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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 126)

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
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Siujaaa sweet heart
thank u so much for ur update
i was waiting for thisupdae
and i got it on EID DAY

Sujaaa the update was sad yet beautiful
u made me cry hun
mayur scene was very emotional and painful.

i know mayank was too rude to nups
but i cant blame him its natural
and nups -GOD felt er sad for him
she was very happy to see maayk but all her dram shuttered within a sec...
sighhh i hope ki tera next update painful a\na ho
waiting for ur next part
keep it up
and d update soon






Edited by -Faria- - 07 November 2011 at 1:00pm

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. mayank is so rude with nupur. they are so much in pain. plz ab aur saha nehi jata. plz plz continue soon

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beautifully written...the more i read this ff,the more i crave 4 it...!! plzz continue soon ok?the distance between mayur pierces my heart...wonderfully written...!Smile great job!!


Edited by palz_ArTi4ever - 10 November 2011 at 8:21am

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
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Phew

This was actually the way I wanted there confrontation, I never wanted mayank saw Nupur n open his arms to embrace her, yet she needs to feel what actually happens one the person  love the most say tht ur nthing but filth

 

Strting with his morning wch he was fighting with, than the uditi scne was so cute, his affection with her came back like this, he still has heart of golden,

 

But the bst part was ther confrontation..

His words right at the spot…

Nupur actually didn't trusted him, if she would have said the truth he should'nt have hated himself tht much for loving her, he shouldn't have felt his bst moments only beautifully monet turning to sore…

Moreover he should'nt have hated tht mayank …

Nupur still has his love to hold to cherish but he has nthing except her harsh words throughout these 5 years…

Though its was painful for bth of them..but for him it will hurt him double as I know he still cant see her in tears…

 

 

But I wonder wht holds next…wht will happen now…

I m waitng for ur surprise….pls update soon

 

PS…mjhy eidi chaiy…game k update..mayur moments k sath..Friday tak bus….n FOBB firday nhi tu sat…n no arguments on tht…its an order…..

 



Edited by drfizaahmed - 09 November 2011 at 6:13am

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
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suja dee em so sorry for late comment... sholly Embarrassed
umm now about update... So dats really awesum written...Clap
nupur's situation is painful yet bad, but at the same time mayank is also not happie na Cry 
feeling sad for both of them... now let c kaise nupur mayank ko mana paegi n sab acha acha hojaega un k beej...!
thanks for the pm n sorrie for the very late rep dee...
LOVE yA Hug


Edited by princess-mahum - 13 November 2011 at 2:51pm

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I don't know wat to say Suja except that my heart goes out for Nupur CryCryCryCryCry when Mayank laugh at her n wiping his tears that tear wasn't for laughting but was his heart which was crying out for Nupur ..

the update was painfull felt bed for both of them but well written hun
my words wouldn't do justice so i'll leave it that way well done Suja
thanks for the update n EID CARD
EAD Mubarak to u too hun Hug

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