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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 123)

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

 

Me frst me frst ..

Hello

Finally my FOBB updated

Mein tu pm dekh ker khush hogai k game bhi sath mein update hoa hai

Yeah dhooka tha humaray sath ..manhoos

Cuing to update

 

Mera mayank'

I love jethumoni'he is the only person who understand him'n he was wrong he hasn't  changed he died actually'sigh

 

No materr wht he loves way to much to forgot her, or to hate her, or himself'.

The way he was imagining evrythng in room was amzing

 

I feel like giving his family errr'.

But I love this part, the way he talked with them they so desrve it'

We shud have came n welcomed u'.wao'whhn son was going u even didn't bother to know where he was..n now'.

After so long he was eating like hone tu asa tu hoga na

The Nupur scnce was amazing but mayank reposne was scarry..

The way she waited for him to play guitar n he didn't, she need to know tht mayank is lost'.OH god

It was painful it was hopeful

Wonderful part'.i love this FF'.its the bst evry'

Lov ya fiza



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Fiza, i was absent-minded then ...thats y i made that mistake...anyways ...chalo november fool to ban gaye na...LOL

me too dont like his family ...par kya kren ... family change karne ka option nahi hota naWink

i hope u like next part ...n u dont wanna kill meTongue ..kyunki iskee pure chances haiLOL



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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 11:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 18anila1

welcome back...
awesome update...
loved it lodsss...
i sooo liked it wen Mayank answered back...By God
bt i was sooo sad wen Nupur saw him n took his name n wen he felt it he frowned...Disapprove
bt i know u will make everything well soon...hain na sis!!!!!!
btw m still waiiting for Mayank to insult his family more badly...Evil SmileEvil Smile
i hope Nupur's love will make him as our old Mayank again...dat too asap!!!!!!
waiting eagerly for d next update...
love u sis...HugHugHug


ps: sis it wasnt boring ok!!!!!! i loved it...
      n han yeh long update tha kya!!!!!heheLOL
     parhte parhte kab khatam ho gaya pata hi nhi chala n mujhe toh laga arey itna chota sa update hain...heheLOL


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anila, dont worry dear ...just wait ... i hope, u ll like future update, when mayank insulted his family very very worse way,

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayurlove

Thank God u update.Dancing
I was eagerly waiting for this.
I m really liking this Mayank specially his conversation on lunch.
Plz next update jaldi .
plzzzSmile
or at least tell when will u update next.
I daily check this ff in the hope of update.Confused
Thnx for updateHug



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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 11:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DhanakZ

Nice update dear
Mayank become so rude yar
But Still i hope that Nupur will changed him back
thanks for pm 
cont soon



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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SamiraARTiMAYUR

Welcome back Suja Hug

hey don't say it's boring not at all hun lovely prt
actualy somehow i'm glad Mayu answered back to Gun
but not his parents although they behave badly
n good Mayu is regreting his behavier
this was fabulous update updat Suja
n i'm gonna loving the future update
but can't wait to read next updates
plzzz Suja update GAME  if u can no presure okey
thanks for th pm


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samira, i knw, its not good to answer  ur parents back,  but that was only mayank quick reaction...what he had earned form his parents, he only giving back to them. but with it, he regreeted his behavior...thts the main point.
i ho[e u lllike future update too.

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by immayurfan

Nice update
Continue soon

Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Lovly update.

Originally posted by crazymayurian

amsxing



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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ronojoy_ria

hi
the up is good
so mayank is back but with a bang
his jethomoni whom he loved and who cares for him welcomed him
he is surprised to see his room just like the way he left it
everystuffs in the room were the same and especially the curtains which drag him back to his past memories
but now is changed he brings himself to the reality and made him realised that he is all alone
with this realisation he went down where his jethomoni and his family was waiting for him
they were happy to see him after along period of time
but mayank is cold towards them
the behaviour he recieved from his family made himself so hard hearted that he had no feelings for them
they started to treat him same as they used to but this time mayank without bearing it silently he barked back
by seeing his this kind of reaction his family including jethomoni is shocked
here nupur is feeling a restlessness in her mind
she saw mayank after that incident she wants to go to him to tell him how much she missed him but didnt find any courage
she is also shattered
but i hope they both meet soon and remove all their misunderstanding
plz cont soon and pm me



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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Ruchi--

Hey suja...
nice part dear...loved how mayank remembers nupur
in his room...song choice is perfect..I love this song of nikaah...
and  well goes with the situation...
You know I felt happy when mayank replied back and I want
even more from him...
Waiting for next update soon.


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