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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: -Faria-

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Hey Suja
Thank u so much for updating my fav ff
 it was a beautiful update as usual
awwwwww - what happen to nups?????
is she falling for mayank????????
Hayeeeeeeeee at first mayank and now nups -both r in love with each other....


Hmmmmmm she was hurt when she saw that maynk got injured
She was worried abt him and was trying to find some excuses to go to jethumoni's house
wah wah wah- and finally she got the chance

the terrace scene was superb.
loved mayur covo
both want to complete their MBA

but suja tell me one thing - nups came here to ask abt mayus injury
but i think she forgot it.LOL
aisa he hota hai- pyaar main log bade bade cheez a bhul jati hai.LOL

wah- meela- my fav
i love meela- so now  mayur r going to meela
yeeeee i hope they will enjoy a lot
but who is pranjal- nups ki yaar- kahi maynk jealous na ho jaye.LOL
bechara- tak tak- kuch ulta sidha na sochle


it was wonderful update sweety
rocking one
keep it up
and try to update before tuesday- i mean monday upate karo-plizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


take care


Thank u so much for ur lovely comment.

thik kahan....pyar sab kuch bhula deta hai!!!

i know......u r curios for Pranjal's entry.....his identity ll revel soon....till then enjoyyyyyy⭐️

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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: -Annie-

🤣 I got the pm late..Had already start reading..🤣
OMG! Suja babes!
U rocked with it...
Seriously...
Hayyye Nupz falling for Mayu...
The cut scene...
Cute!!!
Simply adorable update...
Muahhs!
Love u re...
One of the cutest updates...
Thanks,
Annie


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Posted: 13 years ago
hey Liaba first of all
em soo sorry for not unreserving my post
had sed ealier to myself
dat will deffi read this FF yesterday
but guess I forgot
em ghajni at timezzz😆
 
ok so the concept is amazing
n so iz the title
the feathers of a blue bird
so Mayu rich
Nupz middle class
their CS iz amazing 2
can't wait to read more
-❤️Linu
 
 
.PINK. thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
part1
this part waz amazing
so Nupur leaving Mumbia
in her vacationz with her daddy since she already did MBA
n waiting for her resultz
n then her lil sis Gun
lol loved her part
shezz sucha fun loving person n so naughty too
so then they came there
n then start making fun of Mayu
hezz choo cuteee
opening window when the AC is on lol this part waz amazing
cant wait to read more
 
Part 2
hailaa I got lost
so who is Mayua again to Nupur???
kinda confusing
or maybe itzz just me ???
well this part waz nice
Nupur visiting her villiage
just wish could get to know who is Mayu again??
-Linu
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: .PINK.


hey            Liaba              first of all

em soo sorry for not unreserving my post
had sed ealier to myself
dat will deffi read this FF yesterday
but guess I forgot
em ghajni at timezzz😆
 
ok so the concept is amazing
n so iz the title
the feathers of a blue bird
so Mayu rich
Nupz middle class
their CS iz amazing 2
can't wait to read more
-❤️Linu
 
 



Linu tera demag kharab ho gayi- she is not laiba - she is suja...........................
SujaLuvsMayur thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is good
so nupur mind preoccupied with mayank's thoughts
oviously mayank haai he aasa
anyways due to her continuos thughts she cut her hand ohhhhhhh careless girl but here mayank is wounded due to the fall
and for this nupur is feeling bad she wnats to go to mayank and talk to him
the terrace scene is really beautiful
loking forward to the mela trip
plz cont soon and pm me


Originally posted by: nightdreamer_mn

Wonderful....update....kia baat so fast...but it was really amazing i luved mayur scene ...dey were really cute one....specially nupzzi...😳


Originally posted by: chilluppp

done donna done

amazingggggggg update dear
loved it to the core
superbbbbbbbb
brillliantly written
 
u r describing the feeling of nupur reallu wellllllllll
mayu is the best
loving him
great job
 
do continue sooooooooon




Thank u so much for ur lovely comment 😊

 


Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: RiddhiB

nice part..
mayank-nupur scene was cute..
looking forward to the village fair..
cont. soon


Originally posted by: maria-soniarti

Beautiful update

 
very beautifully written
 
do continue soon


Originally posted by: mahakmev

osom i loved it

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment😊

SujaLuvsMayur thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: mayur-ki-diwani

awesomeeeeeeeee update


loved it

continue soon


Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

Just read part 4

superb

simply loved it

cont soon


Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

Woohooo

nups n mayank r go to d mela

nice

but who is this kabab mein haddi??

Update soon


Originally posted by: zarfishan1983

very nice update

thx alot for the pm

 

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

I AM LOVING IT

 
such an adorable update..
ek tu it was earlier....
 
n wht ths yaar i was just imaging kitchen wala part n was drolling on himm,,,,hm...meray ghar mein asi koi window kyun nhi.....
 
nupur is sooo worrried abt him...wah wah...even forget she was hurt to...n my hero....he even didnt showed her tht he was hurt..
hay kya pyar hai



Thank u so much for ur lovely comment😊

tere ghar me nahi......par mere ghar me aisa hi ek window hai.......actually maine apna bedroom ko is FF me kitchen bana diya😆

SujaLuvsMayur thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Amazing update...And i loved mayank's body...😍😍
But he got injury..So sad...Nupur's concern ws obvious...But she went to ask him about the injury na...so what happened then...She didnt ask.😕..Mone hoy mayank er muscular body dekhe sob vule gache...😆😆
Kintu mayank mone hoy kichu lukache tai na...I wish nupur is with him in US...Koto moja hoto...Duijoni eka...
R tomar gram bankura...WOW...Eto sundor ekta jaigai tomar gramer bari.😍..Im jealous!!!😳
Cont soon...


Thank u so much for ur lovely comment😊

amar bankura te bari bole tumi jealous hoccho??😆