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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 22)

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 3:14am | IP Logged
awesomeeeeeee part
poor mayank
hope mayur gets together soon
continue soon

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SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged
fabulous update
luved mayank n sutra scene.....n also luved mayank thoughts abt nupur n mayur convo were really sweet...
why his parents alwayzzz insulting him n praise gunjan...dnt like dem
aweeeee....the song part was amazing...luved mayur

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 7:18am | IP Logged
ok
awesomeeeeeeeee update dear
really loved it to the core
the best thing is
u write it just beautifully
real it seems that u r feeling everything
great job
hats off
 
story me loving it
mayu's character is cute
a lil like me
so loving him more Lolz
in short lovely
do continue sooooooon

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 8:05am | IP Logged
wow nice update
mayanks character is really different
hope he learns to express his feelings soon'
i enjoy reading the bengali lines in middle 
nice part please dont say that ur parts are boring 
u write really wellSmile

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Posted: 26 February 2011 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
update my coment at pg 20
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Posted: 26 February 2011 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Suja - jiya is right- dont dare call this boring
it was mind blowing update
i have changed lots of things on this update and made it more beautiful
i loved mayu and sutras scene
they hav enjoyed a lot.
at least mayu enjoying his life here- he is a boy of soft mind.
even sutra admit this fact
but i dont knw why his mom and dad alwz insult him
why dont they understand his feelings and emotions
GOD give them some brain....... they alwz praise gunjan and insult maynk.
its very sad yaar- i felt really bad for Mayu
i hope his parents will understand his value soon and will give him the same priority as gunjan
i loved the song- it was wonderful dear
and maynks imagination with nups was too good
loved the whole update
fantastic job SUja
keep it up


Originally posted by jiya_angel

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don't u dare call dis boring???Evil Smile

its awesome suja-di
and i loved the song... perfect selectionClap
but again.. poor mayuUnhappy... i feel sad for himCry
i hope his life will be on track soonSmile... with NupurEmbarrassed

u 4got to pm meConfused??
Cry

*edited*
i got ur pm after i finished readingLOL
 

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment.Smile

ur comment alwz encouraging me.....thanks a lotttSmile

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 5:40am | IP Logged
Wow

lovely update

loved it

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria-soniarti

@sujal
 
Beautiful update
 
Mayur were soooo sweet
 
plzzz do continue soon

Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Nice part.

Originally posted by DhanakZ

cute and lovely update
Thanks for pm
cont soon

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment.Smile

ur comment alwz encourage me to write further Smile

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