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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 118)

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DhanakZ

It was too Good and heart wrenching part 
I can feel their pain
But plz keep your promise and Next time gave Us Lots of Mayur moments
thanks For Pm 
conts oon


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Originally posted by -ridionasis-

mayank ne apne apko kya bana diya yaar...bas bahut huya ye rona dhona aur nehi...ab toh sab kuch thik hona hey.hey na suja...aur tum ye mayank ki baap ko lesson kab sikhayegi...i'm eagerly waiting for that day...b/w jitne jaldi ho sake update de dena...plzzz

Shuvo Mahalaya...Big smile
 



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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 10:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SamiraARTiMAYUR

Suja thank u for this update
i swear i want ask u update b4 i saw ur pm Hug tight1
n the update was Marvelous
u know even if ur update is sad we always got sweet flashback which is worthed...
i'm feeling both Mayurs pain n now my nups is waiting her Mayank bt her Mayank is changed can't wait wat happend wen they see each other after long 5 yrs..
loved how they conceling each other whithout being there as true person
i really gonna miss this ff while ur gone... but i'll read early update wen Mayur were happy 2ther...
loved these line it was sweet mayu 2 said that to her

"kyunki main nhi chahte k tum kissi anjana reader ko I love you bolo ... through you books" he shrugged as if its a matter!

n hey enjey ur time in ur Home n the Puja
Suja can u try to updae b4 u go GAME? PLZZ if u can't i can understand
thanks once once again for the update n the pm Hug




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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 10:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 18anila1

i loved it lodsss...Embarrassed
oshombhob sundor ekta update...ClapThumbs UpClap
ami jantam Mayank Jethumoni ke kokhono na kortei parbe na...Smile
bt really thank god...Big smile
woh jotoi heartless hoar try koruk bt Jethumonir shathe o thik e ager Mayank er moto kore kotha boleche...Embarrassed
d part was superb...ClapClap
ya ALLAH ami ai Shoytan lokta ke j ki korbo...uffAngryAngryAngry
koto boro shahosh abr Mayank ke lesson teach korar kotha bole...AngryAngryAngry
plzzz plzzz plzzz SIS i want u teach dat man a big lesson plzzzEvil SmileAngryEvil Smile
Mayank jno ai loktake ekta accha shikkha diye tarpor chare...AngryEvil SmileAngry
u know wht ami chai Mayank oder kokhono MAAF na koruk...Angry
n Nupur ke niye o ader kach theke durey chole jak...Unhappy
dey dont deserve his forgiveness...AngryAngry
arhhh i jst hate dat man...AngryDeadAngry
plzzz teach him a big lesson...Evil SmileDisapproveEvil Smile
i want Mayank to insult him big time...plzzzAngryAngry
n den MayUr er ake oporke kolpona korar part gulo shobcheyeee valo hoyeche...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
i was feeling so bad for both of dem...Disapprove
n song ta onek joss...ekdom perfect wid dis scene...Thumbs Up
remembering abt der past part was awesome n heart wrenching...CryCry
plzzz ami jani Mayank will nt forgive her so easily bt plzzz MayUr ke abr ek kore dao...plzzzUnhappy
i want to see dem happily together tao asap plzzzEmbarrassedWinkEmbarrassed
n plzzz Mayank jno Nupur ke ar hurt na kore plzzzConfusedUnhappyConfused
i think 5yrs separation is enough punishment for both of dem...Disapprove
awww dat means amader atooo din wait korte hobe...Ouch
bt nvr mind sis u enjoy ur "DURGA PUJA"..okEmbarrassedHugEmbarrassed
wish u d same sis...Hug
will b eagerly waiting for ur update...Wink
love u...HugHugHug
May ALLAH bless u...Embarrassed

ps: ok...tumi bolsila na ami shudhu hindi use kori...Embarrassed
so aj ami BANGLAY comment korechi...i hope tomer pore valo lagbe...Wink
thank u...Big smile
love ya...Hug



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Anila, tomar comment pore amar khub bhalo lagche ... ami apluto ... ami jani na tomake ki uttor debo ... ami to kichu bujhtei parchi naOuch
tumi eto sundar kore comment korecho j ki bolboStar
mayank er baba ekta bhalo sikkha pabe ... tabe ekhon noy ... kichudin pore ... ekta ghatonate ... 
not only u dear ... me too hate his family ... they are demons
tomar gaanta bhalo legeche jene bhalo laglo ... asole etai holo Rabindra Sangeet er mahima...j kono situation er jonno ekdum thik thakStar ... r ekhanei Kabiguru-r mahattoBig smile
u r right ... 5 years separation was enough for them ... actually more than enough for them ... i ll try whole heartdely for mayur milap ... kintu Gunjan er marriage to hok aageWink

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazymayurian

nice

Originally posted by kirti123

happy navratri to you too
nice part
waiting for mayur meeting continue soon
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Originally posted by love.mayurarti

Superb update


Originally posted by zishaRP

nice uptade... 



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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 10:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arjun-forever

wow wow wow sujata...this was fantastic!!!...absolutely brillliant...this part was sooo emotional...and my heart jus ached for both mayank and nupur to see them in such condition ...but all will be fine...taina???



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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha

wow suja... 
mayank is changed a lot... but he is not doing rite to himself atleast...allthough he hurted a lot...
and his father kitni khush fehmi hai unko k vo mayank k sath same behave karay gai but he dont know k mayank k dil mai ka hia...

really keen to knoe wht will happen nxt specially whn he face nupur...
he thought nupur is responsible for his condition...thts not true not atleast cmplete truth...

u really arote it beautifully... and nature talk loved it ...
pls cont soon...


whn will u return...?/?


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Maha, i really dont know, how he ll behave when he face Nupur Ouch this part is really difficult for me ...as u all expected a nice update for meOuch 

thanks for liking nature talkSmile

n about mayank n his father ... u ll see it soonWink

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 11:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nuckts

plz update soon 
loved d part 
just a request plz GUNJANAngryAngryAngry,ABHINASH,SHILPA KO THODA LESSON SIKHAO 
unn dono ko bado ke samaan ke khatir baksh mat dena
and as far as gunjan is concerned kuch aisa karo jisse woh 100% mayu se jealous ho!!!!!!!!
tab usse pata chalege jealousy kya hoti hai!!!!!!!!!!
u rock!!!!!!!!Smile
awesome work!
                                                                                                         love nuckts!!!!!!!!!!
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exams tum mujhe kab chain se jeene dogeCryCryCry




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Nuckts ... sorry, i really dont know ur nameEmbarrassed ...dont worry abinash, shilpa and gunjan ko lesson jarur milega ... par thora time lagega.
kyunki ekdum se sab kuch nahi hota na ... i hope u understand what i want to say.

love u ...

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Ruchi--

Lovely part this was,atleast Mayank is 
on track though he is hurt a lot...
I am glad jhethumlani called him..
waiting for Mayur meeting
cont soon



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