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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 31)

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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 1:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -moona-

Awesome Part Suja di...
Love their attraction towards each other...
Nice and Romantic part too
aww love Nupur's imagination...
Thnx For the PM

Originally posted by Alisha-MJHT

Brilliant update Suja
Looking forward to the next part
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm



Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for loving this updateSmile

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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

awwwwwwwwwww
this was  the most beautiful update till date ....
the way u describe the moment ...it was beautiful..
the bus part n the last part was awesumm.......
thy r so much in love i hope the confess soon n he founds sum peace....lovly part
 

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

lolz

i reserved
i forget
my mental status is nt correct im telling u
 
too much work presure
 
sorry for double post



Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for loving this updateSmile

Fiza, tera sach me mental state kharab hai........issme koi doubt nahi haiLOL


Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 March 2011 at 10:30am

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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 1:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Annie-

Res!! Will update when will be back from the college!


Annie, yaar tu college se wapas kab ayegi???????????????ConfusedWink



Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 10 March 2011 at 1:15am
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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 1:26am | IP Logged
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Editedddddddd


Awwwwwwwwwww Suja i have to repeat the same word again n again
it was just awesome and mind- blowing update
ur update was so peaceful that i jst loved it and wanna read it more n more
its a great feeling u know..
the way describe everything i just can say hats off to u.......
its a very simple, cute, nice and wonderful ff
mayank n nupur both r so innocent- i loved them re
haye mayur bus scene- they were almost abt to kiss- ye bus conductor bhi na- iska timing itna kharab kyun hai....LOL LOL
Oh GOD the church  scene was fantastic
nups dream- wow it was toooooooo good. i wish mayur ka dream jald se jald puri ho jaye.
btw why r u saying that-------------

They started their journey together ' not only for the fair, but for a lifetime ' but they didn't know that!


hahaha baat kya hai bhai

is any twist waiting 4 us???

sujaaaaaaa it was wowest and awesomest update

loved it to the core

now eagerly waiting 4 the next part.

keep it up




Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile
u r right............conductor ki timing baht hi kharab haiWink.......kabab me haddiTongue


apki itna bada reply k liye Dhanyebad
bahut bahut shukriya
agle bar mera comment bhi apki reply ki size jaisa hoga- BY GOD

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 5:11am | IP Logged
PART1-OH! i luv d 1st part it was so nice......mayu's thoughts about nature was cute.......

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 5:17am | IP Logged
PART2-
CUTE PART..........hmmmmm gunjan is smarter.........i m excited about mayur's meeting........
hey i m reading d whole ff at once so i m comenting on each part as i m finishing it......

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 7:24am | IP Logged
PART 3-IMG!Mayur meeting was so cute........i love her character so sweet & cute......
PART 4-lovely update........the scenes were so cute nupur & mayank hv bth fallen in luv.........i luv mayank's thoughts about d bird......love them

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
It ws sooooooooooooooooo romantic...I think the most romantic update of this ff till date...Day DreamingDay Dreaming
I ws so lost in the part where mayank almost kissed her...This ws heavenly beautiful..Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming.U've written that part so beautifully...The feelings wr clearly visible in their eyes and ur words...Loved this part to the core...HugHug
Also the wedding part ws wonderful...I ws imagining nupur in those white gown and mayank in black suit..SillySilly.And then their wedding...Hayeee...Day Dreaming
Genuinely this part ws the best...Im enjoying every bit of it...
Cont soon...Now cant wait for their confession...

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