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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 145)

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arhi_maneet

This is most bakwas and faltu ff ! No romance sirf rona chal raha hai ! aur upar se itne saare mistakes, spelings & grammatical mistakes...che! Shame on u !
 
 
ohh that can only cum from mouth of arhi n maneet reader...who is so use to to read pron ..so u shud go n read tha bu***..s***t...here ur not needed...as this pure writing...not sick..lusty desires...
 
get out of here...
 

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arhi_maneet

This is most bakwas and faltu ff ! No romance sirf rona chal raha hai ! aur upar se itne saare mistakes, spelings & grammatical mistakes...che! Shame on u !





hum sirf itna kahenge ke kuch bhi comment karne se pehle aap please ek bar ROMANCE ka matlab jaan le phir aapko khud hi farq samajh aayega...aur rahi kisi ko bhi criticize karne ki baat to bas yehi kahenge ke .....the best place to criticize is infront of your mirror Smile...!

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arhi_maneet

This is most bakwas and faltu ff ! No romance sirf rona chal raha hai ! aur upar se itne saare mistakes, spelings & grammatical mistakes...che! Shame on u !


just shut your mouth and go away...what a bulshit..people haden't left ff section...



suja don't care about this person he/she is no one ...we loved this ff don't think about his comment.

and we want a quick update...



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Posted: 04 January 2012 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arhi_maneet

This is most bakwas and faltu ff ! No romance sirf rona chal raha hai ! aur upar se itne saare mistakes, spelings & grammatical mistakes...che! Shame on u !

lol if its a Faltu ff then go n write ur own... the peoples who jus know how 2 raise fingers on others r just like Fools,they shud first see who they r...! they know how 2 say such rubbish but when the time cum 2 show their talent they jus blow up...! 
btw ur comments were neither desired nor required Smile 

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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

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OMG
tht is a dam surpring one
man this wanst at all  xpected from this story
like this..mjhy tu laga tha end mein hoga
 
awseum update
its like feeling happines yet not feeling of contentment
wonderful part deary
 
there flashback has been amzing always
 
it was so beautiful yet naughty too..nupur bhi na
 
yet she has too do to much now way to much to get her mayank
ther mariage has been done yet there is a big BUT at the end of this update
 
 
wah kya retrn birthday gift hai
thnsk a lot dear
 
cont soon



Thank u so much for ur beautiful commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile

i knw, it was lil shoking update ...bt what happen happen for good ...  u r right ... in this update u can see happiness, bt not contentment coz there was no contentment ... mayur loves each other ... bt the barrier of 5 long year was still there ...Confused

m happy that u like this returned gift ...Wink


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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 18anila1

Awesome update Suja APU...
khub valo hoyeche...
ami ai update a MayUr er biye toh expect e korini...
bt it was awesome...Day Dreaming
i loved dis update...
d way u write it...
n d song too...
bt m now scared abt wht will Mayank do to her now...
i hope tumi shob thik kore dibe...plzzz
waiting eagerly for d next part...
love u APU...HugHugHug


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Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile

i knw, it was lil shoking update ...bt what happen happen for good ...  ami bujhte parchi mayur er biye ta keo asha korte pareni ...tabe story er jonno eta dorkar chilo ...tabe 5 bochorer gap bhorti hote ektu time to lagbeiEmbarrassed


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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Sanchu--

sujata...wow...u literaaly gave me a shock!!!...
seriously...this was unexpected...but i loved it...
 
sob theke bhalo legechhe...the FlashBack...they are seriously the USP of this story...they are just sooo superbly fantastic...and i have a feeling i would never wanna let that end...
and then coming to the marraige ceremony...wow...imagining mayank in dhuti panjaabi gave me  a shiver...i sooo loved that...
and the song u chose that tumi robe Nirobe...its one of my fav rabindra sangeet...
great work sujata...
i really liked this...though had to wait really long...i know u were little caught up with work...but this update was worth the wait...
very very nice...
 
just wishing things will be solved between the couple...afterall howver much he denies its still a fact mayank had always loved Nupur and stilll does soo...hoping this denial phase would be over sooon...
 
great job...update sooner...
 
much love
Sanchari



Thank u so much for ur beautiful commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this updateSmile

Thanku so much sanchari ... tomar flashback bhalo legeche jene khub bhalo lagloSmile ... asole dhuti panjaabi te mayank k dekhte sotti bhison bhalo lagbeWink ... tai naWink

dont worry...everything ll sort out soonSmile


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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ronojoy_ria

hi
the up is good beautifullt written and excuted
so jethumoni tells mayank that he wants him to marry nupur
mayank who had blocked all his feelings in his heart was really n a big deleamma as he cant say no to jethomoni as he always supoorted him and also gives strength
mayank agrees to marry nupur
mr sengupta who felt guilty for his deeds tells mayank that it was not nupur's fault  it was him bcoz of whom nupur took the decission to marry neil
he says mayank to forgive him
mayank who still respect his elders tells him that he is agree to amrry nupur
here nupur who knew that mayank doesnt love her anymore
is in big confusion as why mayank agreed to marry
her
chitra made nupur understand that it was all destiny's plan and she have to flow with it
on the day of marriage
mayank and nupur family including gunjan and pranjal gathered in the tenple
nupur and mayank got married following all the rituals
they are one tied in one knot but they still are not happy to fullest
so we have to wait for the betterness to go from their heart
plz cont soon and pm me
 


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