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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 11)

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 6:05am | IP Logged
Just amazing my 'mangal graher jeeb'...
Loved the way u described the morning atmosphere...I ws so lost...
And i loved our mayur's meeting...Nupur is just like the original one...So bubbly and nautankibaz...This wll be a great pair...A bubbly nupur and a innocent cute mayank...And he's already falling for her...So cute...
Cont soon my ajob jeeb...

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 6:28am | IP Logged
WOW!! it was really amazing update...2day itself i read....i likd mayank's character n nupz to pehl se hi by god hai...she is just superb...!!

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 6:31am | IP Logged
amazingggggg update dear
just loved it to the core
ver well written *thumbs uppp*
awwww
mayu my boy is really sweeeeet
loving him in this ff
 
amazingly written dear
sorry for nbeing late
continue sooooooooooon =)

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 6:43am | IP Logged
hey suja its sucha lovely update i really love ur ff's keep writing

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Nice part
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Posted: 16 February 2011 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiya_angel

hey sujata....very nice update dearClap
Mayank the shy boy is soooo cuteEmbarrassed
and Nupur to Nupur hai bhai...wo kahan sudharne waali haiLOLLOL

awesome work.....do continue soonSmile

thnx 4 de pmHug

**yippee....me first....
DancingDancingDancingDancingDancing


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Posted: 16 February 2011 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-



Sujaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
oit was beautiful beautiful very beautiful update
u dont knw how much i love this part dear


ahhhhhhh i loved all the things frm first to last

in the morning mayank was mesmerized by the the sweet sound of mail voice- it was Azan right .
aww i loved this part

and then i love my maynk more and more when he was roaming around the garden and praising it fom his hear
i could imagine the whole thing....

This was the best morning of my life ....... I saw a beautiful sun rise. A red bindi slowly rising ...... gradually increase its size to a red-golden plate ..... the sky was red ...... birds ware flying between white clouds .... mild cold breeze touched my soul ...... the red-golden plate slowly rising ........  I never forgot that sun rise .......  It is the best memory of my life.

the way u describe the beauty of the morning scene- by GOD i m amazed with it. spcially when u said -a red bindi slowly rising and gradually its size to a red golden plate- ufff i loved this sentence

OMG mayur were met on the fruit garden- hahahahha nups is guava-thief
awwwwww she is so sweet.
i loved her innocence

so love at first sight - right
maynk  feels  something special for Nupur-His  mind said nupur is his girl
wow thats great

the flashback part was quite sad
i felt sad for mayank...
anyway awesome update dear

just too good
i loved it frm the core of my heart
plz do update next aprt soon







Thank u so much for ur sweet lovely n long comment.

yes, d sound was azan.......actually this was my personal xperience. my cousin lived in mumbai, when he came to visit my place n heard d last azan, he acutally asked, what was that sound!! so, i add this on FF.

isnt it funny that someone dont knw abt azan!!!

thanks for ur sweet comment.

love u.

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Posted: 16 February 2011 at 10:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by love.mayurarti

superb update
the morning scene u describe was mindblowing....n luved the mayur meeting...nupur was soooo sweet n adorable n mayank liked her at once.luved the mayur n jethmoni scene
flashback part was sad...u write vry well
cont soon

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