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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 109)

.rumki. IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 4:18am | IP Logged
nice update

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 6:54am | IP Logged
superb update...
i jus lov it...
thanx for pm

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valliyah Goldie
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Posted: 23 September 2011 at 5:21am | IP Logged
edited pg 105...!
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Posted: 23 September 2011 at 9:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha

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hayei suja ka update... Shocked Shocked
kahi mai sapna tu nai daik rahi... lol
 
 
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ahhh...atlast most awaited update is here...Smilei loved it truly...thts all i want to see.
gunjan is getting married with pranjal thts gud for pranjalWink... gumjan and her parents is just a mere tiny thgs yes i would say them things...how mean people are na.they dont care, dont love and respect others no matter either for a family member or relative but whn those people make themselves proud, and achieve height beyond the expextation then wohi log aagay peechay ghommtai hai...
i hjust hate those type of duplicate, egostic people...
mayank is doing just the write thing...although he is his father but he deserve it...maynak rude nature, heartless and aggressive nature is a natural thing...how can sum 1 forgetso easily whtever their blood relation done to him...
 
i loved this update suja... thanks  alot jani for this beautiful update... Hug  HugHug
and this update was really surprising one...Smile
 
 
love ya dear.
pls cont soon pls...
and all the best for ur project...WinkSmile

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 8:41am | IP Logged

wow now that i called master piece... u are so gud dear.. this is really wonderful story and u described very well hats off... keep it up. GBU

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 11:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ridi_onasis

somehow i knew that mayank would be changed...b/w waiting to see the change...lets see how he change...

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so this is the change...a heartless mayank...like i thought...i hope someone give back his heart to him so soon..it was an amazing update as usual...waiting for mayur meeting desperately...i want to know their reaction especially mayank's when he would see his nupur...nd ya i want to see his parents expression...it would be a slap for them that mayank was so successful

waiting for next update...update soon...
take care...nd love u


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

mayur ll meet soon & u ll see his reaction too.

i ll show mayank's parents reaction stage by stage...right now...starting from his father...i hope u ll like it.

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 18anila1

i loved it lodsss...
awesome update sis...
so now Nupur is back to her home...
really like d convo between Nupur n Udita...
so here we can see our Mayank heartless...
after all he got his success bt lost his emotions...
bt m glad ke Mayank ne uss Admi ko accha lesson diya...
bt i want him back to my Nupur asap...
i jst want Mayank's family to pay more for der deeds baas...
bt plzzz plzzz mere MayUr ko jaldi se wapas milwado plzzz
waiting eagerly for d next update...
love ya...Hug



Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

nupur-udita scene was my personally favorite.  dont worry mayank nupur ka confrontation jaldi hoga ...par iss update me nhi...next updte me.

so just wait for sometime.
rihgt now enjoy this update.

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by valliyah

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the most awaited or i must say the chapter i die heartily waited for...im soo soo much  satisfied its kinda healing me n u better know that Smile...!

well i have nothing to do with gunjan's marriage stuff she n other selffish self-centered ppl can better go to hell...on second thought isn't hell too good for ppl like them to send in Ermm whatever...!

i already mention earlier i like pranjal n he is too good to deserve a partner like gunjan...but love is blind n so is he...!

hmm i truly loved this little angel n her cute acts...touching feet part is too touchy n sweet u reminded me Fiza's Ardhangini were mayur's son touches mayu's feet...this little yet meaningful gestures r so pure...!

im happy to see nupur lifeless...its like what u sow is what u reap...if u snatch away one's life n soul n leave him lifeless to suffer till he dies than this is what u suppose to get the only thing in return...even this is not enough as she still have friend, bro, sis-in-law beside her but the person in question have nothing but only a life without life...!

hmmm proud to be his father bull sh*t...how filthy human can be i wonder... if mere giving birth is enough for one to be tag as father than yes he can call himself his father...!


ohh i soo love to see mayank in this update n hope to see more in upcoming updates too...ofcourse heartless he would be as no emotions left...what will he do with  heart n emotion when his own soo called loved ones played with it soo emotionlessly...he was nothing but a fun material to them...nobody cared for his emotions so why expect it in return...he was in pain n he still is in pain but the difference is he never showed before whereas now he pours it out as in wrath...if only someone once try n understand *sighs*...!

 P.S...suja i love u immense...you know why Embarrassed...!




Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

Valliyah, i think this is d beggest comment  i earned from u.
no thanks dear *hugs*
i knw, u dnt like gunjan-prajal pair ...par kya karen...love is blind na.
u knw, tumhare comment k samne mera words humesha kaam par jata hai ...so mujhe pata nhi...main tumhe kya reply karun!!!!!!
mujhe to kuch samajh me nhi aa raha hai
i hope, u can understand me ...k mujhe thik thak se kuch bolna nhi aata.
m sooo happy to see ur longgg comment.
love u...





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