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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 34)

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
Yupiee They hugged and he Kissed her 
i am so happy
But why he didnt understand his emotions
So lovely update
Thanks for Pm 
cont soon

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SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 4:40pm | IP Logged

hey Suja don't say it's boring

it was dreaminly romantic Day Dreaming
mayu beaing hero n mayur hug so cute
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L update hun loved it Hug
thanks  for the pm

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
hey suja.....loved it............new type of mayank..so shy and so insecure........and nupur.....loved it.......u write really well......do continue soon...

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 9:41pm | IP Logged

nice update dear......

do cont soon.Smile


Edited by khushisati - 16 March 2011 at 6:48am
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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
yaar ye mayank ka problem kya jey........bol kyun nehi deta ki he loves nupur......i hope ki nupur hi kuch kare.........aur agle update jaldi se kar de na.........love u

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 1:32am | IP Logged
fabulous update

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 2:20am | IP Logged

Sujaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

OMG OMG – mayur were alone on the empty road at night.

Hayeeeeeeeeeeee what a romantic environment-perfect for our mayur

Hai ALLAH goons were attacked our angel oops maynks angles NUps

By God Mayank was fuming in anger and he has beat them very badly

Wah wah superb Mr. Mayank………Ye huye na baat

 

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww  Mayur scene was so dreamish .

The hug and kiss just magical- totally Mayurish

Yr buddhu Mayank –why didn't he say that , he loves Nups

R a kuch tou bolo- sadu kahika

Oh ho so uday is nups bro but nups dad didn't accept them

Why????????????

Whats the reason behind it?????????????

 

Suja it's a really very beautiful update

Fantastic

Loved it to the core

Do update next part soon


note:sorry for commenting late.actually i m busy with my study and will b busy next 3/4 days...


 

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:43am | IP Logged
finally read it
sorry for being late
 
ok
awesomeeeeeeeeee
amazinggggggggggggg
superbbbbbbbbbb
rockinggggggggg
really great job dear
*thumbs uppppp*
goons scene was really well written
was really sweeeet
loved that one completely
n al the other scenes just supeerbbbbbbb
last one too really well written
 
do continue sooooooooooon

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