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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 30)

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 4:20pm | IP Logged
Brilliant update Suja
Looking forward to the next part
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 12:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DhanakZ

Yippee I am first to commen  Dancing
Such a lovely and so beautiful update
The way U describe whole environment is  amazing
Mayur start feeling for each other I am so happy
Thanks for Lovely Update and Pm
cont soon


Originally posted by maria-soniarti

@sajal
 
wow...Beautiful updateHugHug
 
loved Mayur scenes...n Nupur imagination
 
do continue soon
 



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Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 10 March 2011 at 12:38am
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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 12:33am | IP Logged
Smile
Originally posted by jiya_angel

like like super likeDay Dreaming

i don know why, but i feel like singing this song

"tomaar khola hawa....
lagiye paale...
tukro kore kaachi 
aami dubte raaji aachi 
aami dubte raaji aachi
tomaar khola hawa..."

sigh...Day Dreaming

Nupur's dream... i soooooooo wish it comes true
and they live happily ever afterDay Dreaming

awesome update diClap (do i hv to tell you dis everytime?Wink)

luv u loadsHug (u already know disLOL)

-jiya-



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i love this songBig smile ..... n Shaan sang it very wellBig smile

love u toooooHug
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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 12:36am | IP Logged
[QUOTE=-Faria-]

Editedddddddd


Awwwwwwwwwww Suja i have to repeat the same word again n again
it was just awesome and mind- blowing update
ur update was so peaceful that i jst loved it and wanna read it more n more
its a great feeling u know..
the way describe everything i just can say hats off to u.......
its a very simple, cute, nice and wonderful ff
mayank n nupur both r so innocent- i loved them re
haye mayur bus scene- they were almost abt to kiss- ye bus conductor bhi na- iska timing itna kharab kyun hai....LOL LOL
Oh GOD the church  scene was fantastic
nups dream- wow it was toooooooo good. i wish mayur ka dream jald se jald puri ho jaye.
btw why r u saying that-------------

They started their journey together ' not only for the fair, but for a lifetime ' but they didn't know that!


hahaha baat kya hai bhai

is any twist waiting 4 us???

sujaaaaaaa it was wowest and awesomest update

loved it to the core

now eagerly waiting 4 the next part.

keep it up

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u r right............conductor ki timing baht hi kharab haiWink.......kabab me haddiTongue

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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 12:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samiralovemayur

Wonderful update Saja
mayur moments in the bus was sweeeeeeeeeeet
mayur imagining  each other in the church wooow
hope the wil confess b4 mayu goes to back
bautiful part hun
i love th pic's u used myr loot cute
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by mayur-ki-diwani

beautiful part

sooooo adorable n sweet

loved the imagination part of mayur

continue soon


 
Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Nice part.Smile 




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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 12:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nightdreamer_mn

It was amzing one dear omg luved mayur scene...specially da dream one...by god...Day Dreaming..
i luved da way u describe da surrounding it's seems lik im watching online ....Clap


Originally posted by itzMYattitude

awesomeeeeeee update dear
loved it to the core
amazinggggggg job
mayu is really sweeeeet
loving him in ur ff
 
was in short a lovely n cute update
was bit short
do continue sooooooooon

Originally posted by arjunkidiwani

wao...waiting 4 d updates
 



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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 12:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ridi_onasis

it was so sweet.........
nups wass dreaming about her marriage with mayank....wowDay Dreaming
lovely part
suja i love ur this ff so much....its so simple but so beautiful
u tell a sweet story with simplicity
love it
thnx for pm nd plz cont soon


Originally posted by mahakmev

it's really amazing loveddd it osom do continue soon

Originally posted by ronojoy_ria

hi
the up is good
so mayank and nupur went to the much awaited village fair
the bus journey was really nice
mayank got lil upset by seeing pranjal
but pranjal is really a fu n loving guy
i liked him
mayank nupur and pranjal enjoyed the fair alot and after that they went to the church to attend vicky and latix wedding
and nupur woh toh aapne aur mayank ke shaddi ke baare mein sochne laag gaye the
plz cont soon and pm me



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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 1:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nikita-Sharma

wow mn magic all set to begin....! lovely update...cont soon n thnx fr d pmEmbarrassed


Originally posted by love.mayurarti

amazing update
luved mayur bus scene n they almost kissed and dat stupid bus conductor ruined their romance....huh
the way u describe the fair was really mindblowing n luved mayur n pranjal convo.....
the church scene was really mesmerizing n luved nupur dream..they started falling fr each other n hope their dreams would come true
luved dat sweet cute little girl tisha....tnx fr the pm n cont soon

Originally posted by kirti123

Smilewow 
that was so lovely
first the bus scene
then the church loved nupurs dreamSmile

 




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