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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 19)

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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
part1
this part waz amazing
so Nupur leaving Mumbia
in her vacationz with her daddy since she already did MBA
n waiting for her resultz
n then her lil sis Gun
lol loved her part
shezz sucha fun loving person n so naughty too
so then they came there
n then start making fun of Mayu
hezz choo cuteee
opening window when the AC is on lol this part waz amazing
cant wait to read more
 
Part 2
hailaa I got lost
so who is Mayua again to Nupur???
kinda confusing
or maybe itzz just me ???
well this part waz nice
Nupur visiting her villiage
just wish could get to know who is Mayu again??
-Linu

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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .PINK.


hey            Liaba              first of all

em soo sorry for not unreserving my post
had sed ealier to myself
dat will deffi read this FF yesterday
but guess I forgot
em ghajni at timezzzLOL
 
ok so the concept is amazing
n so iz the title
the feathers of a blue bird
so Mayu rich
Nupz middle class
their CS iz amazing 2
can't wait to read more
-HeartLinu
 
 


Linu tera demag kharab ho gayi- she is not laiba - she is suja...........................

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ronojoy_ria

hi
the up is good
so nupur mind preoccupied with mayank's thoughts
oviously mayank haai he aasa
anyways due to her continuos thughts she cut her hand ohhhhhhh careless girl but here mayank is wounded due to the fall
and for this nupur is feeling bad she wnats to go to mayank and talk to him
the terrace scene is really beautiful
loking forward to the mela trip
plz cont soon and pm me

Originally posted by nightdreamer_mn

Wonderful....update....kia baat so fast...but it was really amazing i luved mayur scene ...dey were really cute one....specially nupzzi...Embarrassed

Originally posted by chilluppp

done donna done
amazingggggggg update dear
loved it to the core
superbbbbbbbb
brillliantly written
 
u r describing the feeling of nupur reallu wellllllllll
mayu is the best
loving him
great job
 
do continue sooooooooon



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Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 23 February 2011 at 10:59am
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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 11:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RiddhiB

nice part..
mayank-nupur scene was cute..
looking forward to the village fair..
cont. soon

Originally posted by maria-soniarti

Beautiful update
 
very beautifully written
 
do continue soon

Originally posted by mahakmev

osom i loved it

Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayur-ki-diwani

awesomeeeeeeeee update

loved it

continue soon

Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Just read part 4

superb

simply loved it

cont soon

Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Woohooo

nups n mayank r go to d mela

nice

but who is this kabab mein haddi??

Update soon

Originally posted by zarfishan1983

very nice update

thx alot for the pm
 

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

I AM LOVING IT
 
such an adorable update..
ek tu it was earlier....
 
n wht ths yaar i was just imaging kitchen wala part n was drolling on himm,,,,hm...meray ghar mein asi koi window kyun nhi.....
 
nupur is sooo worrried abt him...wah wah...even forget she was hurt to...n my hero....he even didnt showed her tht he was hurt..
hay kya pyar hai


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tere ghar me nahi......par mere ghar me aisa hi ek window hai.......actually maine apna bedroom ko is FF me kitchen bana diyaLOL

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Auroni.92

Amazing update...And i loved mayank's body...Day DreamingDay Dreaming
But he got injury..So sad...Nupur's concern ws obvious...But she went to ask him about the injury na...so what happened then...She didnt ask.Confused..Mone hoy mayank er muscular body dekhe sob vule gache...LOLLOL
Kintu mayank mone hoy kichu lukache tai na...I wish nupur is with him in US...Koto moja hoto...Duijoni eka...
R tomar gram bankura...WOW...Eto sundor ekta jaigai tomar gramer bari.Day Dreaming..Im jealous!!!Embarrassed
Cont soon...

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amar bankura te bari bole tumi jealous hoccho??LOL

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by varsh-mayur

hey suja loved it.................Tongue

 

Originally posted by .PINK.

part1
this part waz amazing
so Nupur leaving Mumbia
in her vacationz with her daddy since she already did MBA
n waiting for her resultz
n then her lil sis Gun
lol loved her part
shezz sucha fun loving person n so naughty too
so then they came there
n then start making fun of Mayu
hezz choo cuteee
opening window when the AC is on lol this part waz amazing
cant wait to read more
 
Part 2
hailaa I got lost
so who is Mayua again to Nupur???
kinda confusing
or maybe itzz just me ???
well this part waz nice
Nupur visiting her villiage
just wish could get to know who is Mayu again??
-Linu

Linu, ur comment confused me......now m confused who is mayuLOL

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