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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 113)

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
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sob cheye aagey Subho Bijoya Hug...!

so something burned inside his so called father when he received jethumoni's call while ignored his, n i soo love to see this insulted feeling in him...but wait this is only the beginning i guessSmile...Mr. yeh to trailer tha picture abhi baki hai so aage aage dekho hota hai kya Evil Smile...!

He not only received Jethumoni's call but agrees to attend wed proves their is still hope for his comeback...comeback as the real mayank who is lost in dark...his arrogancy rudeness all gone just in mere second as soon as he heard Jethumoni's name... remembrance of the love n appreciation that he got from him proves there still remains some traces of emotions somewhere, only needed to bring out and nurture from the deepest dark inside...!

a part of me is soo pleasantly enjoying this helpless n miserable NupurApprove...i stated earlier she truly deserve this...actually deserve lottt more...oh so miss selfish bohat confident hai ki woh mana legi as he truly loves her...yaha bhi uske pyar par bharosa hai jab ki khud apne waqt back out kar gayi...wah kya pyar hai...suppose agar Neel se shaadi hojati to abhi apne life mein busy hoti madam tab kaha jata yeh rona aur manana...mayank may forgive her BUT itni jaldi bhi kya hai...i warn u suja NOT SO SOON Stern Smile...!

what i feel for Mayank is beyond words...though he may show the rough n tough exterior but the pain he is going through since years is unexplainable...dying minute by minute to live with the truth that he has family but none is his, that the person he loved the most only betrayed to the extreme...n here ppl wish to get back him soo easily  as if nothing changed in years, pathetic will be the least to say...!

Perfect song selection...it synchronised perfectly...!

Ahh here we get those golden moments of their sweet innocent love(though as flaskback)...nature always was a silent(though they had their own sweet convo) spectator of their pure love...mayank need not words to express, his gestures told loud abt his caring possesiveness n the depth of his love...it was his care when he saw her panting and came back, wiped her sweat and asked for his punishment...he was possessive when he asked her to write just 1 copy of their lovestory so that the three golden words remains only his possesion...before living he plucked that cute flower and tucked in her hair followed with a hug only showed the depth of his unconditional love...though love couldn't be measured but needless to say here mayank's love always was superior than hers...!


Finally he arrived...its actually his Aagaman from a journey of past(dark) to present(towards light)...!

P.S...Title credit dena jaruri tha, ab de hi diya hai to hum bhi formality pura kar hi lete hai THANKYOUStern Smile...Sigg is beyond superb...it has all that of this update...his rise, those deep blank eyes...and the darkness(pain) in and out of him...mindblowing...ab jaldi aao so that i can Halla Bol...u know why LOL...!


Edited by valliyah - 10 October 2011 at 2:15pm

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
beautiful amazing. di mayank was living in terrible pain . oh my god. nupur is waiting for mayank. but mayank is different person now. continue soon

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
It was too Good and heart wrenching part 
I can feel their pain
But plz keep your promise and Next time gave Us Lots of Mayur moments
thanks For Pm 
conts oon

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
Suja thank u for this update
i swear i want ask u update b4 i saw ur pm Hug tight1
n the update was Marvelous
u know even if ur update is sad we always got sweet flashback which is worthed...
i'm feeling both Mayurs pain n now my nups is waiting her Mayank bt her Mayank is changed can't wait wat happend wen they see each other after long 5 yrs..
loved how they conceling each other whithout being there as true person
i really gonna miss this ff while ur gone... but i'll read early update wen Mayur were happy 2ther...
loved these line it was sweet mayu 2 said that to her

"kyunki main nhi chahte k tum kissi anjana reader ko I love you bolo ... through you books" he shrugged as if its a matter!

n hey enjey ur time in ur Home n the Puja
Suja can u try to updae b4 u go GAME? PLZZ if u can't i can understand
thanks once once again for the update n the pm Hug

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
i loved it lodsss...Embarrassed
oshombhob sundor ekta update...ClapThumbs UpClap
ami jantam Mayank Jethumoni ke kokhono na kortei parbe na...Smile
bt really thank god...Big smile
woh jotoi heartless hoar try koruk bt Jethumonir shathe o thik e ager Mayank er moto kore kotha boleche...Embarrassed
d part was superb...ClapClap
ya ALLAH ami ai Shoytan lokta ke j ki korbo...uffAngryAngryAngry
koto boro shahosh abr Mayank ke lesson teach korar kotha bole...AngryAngryAngry
plzzz plzzz plzzz SIS i want u teach dat man a big lesson plzzzEvil SmileAngryEvil Smile
Mayank jno ai loktake ekta accha shikkha diye tarpor chare...AngryEvil SmileAngry
u know wht ami chai Mayank oder kokhono MAAF na koruk...Angry
n Nupur ke niye o ader kach theke durey chole jak...Unhappy
dey dont deserve his forgiveness...AngryAngry
arhhh i jst hate dat man...AngryDeadAngry
plzzz teach him a big lesson...Evil SmileDisapproveEvil Smile
i want Mayank to insult him big time...plzzzAngryAngry
n den MayUr er ake oporke kolpona korar part gulo shobcheyeee valo hoyeche...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
i was feeling so bad for both of dem...Disapprove
n song ta onek joss...ekdom perfect wid dis scene...Thumbs Up
remembering abt der past part was awesome n heart wrenching...CryCry
plzzz ami jani Mayank will nt forgive her so easily bt plzzz MayUr ke abr ek kore dao...plzzzUnhappy
i want to see dem happily together tao asap plzzzEmbarrassedWinkEmbarrassed
n plzzz Mayank jno Nupur ke ar hurt na kore plzzzConfusedUnhappyConfused
i think 5yrs separation is enough punishment for both of dem...Disapprove
awww dat means amader atooo din wait korte hobe...Ouch
bt nvr mind sis u enjoy ur "DURGA PUJA"..okEmbarrassedHugEmbarrassed
wish u d same sis...Hug
will b eagerly waiting for ur update...Wink
love u...HugHugHug
May ALLAH bless u...Embarrassed

ps: ok...tumi bolsila na ami shudhu hindi use kori...Embarrassed
so aj ami BANGLAY comment korechi...i hope tomer pore valo lagbe...Wink
thank u...Big smile
love ya...Hug


Edited by 18anila1 - 27 September 2011 at 1:25am

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
Amazing updat
Continnue soon want to see them together  again
Thanks for the pm


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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 12:26am | IP Logged
mayank ne apne apko kya bana diya yaar...bas bahut huya ye rona dhona aur nehi...ab toh sab kuch thik hona hey.hey na suja...aur tum ye mayank ki baap ko lesson kab sikhayegi...i'm eagerly waiting for that day...b/w jitne jaldi ho sake update de dena...plzzz

Shuvo Mahalaya...Big smile

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Lovly part.

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