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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 133)

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 10:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by palz_ArTi4ever

didnt get pm 4 itUnhappy

res

beautifully written...the more i read this ff,the more i crave 4 it...!! plzz continue soon ok?the distance between mayur pierces my heart...wonderfully written...!Smile great job!!



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sorry dear, acctualy u have resed before i send pmsEmbarrassed 

awww ... thank u for linking this ff that much ... dont worry, this distance ll removed soon


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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

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Phew

This was actually the way I wanted there confrontation, I never wanted mayank saw Nupur n open his arms to embrace her, yet she needs to feel what actually happens one the person  love the most say tht ur nthing but filth

 

Strting with his morning wch he was fighting with, than the uditi scne was so cute, his affection with her came back like this, he still has heart of golden,

 

But the bst part was ther confrontation..

His words right at the spot'

Nupur actually didn't trusted him, if she would have said the truth he should'nt have hated himself tht much for loving her, he shouldn't have felt his bst moments only beautifully monet turning to sore'

Moreover he should'nt have hated tht mayank '

Nupur still has his love to hold to cherish but he has nthing except her harsh words throughout these 5 years'

Though its was painful for bth of them..but for him it will hurt him double as I know he still cant see her in tears'

 

 

But I wonder wht holds next'wht will happen now'

I m waitng for ur surprise'.pls update soon

 

PS'mjhy eidi chaiy'game k update..mayur moments k sath..Friday tak bus'.n FOBB firday nhi tu sat'n no arguments on tht'its an order'..

 




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Fiza, m relly happy that u like this update ... i too think, nupur deserve this ... she got back what she did ... its payback time.

update to shop me milta hai na ... jao aur le lo ... main itni jaldi udpate nahi de sakti ...sorry ...

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princess-mahum

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suja dee em so sorry for late comment... sholly Embarrassed
umm now about update... So dats really awesum written...Clap
nupur's situation is painful yet bad, but at the same time mayank is also not happie na Cry 
feeling sad for both of them... now let c kaise nupur mayank ko mana paegi n sab acha acha hojaega un k beej...!
thanks for the pm n sorrie for the very late rep dee...
LOVE yA Hug



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its ok Mahum ... take ur own time read updates ... koi jaldi nahi hai Smile

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SamiraARTiMAYUR

I don't know wat to say Suja except that my heart goes out for Nupur Cry when Mayank laugh at her n wiping his tears that tear wasn't for laughting but was his heart which was crying out for Nupur ..

the update was painfull felt bed for both of them but well written hun
my words wouldn't do justice so i'll leave it that way well done Suja
thanks for the update n EID CARD
EAD Mubarak to u too hun Hug




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u r right Samira, mayank still loves nupur ... bt what nupur did in past, he has become scared to accept her ... 
bt dont worry, sab kuch thik ho jayega ... just wait ...


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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by clustersofstar

thank for the pmSmile...eid mubarak  to you too ... the flow of emotions u protary is beautiful flawless writing Clap



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Originally posted by arjunratirocks

hey very beautiful update but i don't like this changed mayank plzz hame purna wala mayank wapas laa do
and thanks for the pm and ha next time plzzz update soon plzz


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dont worry dear ... puranawala mayank jaldi aayega ... just wait ofr some more timeSmile

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DhanakZ

Oh My poor Nupur
Feeling So bad for mayur
Hope every Thing will be solve soon
thanks for pm


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Originally posted by -ridionasis-

Mayank reaction was expected...i'm eagerly looking forward to see what jethumoni will do...plz update soon 


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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nuckts

it was a rocking update!!!!!!
but i felt very bad for nupz Cry
mayank please nupur ne jo kiya woh galat tha par uski ek wajah thi
please mayur ko mila do
iss jhagde ki saja mat do un dono ko
awwe udita was so cute!Embarrassed
and i hope mayank apna yeh gussa apne un family members ko dikhayeAngry his current behaviour serves them well! but not nupz 
i hope jethumoni is gonna do something now!
thanx 4 d pmSmile
love yaHug
                                         love nuckts!!!!!!!Smile




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dont worry dear ... mayur jaldi milege ... just wait ...

m happy that u like udia ... she is really a sweet girl ..

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by parul_bansal

EID MUBARAK 
nic update
may god bless u...


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Originally posted by arjun-forever

the story is again turning interesting...!!!!

waiting for the next part!!...mayank'sbehaviour was expected...but am sure he never meant those words...!!...asa matter of fact he still loves nupur...


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u r right sanchari ... mayank still loves her ... bt he was scared ... he is still in trauma ...n thats y he has become heartless ...only just he wanted to hide his fear...


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