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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 134)

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayurlove

It was am awsome update.
Although Mayank was very rude to Nupur.Bt she deserves this.Mayank was also in pain for five years.The pain of love,pain of rejection, pain of betray ,pain of loneliness, pain of helplessness, pain of hopelessness and pain of those beautiful moments they spent  together.
U very well portrayed Mayank's emotion.
The tear which came in his eye was even for Nupur.He can't see her in Pain and in tears.
Thnx for pm and update and wo b Eid pr.it was a very nice gift.
Plzzz next update sooon.


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mayank was very helpless... he is still in trauma ... n he has become heartless only to hide his fear in front of everyone ...

ll update tomorrow ...


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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha

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thanks for the update suja...
it was painfu yet sad...u really made me cry 
mayank said alot to her... but mayank ka bhi fault nai hai he suffered a lot...and nupur sumwhere did wrong...
mayank ni buhat harsh wordings use ki hai... Cry
 
mayank going back after 2 days oh gosh...
jaithelmoni m sure would do somthg to stop him or make thngs better...
 
pls cont soon...
 
loved it dear...
thanks again dear...Hug
 



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awww Maha, m so sorry to made u cryOuch 

mayak ka wording to harsh hoga hi na ... nupur bhi aise hi words use kia tha ...

just wait for jethumoni's planWink

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by binudamania

amazing update


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Originally posted by love.mayurarti

superb update
feeling really bad fr mayur...cant c dem like dis



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Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Nice update.


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Originally posted by kirti123

nice part
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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Ruchi--

Awesome update dear...
Mayur confrontation and their convo was very
emotional...Mayank is not believing on her...poor 
nupur...but she is facing what she decided for herself.

beautifully written
cont soon



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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Auroni.92

Goshhh it ws beautifully written...
I ws sooo engrossed in their love hate convos...mayank has changed drastically but what he said ws all becoz of his anger...i cant blame him...nupur's every word gave him utter pain that made him that rude and heartless..but im sure nupur will win back him with her love...
Cant wait for the mxt part...
cont soon...



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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ronojoy_ria

hi
the up is good
so nupur is remembering her older days when she was happy with mayank she remmebered that on this day she confessed her love towards mayank mayank was so happy to hear her confession but now everyhting is changed
on the other hand mayank is all going through same thing same pain but as he has changed himselg into a harden man he wipe out all his emotions and pain from his heart
the convo between udita and mayank is really nice due to udita mayank became hapy after so many years but the meeting of him with nupur made him again sad
he taunt and humilated her with all harshness
poor nupur cant bore his rawness she fainted off
hope that soon jhuthimoni and mr sengupta do something so that mayank and nupur again became one
plz cont soon and pm me



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Originally posted by .rumki.

feeling bad 4 nupur.hope everything would be f9


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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arjun-forever

ok sorry guys to break ur spamming sessions...but i was just going through most of it...and i have to acknowledge...u guys are tooo cute and adorable...:):)
aww...very very sweet friendship...God Bless

cute and adorable????? Shocked

hum kab se cute n adorable ho gye pata hi nahi chalaShocked ROFL

waise, hum sab shaitan ki toli hai ... ROFL
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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayurlove

when v r going to have an update sujata?Smile

Originally posted by clustersofstar

update soon

I ll update tomorrow Smile

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