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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 124)

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ronojoy_ria

hi
the up is good
so mayank is back but with a bang
his jethomoni whom he loved and who cares for him welcomed him
he is surprised to see his room just like the way he left it
everystuffs in the room were the same and especially the curtains which drag him back to his past memories
but now is changed he brings himself to the reality and made him realised that he is all alone
with this realisation he went down where his jethomoni and his family was waiting for him
they were happy to see him after along period of time
but mayank is cold towards them
the behaviour he recieved from his family made himself so hard hearted that he had no feelings for them
they started to treat him same as they used to but this time mayank without bearing it silently he barked back
by seeing his this kind of reaction his family including jethomoni is shocked
here nupur is feeling a restlessness in her mind
she saw mayank after that incident she wants to go to him to tell him how much she missed him but didnt find any courage
she is also shattered
but i hope they both meet soon and remove all their misunderstanding
plz cont soon and pm me



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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Ruchi--

Hey suja...
nice part dear...loved how mayank remembers nupur
in his room...song choice is perfect..I love this song of nikaah...
and  well goes with the situation...
You know I felt happy when mayank replied back and I want
even more from him...
Waiting for next update soon.


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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -ridionasis-

so finally Mayank is back...I know it's not good to talk like that with elders especially with parents...but what did they do with Mayank I think Mayank is doing right...I can't wait for mayur meeting...plz inn dono ko jaldi mila do...i want to know Mayank's reaction when he'll get to know that Nupur didn't get married...I want to know the reaction when Nupur will get to know about the changed Mayank...so plz update soon...till then be happy nd take careTongue



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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 11:51am | IP Logged
@sujata
 
r u going to update next part???????
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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nuckts

super duper like for this update dear!
ahha!payback time for the insult to the family Evil Smile
i loved the way he insulted gunjan Evil Smile now she will come to know who is jealous of whom?
awwee please don't seperate mayur please make the patch up as soon as possibleBroken Heart
i love this story
gr8 update
love yaHug
                                                       love nuckts!!Smile




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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aysha1989

Thank you so much for updating... cant wait till they meet Embarrassed
Hope Mayank wont be too rude towards her Stern Smile



Originally posted by binudamania

superb update..
do cnt soon

Originally posted by love.mayurarti

awesome update

 



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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 11:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Wow Suja u updated FOBB

Yeee- thank u so much hun

I was waiting for ur update-

Hey I thot we will get mayur scene in this part..

But u bananabati ' didn't add any mayur scene..

Arghhh I wish I could kil u..

Any way the update was superb as usual'..

U've changed Mayank a lot- he was rude to his parents.. actually I cant blame him.. situation made him to behaved rudely with family member'

 

Yaar tu itna lazy kyun hai??? Ye chot sa update dekhar u r telling that it's a pretty long update- long update my foot'L L L

Awww my poor nups..she was crying badly..

GOSH I hope nups will get her love soon. I just wish ki maynk uski saath rudly behave na kare'

I hope ki the will reunite soon

Fabulous update suja

Awesome one

Keep it up





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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 11:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maria.

sujataHugHugsis beautiful update
i loved the change in Mayank
waiting for Mayur meeting
plz try to update soon
 


Originally posted by mayuloveu

suparb update. bas akhon mayur ke miliye dao

Originally posted by kirti123

superb part Smile



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