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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 133)

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SamiraARTiMAYUR

I don't know wat to say Suja except that my heart goes out for Nupur Cry when Mayank laugh at her n wiping his tears that tear wasn't for laughting but was his heart which was crying out for Nupur ..

the update was painfull felt bed for both of them but well written hun
my words wouldn't do justice so i'll leave it that way well done Suja
thanks for the update n EID CARD
EAD Mubarak to u too hun Hug




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u r right Samira, mayank still loves nupur ... bt what nupur did in past, he has become scared to accept her ... 
bt dont worry, sab kuch thik ho jayega ... just wait ...


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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by clustersofstar

thank for the pmSmile...eid mubarak  to you too ... the flow of emotions u protary is beautiful flawless writing Clap



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Originally posted by arjunratirocks

hey very beautiful update but i don't like this changed mayank plzz hame purna wala mayank wapas laa do
and thanks for the pm and ha next time plzzz update soon plzz


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dont worry dear ... puranawala mayank jaldi aayega ... just wait ofr some more timeSmile

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DhanakZ

Oh My poor Nupur
Feeling So bad for mayur
Hope every Thing will be solve soon
thanks for pm


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Originally posted by -ridionasis-

Mayank reaction was expected...i'm eagerly looking forward to see what jethumoni will do...plz update soon 


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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nuckts

it was a rocking update!!!!!!
but i felt very bad for nupz Cry
mayank please nupur ne jo kiya woh galat tha par uski ek wajah thi
please mayur ko mila do
iss jhagde ki saja mat do un dono ko
awwe udita was so cute!Embarrassed
and i hope mayank apna yeh gussa apne un family members ko dikhayeAngry his current behaviour serves them well! but not nupz 
i hope jethumoni is gonna do something now!
thanx 4 d pmSmile
love yaHug
                                         love nuckts!!!!!!!Smile




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dont worry dear ... mayur jaldi milege ... just wait ...

m happy that u like udia ... she is really a sweet girl ..

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by parul_bansal

EID MUBARAK 
nic update
may god bless u...


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Originally posted by arjun-forever

the story is again turning interesting...!!!!

waiting for the next part!!...mayank'sbehaviour was expected...but am sure he never meant those words...!!...asa matter of fact he still loves nupur...


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u r right sanchari ... mayank still loves her ... bt he was scared ... he is still in trauma ...n thats y he has become heartless ...only just he wanted to hide his fear...


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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayurlove

It was am awsome update.
Although Mayank was very rude to Nupur.Bt she deserves this.Mayank was also in pain for five years.The pain of love,pain of rejection, pain of betray ,pain of loneliness, pain of helplessness, pain of hopelessness and pain of those beautiful moments they spent  together.
U very well portrayed Mayank's emotion.
The tear which came in his eye was even for Nupur.He can't see her in Pain and in tears.
Thnx for pm and update and wo b Eid pr.it was a very nice gift.
Plzzz next update sooon.


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mayank was very helpless... he is still in trauma ... n he has become heartless only to hide his fear in front of everyone ...

ll update tomorrow ...


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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha

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thanks for the update suja...
it was painfu yet sad...u really made me cry 
mayank said alot to her... but mayank ka bhi fault nai hai he suffered a lot...and nupur sumwhere did wrong...
mayank ni buhat harsh wordings use ki hai... Cry
 
mayank going back after 2 days oh gosh...
jaithelmoni m sure would do somthg to stop him or make thngs better...
 
pls cont soon...
 
loved it dear...
thanks again dear...Hug
 



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awww Maha, m so sorry to made u cryOuch 

mayak ka wording to harsh hoga hi na ... nupur bhi aise hi words use kia tha ...

just wait for jethumoni's planWink

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by binudamania

amazing update


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Originally posted by love.mayurarti

superb update
feeling really bad fr mayur...cant c dem like dis



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Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Nice update.


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Originally posted by kirti123

nice part
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