Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 118)

SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
SujaLuvsMayur
SujaLuvsMayur

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6708

Posted: 23 October 2011 at 10:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 18anila1

i loved it lodsss...Embarrassed
oshombhob sundor ekta update...ClapThumbs UpClap
ami jantam Mayank Jethumoni ke kokhono na kortei parbe na...Smile
bt really thank god...Big smile
woh jotoi heartless hoar try koruk bt Jethumonir shathe o thik e ager Mayank er moto kore kotha boleche...Embarrassed
d part was superb...ClapClap
ya ALLAH ami ai Shoytan lokta ke j ki korbo...uffAngryAngryAngry
koto boro shahosh abr Mayank ke lesson teach korar kotha bole...AngryAngryAngry
plzzz plzzz plzzz SIS i want u teach dat man a big lesson plzzzEvil SmileAngryEvil Smile
Mayank jno ai loktake ekta accha shikkha diye tarpor chare...AngryEvil SmileAngry
u know wht ami chai Mayank oder kokhono MAAF na koruk...Angry
n Nupur ke niye o ader kach theke durey chole jak...Unhappy
dey dont deserve his forgiveness...AngryAngry
arhhh i jst hate dat man...AngryDeadAngry
plzzz teach him a big lesson...Evil SmileDisapproveEvil Smile
i want Mayank to insult him big time...plzzzAngryAngry
n den MayUr er ake oporke kolpona korar part gulo shobcheyeee valo hoyeche...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
i was feeling so bad for both of dem...Disapprove
n song ta onek joss...ekdom perfect wid dis scene...Thumbs Up
remembering abt der past part was awesome n heart wrenching...CryCry
plzzz ami jani Mayank will nt forgive her so easily bt plzzz MayUr ke abr ek kore dao...plzzzUnhappy
i want to see dem happily together tao asap plzzzEmbarrassedWinkEmbarrassed
n plzzz Mayank jno Nupur ke ar hurt na kore plzzzConfusedUnhappyConfused
i think 5yrs separation is enough punishment for both of dem...Disapprove
awww dat means amader atooo din wait korte hobe...Ouch
bt nvr mind sis u enjoy ur "DURGA PUJA"..okEmbarrassedHugEmbarrassed
wish u d same sis...Hug
will b eagerly waiting for ur update...Wink
love u...HugHugHug
May ALLAH bless u...Embarrassed

ps: ok...tumi bolsila na ami shudhu hindi use kori...Embarrassed
so aj ami BANGLAY comment korechi...i hope tomer pore valo lagbe...Wink
thank u...Big smile
love ya...Hug



Thank u so much for ur precious comment.Smile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

Anila, tomar comment pore amar khub bhalo lagche ... ami apluto ... ami jani na tomake ki uttor debo ... ami to kichu bujhtei parchi naOuch
tumi eto sundar kore comment korecho j ki bolboStar
mayank er baba ekta bhalo sikkha pabe ... tabe ekhon noy ... kichudin pore ... ekta ghatonate ... 
not only u dear ... me too hate his family ... they are demons
tomar gaanta bhalo legeche jene bhalo laglo ... asole etai holo Rabindra Sangeet er mahima...j kono situation er jonno ekdum thik thakStar ... r ekhanei Kabiguru-r mahattoBig smile
u r right ... 5 years separation was enough for them ... actually more than enough for them ... i ll try whole heartdely for mayur milap ... kintu Gunjan er marriage to hok aageWink

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

-Anila-

SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
SujaLuvsMayur
SujaLuvsMayur

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6708

Posted: 23 October 2011 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazymayurian

nice

Originally posted by kirti123

happy navratri to you too
nice part
waiting for mayur meeting continue soon
Smile

Originally posted by love.mayurarti

Superb update


Originally posted by zishaRP

nice uptade... 



Thank u so much for ur precious comment.Smile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
SujaLuvsMayur
SujaLuvsMayur

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6708

Posted: 23 October 2011 at 10:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arjun-forever

wow wow wow sujata...this was fantastic!!!...absolutely brillliant...this part was sooo emotional...and my heart jus ached for both mayank and nupur to see them in such condition ...but all will be fine...taina???



Thank u so much for ur precious comment.Smile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

Sanchari ... u r right ... ebar sab kichu thik hoye jabeSmile
SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
SujaLuvsMayur
SujaLuvsMayur

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6708

Posted: 23 October 2011 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha

wow suja... 
mayank is changed a lot... but he is not doing rite to himself atleast...allthough he hurted a lot...
and his father kitni khush fehmi hai unko k vo mayank k sath same behave karay gai but he dont know k mayank k dil mai ka hia...

really keen to knoe wht will happen nxt specially whn he face nupur...
he thought nupur is responsible for his condition...thts not true not atleast cmplete truth...

u really arote it beautifully... and nature talk loved it ...
pls cont soon...


whn will u return...?/?


Thank u so much for ur precious comment.Smile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

Maha, i really dont know, how he ll behave when he face Nupur Ouch this part is really difficult for me ...as u all expected a nice update for meOuch 

thanks for liking nature talkSmile

n about mayank n his father ... u ll see it soonWink

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

drmaha

SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
SujaLuvsMayur
SujaLuvsMayur

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6708

Posted: 23 October 2011 at 11:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nuckts

plz update soon 
loved d part 
just a request plz GUNJANAngryAngryAngry,ABHINASH,SHILPA KO THODA LESSON SIKHAO 
unn dono ko bado ke samaan ke khatir baksh mat dena
and as far as gunjan is concerned kuch aisa karo jisse woh 100% mayu se jealous ho!!!!!!!!
tab usse pata chalege jealousy kya hoti hai!!!!!!!!!!
u rock!!!!!!!!Smile
awesome work!
                                                                                                         love nuckts!!!!!!!!!!
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
exams tum mujhe kab chain se jeene dogeCryCryCry




Thank u so much for ur precious comment.Smile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

Nuckts ... sorry, i really dont know ur nameEmbarrassed ...dont worry abinash, shilpa and gunjan ko lesson jarur milega ... par thora time lagega.
kyunki ekdum se sab kuch nahi hota na ... i hope u understand what i want to say.

love u ...

SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
SujaLuvsMayur
SujaLuvsMayur

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6708

Posted: 23 October 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Ruchi--

Lovely part this was,atleast Mayank is 
on track though he is hurt a lot...
I am glad jhethumlani called him..
waiting for Mayur meeting
cont soon



Thank u so much for ur precious comment.Smile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile
SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
SujaLuvsMayur
SujaLuvsMayur

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6708

Posted: 23 October 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

sujaaa
Tu akhir chati kiay hai m yeh mujhe bata day
Tu ny tu mayank k pora ulta kerdiya ray
Mere  bechary mayank ko itna heartless bana diya

Hay mera mayu
Aur yeah kiya Nupur waha alag asy roo rahi hai
Us ko itni takleef di meri blood sister ko
Shukar tujh kayalk aay aur tu mayank ko wapas lay rahi hai

Per nupr k haal dekh ker mjhy buhat roona araha hai'
Aur is new mayank se mjhy daar lagraha haii
Bus kerday in ko rolna..ab sab kuch thik kerday

Waitng for there frst meeting

Luv ya
fari



fizaaa thank u janu- u know why...love ya



Thank u so much for ur precious comment.Smile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

Fari, tujhe to pata hai k main kya chahti hun LOL... main to mayur ko marnewali hun, tujhe pata hai naEmbarrassed ...phir puch kyun rahi haiTongue
haan maine mayank ko pura ulta kardiya ... ab mayank sir k baal chalta haiROFL
ohho ... heartless kaisa ...agar heart na ho to insan bachta hai kyaD'oh tu bhi na ... kabhi bhi logicwali baat hi nahi kartiTongueLOL
aur ye kya ...nupur alag se ro rahi hai matlab Confused... wo kisske sath milkar royegiOuchLOL
awww...plz ab tu rona math ...warna BD me flood aa jayegaTongue
chalo...sukar hai ... finally kissi se to Fari ko dar lagta hai Tongue... soch rahi hu Mayank ko aise hi rakhdu ...tujhe darane k kaam ayengeLOL
arey main kahan kisi ko rula rahi hu ... wo log chote bacche thore na hai Ouch... wo log to khud hi ro rahe hai aur tu ilzam mujhpar laga rahi hai .Ouch... ye galat baat hai Ouch

i agree ... love u too Hug

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

valliyahdrfizaahmed

SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz
SujaLuvsMayur
SujaLuvsMayur

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6708

Posted: 23 October 2011 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Update on Pg 83
Nice part

Loved it


Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Update on Pg 89:
Gosh

Tht was bad

Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Update on Pg 95

Amazing

Let's see wht happens next

Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Update on Pg 105:

Amazing

Totally loved it

Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Lovely

Amazing



Thank u so much for ur precious comment.Smile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

sariska, i really glad that u read and commented on every partStar

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Blue Blood - Arshi 4S Part 4 pg 26 [27/11]

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 28 29

Author: angeldream14   Replies: 229   Views: 11521

angeldream14 229 11521 6 days ago by ArshiDewanee
THE CAGE BIRD ---completed---sultan & madhu

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 11 12

Author: prabha.abha   Replies: 92   Views: 6836

prabha.abha 92 6836 27 March 2015 at 11:25am by prabha.abha
Bird in the cage 2 MN FF

Author: --unknown--   Replies: 2   Views: 380

--unknown-- 2 380 05 May 2014 at 9:36am by --unknown--
The Feather of Blue Bird#2 [MN] *Completed*

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 109 110

Author: SujaLuvsMayur   Replies: 876   Views: 55866

SujaLuvsMayur 876 55866 18 August 2013 at 2:58pm by arhi_maneet
FF: Love of a Caged Bird~MG~ Part 4 Page 27 ~ 7/23

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 30 31

Author: .Regal.   Replies: 247   Views: 26374

.Regal. 247 26374 09 April 2013 at 3:44am by ..sweetchilly..

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index