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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 117)

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Posted: 18 October 2011 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by -Faria-

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by -Faria-

Behno + us behno ki bhaio
here is an announcement frm suja's side

she said that she wanna kill mayur at the end of the story...
she wanna know what do u think abt it???
r u ok with this track???
so plz share ur POV

thank to all
take care




sab thik hai bus Fari ek baat mention karna bhul gyi k...humne shock-shabha me konsa romantic song ye phir disco song play karenge  ... to plz apna suggestion post kare plzzz ROFL


rock and rol play kar
wohi accha rehega
aur dance main mujhe babga dance cahiye
rukh main tujhe dekhati hu









thik hai rock n roll fixed ho gya.

par tune kabhi bataya nhi tera itna handu boyfriend hai ROFL

classy choice ROFL


ye main apne liye nehi tere liye select kya
tujhe pasand ayi na??? Thanx GOD... tujhe pasand aya - accha he hua...lol
isliye wo itna khush hokar dance kar rahe hai

congrats suja
bacche log dekho apni suja aunty and her dashing BF..
ROFL


ye mera BF kaise hua ...ye to tere rock n roll gaane pe dance kar raha hai ROFL

matlab ye tere isharo pe nachta hai...mera nahi ROFL to ye mera BF kaise huaTongue

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Posted: 18 October 2011 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by -Faria-

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by -Faria-

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by -Faria-

Behno + us behno ki bhaio
here is an announcement frm suja's side

she said that she wanna kill mayur at the end of the story...
she wanna know what do u think abt it???
r u ok with this track???
so plz share ur POV

thank to all
take care




sab thik hai bus Fari ek baat mention karna bhul gyi k...humne shock-shabha me konsa romantic song ye phir disco song play karenge  ... to plz apna suggestion post kare plzzz ROFL


rock and rol play kar
wohi accha rehega
aur dance main mujhe babga dance cahiye
rukh main tujhe dekhati hu









thik hai rock n roll fixed ho gya.

par tune kabhi bataya nhi tera itna handu boyfriend hai ROFL

classy choice ROFL


ye main apne liye nehi tere liye select kya
tujhe pasand ayi na??? Thanx GOD... tujhe pasand aya - accha he hua...lol
isliye wo itna khush hokar dance kar rahe hai

congrats suja
bacche log dekho apni suja aunty and her dashing BF..
ROFL

tauba tauba

main bechari massom bacchi ... ff me romance likhne se darti hun aur mera BFOuch ... na baba na ... aur waise bhi ye tera BF haiWink

ye tere rock n roll gaane pe dance kar raha haiROFL

mujhe dusro ka BF chinna accha nahi lagta ...wo tere sath hi thik hai ROFL

mahan logo ki mahan BFROFL




dekh ab main uske liye teri jaisa itna sunadr , sishil ladki chuna tou wo mere ishara pe nachegi na
aurmaine thodi he kaha ki wo meri BF hai = ye tou tune kaha hai. kyun ki wo tuse bahut pasand ayi hai...hai na??
ab jab dil se dil takra he gayi hai tou main baat chalo..
tu daar maat- directly use coess kar deti

btw tere kiss wala os parne k  baat mujhe samjh aya tou kinta romntic hai
ek kaam kar aj se usko imagine kar , pher tera romance aur bhi jaida accha hoga...
ROFL

ok now i m gonna sleep
take care


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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by -Faria-

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by -Faria-

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by -Faria-

Behno + us behno ki bhaio
here is an announcement frm suja's side

she said that she wanna kill mayur at the end of the story...
she wanna know what do u think abt it???
r u ok with this track???
so plz share ur POV

thank to all
take care




sab thik hai bus Fari ek baat mention karna bhul gyi k...humne shock-shabha me konsa romantic song ye phir disco song play karenge  ... to plz apna suggestion post kare plzzz ROFL


rock and rol play kar
wohi accha rehega
aur dance main mujhe babga dance cahiye
rukh main tujhe dekhati hu









thik hai rock n roll fixed ho gya.

par tune kabhi bataya nhi tera itna handu boyfriend hai ROFL

classy choice ROFL


ye main apne liye nehi tere liye select kya
tujhe pasand ayi na??? Thanx GOD... tujhe pasand aya - accha he hua...lol
isliye wo itna khush hokar dance kar rahe hai

congrats suja
bacche log dekho apni suja aunty and her dashing BF..
ROFL

tauba tauba

main bechari massom bacchi ... ff me romance likhne se darti hun aur mera BFOuch ... na baba na ... aur waise bhi ye tera BF haiWink

ye tere rock n roll gaane pe dance kar raha haiROFL

mujhe dusro ka BF chinna accha nahi lagta ...wo tere sath hi thik hai ROFL

mahan logo ki mahan BFROFL




dekh ab main uske liye teri jaisa itna sunadr , sishil ladki chuna tou wo mere ishara pe nachegi na
aurmaine thodi he kaha ki wo meri BF hai = ye tou tune kaha hai. kyun ki wo tuse bahut pasand ayi hai...hai na??
ab jab dil se dil takra he gayi hai tou main baat chalo..
tu daar maat- directly use coess kar deti

btw tere kiss wala os parne k  baat mujhe samjh aya tou kinta romntic hai
ek kaam kar aj se usko imagine kar , pher tera romance aur bhi jaida accha hoga...
ROFL

ok now i m gonna sleep
take care



Fari, tu aisa kaise soch sakti hai Shocked
wo mera jiju hai ... aur wo tere sath bht accha lagta hai ... tu aur jiju ...made for each otherWink

mere liye to Mayank hi thik hai Blushing mujhe aur koi nahi chiye BlushingDay Dreaming

aur mera kisswala os se kuch pata nahi chalta ... mujhe to aaj samajh me aaya k tu romantic  updates k piche itna kyun pari hui hai ...EmbarrassedROFL

by god ... hume bataya bhi nahiOuch

Fari and her dancing BF ... made for each other ... they rocksss ROFL

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 10:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

OH GOD

Wht he has done to himself'.matalb suicide nhi tu slow poising he sahi'

He is going tht way

Ahh thnk gOd Jethumoni called him, I donot want him to back to attend gujan's weding but I want him to be there with her, to see her'.to have her'

 

With winds a realy wnt to join n say even me too never saw such love

This was such a janu flower

 

Suja I love this in this ff, it make this story so heavenly , pure as nature

 

Haa'suthing never chnges 'to hell with his father'.father does he knew the meaning of this

Wht I felt wit song n nupurs expression I donot want to comment to spoil its beauty

Pata nhi I cant define wht I felt in between this song'feels like a miracle if the find there way together

 

Im afraid abt his reaction n nupurs courage'

 

 

 





Thank u so much for ur precious comment.Smile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

Fiza, i alwz found myself helpless when it come to reply on ur comment.

i really dont know, what to say more ... u already said everything ... 

u know, me too dont like mayank's family ... u ll see exactly what u wanted to see ... so just wait.
i really glad that u liked the song ... i alwz scared to select songs, specially Rabindra Sangeet ... Rabindra Sangeet contained purity, which unexceptionable ... n thats y i alwz scared to select any RS. but i really felt glad when u appreciated the song...Big smile

love uHug

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 10:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by valliyah

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sob cheye aagey Subho Bijoya Hug...!

so something burned inside his so called father when he received jethumoni's call while ignored his, n i soo love to see this insulted feeling in him...but wait this is only the beginning i guessSmile...Mr. yeh to trailer tha picture abhi baki hai so aage aage dekho hota hai kya Evil Smile...!

He not only received Jethumoni's call but agrees to attend wed proves their is still hope for his comeback...comeback as the real mayank who is lost in dark...his arrogancy rudeness all gone just in mere second as soon as he heard Jethumoni's name... remembrance of the love n appreciation that he got from him proves there still remains some traces of emotions somewhere, only needed to bring out and nurture from the deepest dark inside...!

a part of me is soo pleasantly enjoying this helpless n miserable NupurApprove...i stated earlier she truly deserve this...actually deserve lottt more...oh so miss selfish bohat confident hai ki woh mana legi as he truly loves her...yaha bhi uske pyar par bharosa hai jab ki khud apne waqt back out kar gayi...wah kya pyar hai...suppose agar Neel se shaadi hojati to abhi apne life mein busy hoti madam tab kaha jata yeh rona aur manana...mayank may forgive her BUT itni jaldi bhi kya hai...i warn u suja NOT SO SOON Stern Smile...!

what i feel for Mayank is beyond words...though he may show the rough n tough exterior but the pain he is going through since years is unexplainable...dying minute by minute to live with the truth that he has family but none is his, that the person he loved the most only betrayed to the extreme...n here ppl wish to get back him soo easily  as if nothing changed in years, pathetic will be the least to say...!

Perfect song selection...it synchronised perfectly...!

Ahh here we get those golden moments of their sweet innocent love(though as flaskback)...nature always was a silent(though they had their own sweet convo) spectator of their pure love...mayank need not words to express, his gestures told loud abt his caring possesiveness n the depth of his love...it was his care when he saw her panting and came back, wiped her sweat and asked for his punishment...he was possessive when he asked her to write just 1 copy of their lovestory so that the three golden words remains only his possesion...before living he plucked that cute flower and tucked in her hair followed with a hug only showed the depth of his unconditional love...though love couldn't be measured but needless to say here mayank's love always was superior than hers...!


Finally he arrived...its actually his Aagaman from a journey of past(dark) to present(towards light)...!

P.S...Title credit dena jaruri tha, ab de hi diya hai to hum bhi formality pura kar hi lete hai THANKYOUStern Smile...Sigg is beyond superb...it has all that of this update...his rise, those deep blank eyes...and the darkness(pain) in and out of him...mindblowing...ab jaldi aao so that i can Halla Bol...u know why LOL...!



Thank u so much for ur precious comment.Smile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

Valli, i alwz found myself helpless when it come to reply on ur comment... u said eveything yaar ... even more than everything.

u know, i always appreciate that u alwz went deep of this FF and alwz found something precious ... even me too never found those thing which u have found in this FF.

hat off to u valliyah.

par sach me ... mujhe tumhare reply me kuch nahi kehna hai ... kyunki mujhe ye samajh me nahi aa raha hai k main kya kahun Ouch

i just wanna say ... love uHug

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayuloveu

beautiful amazing. di mayank was living in terrible pain . oh my god. nupur is waiting for mayank. but mayank is different person now. continue soon

Originally posted by immayurfan

Amazing updat
Continnue soon want to see them together  again
Thanks for the pm



Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Lovly part.



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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DhanakZ

It was too Good and heart wrenching part 
I can feel their pain
But plz keep your promise and Next time gave Us Lots of Mayur moments
thanks For Pm 
conts oon


Thank u so much for ur precious comment.Smile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

just wait for sometime Gul ... i hope u like future updatesWink there was sometihing for uWink

Originally posted by -ridionasis-

mayank ne apne apko kya bana diya yaar...bas bahut huya ye rona dhona aur nehi...ab toh sab kuch thik hona hey.hey na suja...aur tum ye mayank ki baap ko lesson kab sikhayegi...i'm eagerly waiting for that day...b/w jitne jaldi ho sake update de dena...plzzz

Shuvo Mahalaya...Big smile
 



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Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

yes Ridz ... ab sab kuch thik ho jayega ... aur Mayank k baap (LOL) ko bhi lesson sikhana hai... so just wait ... pahle Gunjan ki shadi to hone doWink

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 10:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SamiraARTiMAYUR

Suja thank u for this update
i swear i want ask u update b4 i saw ur pm Hug tight1
n the update was Marvelous
u know even if ur update is sad we always got sweet flashback which is worthed...
i'm feeling both Mayurs pain n now my nups is waiting her Mayank bt her Mayank is changed can't wait wat happend wen they see each other after long 5 yrs..
loved how they conceling each other whithout being there as true person
i really gonna miss this ff while ur gone... but i'll read early update wen Mayur were happy 2ther...
loved these line it was sweet mayu 2 said that to her

"kyunki main nhi chahte k tum kissi anjana reader ko I love you bolo ... through you books" he shrugged as if its a matter!

n hey enjey ur time in ur Home n the Puja
Suja can u try to updae b4 u go GAME? PLZZ if u can't i can understand
thanks once once again for the update n the pm Hug




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Samira, i hope upcoming updates tumhe pasand aaye ... aur shayad future updates bhiWink

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