ur wish ll going to fulfill very soon.........more mayur scene on the way.


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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahakmev

amazing loved it

Originally posted by kirti123

wow loved the part
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mayur are really adorable
hope they confess soon 


Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Nice part.
 

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiya_angel

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wow.... awesome updateClap
Mayank is such a gentle man... love him....

and Nupur is so matureBig smile

thnx for de pm

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment

Thank u so much for liking this update.

bt u r the one, who deserve whole credit to this update.......to correcting my grammatical mistakes.Smile

thanks u so much JiyaBig smile

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria-soniarti

Sujal
 
wow Beautiful update yaarHug
 
i loved Mayur scenes...
 
you write every scene very beautifully...
 
do continue soon

Originally posted by Alisha-MJHT

Fantastic update Suja
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm
 
Originally posted by -moona-

it is mind blowing Fantastic update...
Mayank just surprised Nupur and emerged as True Gentleman..
Amazing Part Suja di

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayur-ki-diwani

awesomeeeeeee part

loved it

mayur were soooo cute

continue soon

Originally posted by love.mayurarti

fabulous update


 

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