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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 23)

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria-soniarti

@sujal
 
Beautiful update
 
Mayur were soooo sweet
 
plzzz do continue soon

Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Nice part.

Originally posted by DhanakZ

cute and lovely update
Thanks for pm
cont soon

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ur comment alwz encourage me to write further Smile

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Auroni.92

Mujhe to rotten tomato aur eggs ki jaga ek virtual hug deneka mann kar raha hain...Toh yeh lo..HugHug...Ek ke saah dusra free...LOLEmbarrassed
And r u like mayu's parents jo itni sweet update ko boring bol raha hain...This update ws just like mayu...Sweet, simple and soothing...
Mayu's parents r really blind...They cant see the simplicity and the golden heart of their son...And he is a matured guy...How cud they alway insult him infront of his younger sister...They'r so annoying...AngryAngry...Poor mayu...
Ok now the best part of this update ws the song and MN in it..Embarrassed. I mean the environment, moonlight, guitar and MAYUR...Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming all ws so dreamy...
All in all an amazing update...Do cont soon...

 

Thank u so much for ur comment.Smile

ur comment alwz encourage me.........u r so sweetBig smile

OMG! u compared me with mayu's parents!!Dead

nice comparisionLOL

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nightdreamer_mn

Beautiful update.........amazing mayur ...scene..... 
waiting 4 ur next update...Clap 

Originally posted by ridi_onasis

poor mayank..........why he underestimate himself...........nd mayank loves rabindrasangeet.........wow.......i love it too...........it was a lovely part.........loved it.........
 
Originally posted by -moona-

wow really nice update..
thnx for the pm...


 

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well, we, all bengalees love RabindraSangeetBig smile

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 7:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ronojoy_ria

hi
the up is really good
so mayank is changing day by day and this is due to the atmosophere as well as the effect of nupur
so mayank went to sutra house and there he had enjoyed a lot
sach mein mayank's heart is really nice and caring he stops sutra from killing the bird
but yaar yeh mayank ke parents yeh usse bas boring aur unsmart kun kahete haai they are his parents they should try to understand him agar woh log he usse nahin samjhenge toh woh aapne feeling kis ke saath share karega
i really dont like this kind of attitude of his parents
but anyways nupur is a good friend of him aur friend se kuch zada he ban gaye haai woh mayank ke liye
but mayank is feeling scared to express his feeling to her
plz cont soon and pm me

Originally posted by pearl10

hey...beautifully written.....
the ff name is so different & nice.............Clap
thanks 4 pm............

payal_

Originally posted by mayur-ki-diwani

awesomeeeeeee part
poor mayank
hope mayur gets together soon
continue soon
 

 

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Thank u for loving mayanks characterSmile

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 7:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by love.mayurarti

fabulous update
luved mayank n sutra scene.....n also luved mayank thoughts abt nupur n mayur convo were really sweet...
why his parents alwayzzz insulting him n praise gunjan...dnt like dem
aweeeee....the song part was amazing...luved mayur

Originally posted by chilluppp

ok
awesomeeeeeeeee update dear
really loved it to the core
the best thing is
u write it just beautifully
real it seems that u r feeling everything
great job
hats off
 
story me loving it
mayu's character is cute
a lil like me
so loving him more Lolz
in short lovely
do continue sooooooon
 
Originally posted by kirti123

wow nice update
mayanks character is really different
hope he learns to express his feelings soon'
i enjoy reading the bengali lines in middle 
nice part please dont say that ur parts are boring 
u write really wellSmile
 


 

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Thank u for liking my writtingSmile

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Wow

lovely update

loved it


Originally posted by drfizaahmed

oki dnt u dare call it boring ...

im late as usaul as i dont read ths ff in hurrry...i spend time with it....cause i love it...it makes me so peacful...i hope mayank dream get fulfil ....the song his imagination....eveything was so beautiful..lovely
gr8 update

 

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ur comment alwz encourage me to writing furtherSmile

Thank u guysBig smile

FIza, u dnt knw how much m happy after read ur commentBig smile

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Thank you so much for linking this story.Smile
 
 
 

 

 

 

 


 
Thank u so much guys for pressing the Like tab and also urs precious comments.Smile
 

 
here is the next update........i hope u like it........Smile
 

so, tell me how it is..................waiting for ur commentSmile 
 

 
 
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  Tamso Maa Jyotirgmayo '

 

 

 

 

 

 

Mayank wake up with jolt .. someone shaking him vigorously.

"Mayank, uthooo" Nupur shakes him, "its already 4." She pulled him up, "wake up .. you sleepy head!!"

"kya hai Nupur" Mayank rubbed his eyes, "itni subha ko kya hai?" he was really feeling sleepy.

"OMG!! You forgot. Kal maine tumse kya kaha tha!

"kya kaha tha!"

Mayank look at her for some moments, then completely awake, "OMG!! I completely forgot" he hits his head, "just wait for minutes."

"good boy." Nupur smile, sitting on the bed.

Mayank hurried freshen up and changed his cloths.

Before they leave, Mayank saw, Jethumoni sat on the chair ' a radio placed on the table.

"good morning Jehtumoni."

"good morning Mayu." He smile sweetly, "go ' its going tobe a lifetime experience for you!"

They leave form the house ' holding hand to hand '

 

*

 

"lets sit here" Nupur sat on a boulder ' Mayank sat beside her.

The atmosphere was so pleasant, it was still dark, stars are still visible, the pale moon hanging on the west sky  ' and a mild light spreads on the east-sky .. some birds chirruping slowly '. Their sounds mix with the sound of running water of Jhora and the murmuring sound of leaves ' it was heavenly '

 

"4:30" Nupur whisper.

 

 

Ya Devi Sarva Bhutesu Maatrirupena samsthita  

Namestasyai Namestasyai Namestasyai Namo Namah

 

 

 

Mayank startled .. look at Nupur. She smiled and pointed to the radio. It was playing Mahalaya by Birendra Krisha Bhadra.

 

 

Ya Devi Sarva Bhutesu Shaktirupena samsthita

 Namestasyai Namestasyai Namestasyai Namo Namah

 

 

He  heard about Mahalaya, but first time hear from Radio. He  had download it through net and listened every day during DurgaPuja, but this was a all new feeling '

The Mahalaya was unexplainable peaceful '

 

 

Ya Devi Sarva Bhutesu Buddhirupena samsthita

 Namestasyai Namestasyai Namestasyai Namo Namah

 

 

 

The enchanting voice of Birendra Krishna Bhadra filled up the predawn hours ' the east side of the sky was reddish ' the morning Sun indicating to come ' all birds are making noise ' the cool jungle air burshes them '

 

 

Ya Devi Sarva Bhutesu Laxmirupena samsthita

 Namestasyai Namestasyai Namestasyai Namo Namah

 

 

 

The reverberating voice of Birendra Krishna Bhardra, mesmerized them for two hours with the divine aura of his narration, as the listeners submerged their souls in quiet moments of prayers '. The silence was still prevailing even if the program ended.

 

 

 

 

 

Finally Mayank broke the silence ' he suddenly hugged Nupur, "Thanks Nupur, Thanks a lot for such a beautiful morning!"

 

"do you like it?" Nupur smile, broke the hug.

 

"I just love it" Mayank's face broke into overwhelming happiness '

 

"okay" Nupur said, "par badle me tum mere liye kya kar sakte ho?" she asked, a mischief playing on her eyes ' she rise her brows with a naughty smile.

 

Mayank wonder, "matlab?"

 

"matlab tumhe mere liye gana gana parega!" Nupur announce, still smiling naughtily.

 

"WHAT!!??" Mayank shocked, "Nupur, main gana nahi ga sakta. I am not a good singer."

 

"wo sab mujhe nahi pata, tumhe to gana hi parega!" she pouted, "ye lo!" she handed me my guitar!!!

 

Mayank again shocked, "ye-ye tum-tumne '. Kab ' matlab '"

 

"offho, Mayank" she become impatient, "kal maine guitar suna hai, aur aaj subha Jethumoni ne confirm kia k kal raat ko tum guitar baja rahe the! Baas!! Ya aur kuch puchna baki hai!"

 

"nahi ' par ' main 'wo"

 

"offho, Mayank ' ab gana gao! Yaar, mujhse kya sharmana!"

 

"par tum hasogi to nahi!"

 

"nahi, bilkul nahi .. I promise." She smile sweetly.

 

Mayank took a deep breath, but before played the guitar ' They notice two Blue Birds are sitting near them ' They watching them silently '

 

"dekho, ye dono bhi tumhara gana sunna chate hai!" Nupur said.

 

Mayank smile and start playing guitar ...

 

 

 

 

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q3vXF-pcb60&feature=related (youtube link)

 

[click d link, if u want to listened the song ']] 

 

 

[Blue Birds POV]

[Green : Male Blue Bird & Purple : Female Blue Bird]

 

Adheko Ghume

Nayano Chume

Swapono Diye Jayyy

Sharnto Vaale

Juthiro Maale

Paroshe Mridu Bayy ...

 

[Half Awake. The kiss on my indolence eyelids .. brings me the dream that I desire. The golden touch of my weary cheek, brings me the fragrance of Juhi flower.]

 

 

I was surprised to heard Mayank's voice. It was so melodious, so sweet and so appealing. If I couldn't listen in my own ear, I couldn't believe that Mayank could sing ' & that much perfectly.

 

How mean!!! you thought, Mayank couldn't do anything perfect? How could you?

 

Not like that. Actually I love to see them together!

 

 

 

Adheko Ghume

Nayano Chume

Swapono Diye Jayyy

Sharnto Vaale

Juthiro Maale

Paroshe Mridu Bayy

 

Adheko Ghume '.

 

[Half Awake. The kiss on my indolence eyelids .. brings me the dream that I desire. The golden touch of my weary cheek, brings me the fragrance of Juhi flower.]

 

 

Nupur starred at me ' I am so nervous, did she heard our convo?

 

No,dear .. look her eyes become dreamy. She's enjoying the song. And I thought, she fall on Mayank! Didn't she?


Offcourse, yes .. I also think so. Do you know, they start liking each other!! But they scared, don't know why??

 

Are, Mayank thought, he's not deserved her and Nupur thought, Mayank is the best.

 

Then??!!  

 

 

Bonero Chayaa

Monero Sathi

Basona Nahi Kichu

Pathero Dharay

Asono Paati

Nachahi Phire Pichu (2)

 

[In this deep shadow of woods, I found my companion. I wish nothing more. I live here by the side of pathway ' looking back for no more.]

 

 

Hey, look look, Mayank sing and Nupur lost herself in his voice. she closed her eyes to absorbed all sweetness of his voice.

 

Me lost too '. He sings better than us. Isn't he??

 

Yes, but, I am too impatient. Why Nupur still not confess her love for Mayank? Did she not realize?

 

Off course, she realized. But be patient dear .. she confess her love soon.

 

Really!!!!

 

 

 

Benuro Pata

Nishay Gatha

Nibaro Bhabonayyy 

Shranto Vaale

Juthiro Maale

Paroshe Mridu Baayy

 

Adheko Ghume '

 

[The foliage of the wood, Creep into my silent thought with their unspoken words. The kiss on my weary cheeks 'brings me the fragrance of Juhi flower ' half awake ']

 

[Blue Bird POV ends.]

 

[RED : Mayank's POV & GREEN : Nupur's POV]

 

Nupur closed her eyes, a sweet smile playing on her lips ' that's mean, she's enjoying the song. I was lost in her ' her dupatta flying on the air '  some strands disturbing her .. she continuously trying to send them behind, but failed. I love to see her annoying face ..

 

Meghero Khela

Gagano Thate

Alaso Lipi Likhaaa

Suduro Kon

Swarano Pate

Jagilo Morichika

Jagilo Morichika

 

[Stray clouds in the corner of the sky. Writes some lazy script, they remind me of some illusive memories of an oblivious moments.]

 

Why Mayank smile in between the song! Am I looking bad?? But who cares!! Par ye to manna parega, he's a great singer. His voice was so sweet and with full of emotions ' I could feel the feelings of the song '

 

 

Mayank look at me with a smile ' our eyes met ' we lost in each other eyes ' time stopped there.

 

 

Choitro Dine

Tapto Bela

Trino Aanchol Petee

Sunno Taale

Gandho Vela

Vashay Batasete(2)

 

[On the balmy days of Spring, I wait here, with the whiff in the air perched in the desolation of solitude.]

 

Nupur look at me ' with strange emotion! Actually her dove eyes filled with dream and love. Did she love me?? but why?? Why she loves me?? she has a boyfriend.

Ohh, that's mean, she's thinking about her boyfriend ' this dream, this love only for her dream-man, not for me!!!

 

Kapoto Dake

Madhuko Shakhe

Bijono Bedonaayy

Shranto Vaale

Juthiro Maale

Paroshe Mridu Baayy

 

[The lonely bird keeps singing, its courtship tune, in a strange melancholy. The kiss on my weary cheeks 'brings me the fragrance of Juhi flower ']

 

Today is the best day of mine. I can never imagine such kind of sweet morning come into my life. Thank you God, for sending Mayank into my life.

He's a very good friend and a human being. He's so soft hearted ' and I am scared about it, what happened if someone hurt him! He's very reserved, he wouldn't tell me anything '. But I know, he hides something in his heart!!

God, am I not capable to share his pain???

 

Adheko Ghume

Nayano Chume

Swapono Diye Jaayyy

Shranto Vaale

Juthiro Maale

Paroshe Mridu Baayyy

 

Adheko Ghume '..

 

[Half Awake. The kiss on my indolence eyelids .. brings me the dream that I desire. The golden touch of my weary cheek, brings me the fragrance of Juhi flower.]

 

[POV ends]

 


Mayank finished the song. He frowned as he notice Nupur in deep thought.

 

"Nupur" he pocked her shoulder, "kya soch rahi ho?"

 

"nothing." Nupur smile, "just thinking about you!" she bite her tongue, "I mean, your song, it was beautiful ' don't underestimate yourself, you are really a very good singer!"


"Thank you for bearing my song!" Mayank chuckled, "lets go .. its almost 8."

"haan haan, chalo, par sham ko ready rehna, mela me jana hai na!"

"haan, par wohan gana ganeko math kehna!"

"nahi!!" Nupur laughs ' Mayank join her.


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here is the next update.Smile

hope u like it.Smile ... so sorry for any mistakeEmbarrassed

plz read my note on next page.Smile

plz leave ur comment.Smile



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Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 25 October 2011 at 8:42am

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