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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 128)

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Posted: 08 November 2011 at 1:16am | IP Logged
It was am awsome update.
Although Mayank was very rude to Nupur.Bt she deserves this.Mayank was also in pain for five years.The pain of love,pain of rejection, pain of betray ,pain of loneliness, pain of helplessness, pain of hopelessness and pain of those beautiful moments they spent  together.
U very well portrayed Mayank's emotion.
The tear which came in his eye was even for Nupur.He can't see her in Pain and in tears.
Thnx for pm and update and wo b Eid pr.it was a very nice gift.
Plzzz next update sooon.


Edited by mayurlove - 08 November 2011 at 5:19am

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Posted: 08 November 2011 at 1:45am | IP Logged
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thanks for the update suja...
it was painfu yet sad...u really made me cry 
mayank said alot to her... but mayank ka bhi fault nai hai he suffered a lot...and nupur sumwhere did wrong...
mayank ni buhat harsh wordings use ki hai... Cry
 
mayank going back after 2 days oh gosh...
jaithelmoni m sure would do somthg to stop him or make thngs better...
 
pls cont soon...
 
loved it dear...
thanks again dear...Hug
 


Edited by drmaha - 08 November 2011 at 7:28am

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Posted: 08 November 2011 at 5:46am | IP Logged
amazing update

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Posted: 08 November 2011 at 6:35am | IP Logged
superb update
feeling really bad fr mayur...cant c dem like dis

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Posted: 08 November 2011 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Awesome update dear...
Mayur confrontation and their convo was very
emotional...Mayank is not believing on her...poor 
nupur...but she is facing what she decided for herself.

beautifully written
cont soon

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Posted: 08 November 2011 at 7:28am | IP Logged
editd my comments on pg

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Posted: 08 November 2011 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Nice update.

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nice part
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