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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 108)

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

res
yeah kamal kasy hoa
update
humary naseeb mein update
 
eidted
 
 

They strt was so painful'..the way she was searching mayank..

Was so obvious, u lost herself way back..n today she lost even the reason of doing all this too

 

N maynk's parents can nevr evr be right n good'thy just donot have  a heart'.sun j***k

 

Its feel so painful to see her in such state yaar..so much

She gave life to him, n lost her life

 

mouth is stronger than eyes ... it has a great ability to hurt people in words

 

I so loved this dialogue. so tue'lovly line suja

 

I really loved the way uday reacted to the situation but also the way chitra handles it

Its true they were punished of a sin thy nevr did'.

 

N n all it was a gr8 update ms filler

 

So mayank even chaged his name''

Five years OMG'.suja im dying to read abt maynks chnge'.fearing it to much

 

 

Gr8 update..painful n pitfull

 




Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

Fiza, u r right ... nupur lost the reason of living ... she gave life to him, bt lost her life ... n she did it intentionally ...  she knew, she was the only person of mayank's life ... bt she dint think abt him, n herself.

thanks for liking this line ... a alwz scared to write such kind of line u knw ... i alwz think, such kind of lines so cheesy ... bt thank u for liking this lineBig smile

no, maynak dint change his name ... there was another reason behind it. Wink
i ll reveal it soon.
ab agar tune bhi mujhe filler kahegiAngry
i hate uAngry

ps: waise, tune bataya nhi tujhe meri shayri kaisi lagiWink

Ur more thn welcum dear

U know im too much in this ff

 

Jab tu khud ko ms filler khan chor day gi tu hum bhi choor day gay samhji

 

Kaun se shiar yeah teri signature'pata woh jo humara discuion than a why we hate relations wala mjhy us ki yaad dilata hai

 


signature nhi ye shairi ...

khin dehe khorbokay
mudo tahe bhari
jasorer koi jeno
naromurti dhari

ab par isse aur bata mujhe kaisi lagi???

hay laah
tu mjhy bengli mein galiyah dayti hai
ya khuda
very bad suja

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
hello sujata I am kheya's boudi. khub khub bhalo part. but I am crying feelin the pain of mayank going through. sobkichu thik kore dio plzzz

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update as usual Suja
i expected mayu to change but not tht much heartless
eagerly waiting Mayur's reunion
plzzz update soon with lot's of mayur moments
thanks alot hun for the pm

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DhanakZ IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
oh dear mayank changed too much 
i wish Nupur meet him soon or at least they can talk once 
Thanks for pm 
cont soon

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 6:48pm | IP Logged
I expected this before...
Kya bana dia sabne mayank ko...a warm kind hearted boy to rude heartless boss...also nupur has become lifeless...pretending so hard to be happy...really my heart cried to see this drastic change of two lively people...
Update ws fantastic...now waiting for mayur meeting..i know he'll come for gunjan's marriage...
hope this time god will reunite them...fingers crossed...
Loved it..
Cont soon...

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 6:56pm | IP Logged
Awesome update

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 3:30am | IP Logged
till mow u write the update and say next will be interesting one but when?
plzz now write somethig happy types only if it will be little
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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 4:01am | IP Logged
heya read your all updates!
i loved all of them and i hate mayank's parents, that neel n even nupur's dad for his adamant natureAngry
gunjan ke upar aaj bahut gussa aa raha hai as it is i never liked her character in mjht but here she insulted mayank by saying that he might be jealous of neel who the hell is she to control mayank's emotions! oops! for saying such hard words but u know i felt really bad for mayank i was literally in tears in few parts Cry but yes i loved the update!
loved udita and nupur conversion!
i really want mayur scenes that too as now mayank is changed some naughty scenesWink
please reunite them as quickly as possible
                                                             love nuckts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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