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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 107)

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 11:42am | IP Logged
hi
the up is good and yet a totall turmoil
so nupur is coming back to her homwtown after 5 longs yrs
while coming she is remembering all things which have the esence of her love mayank
she goes to her home and meet her bro and bhabhi and her cute neice udita
whereas on the otherside
mayank has become a totally mechine person with no heart and emotion
he refused to talk to his father which is quite natural in his case
plz cont soon and pm me

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 11:48am | IP Logged

This was the most awaited chpt for me

 

Yup nature always reminded me of this ff…n thts wht I love the most in this

Oh so she is here for pranjal's weding….kiya woh hoga yaha….i doubt

Her chnge was so obvious; she lost her self, her soul her evrythng

Pranjal was sweet

I really adore there frndhip

Yaar the only thing tht made me smile was the little angle truly

 

U were explaining his entrance n my pitful smile was increasing..

A person who nevr found peace in any materialistic need is now drench in them….trying to get lost in tht…

 

N I hate whn his father proudly called him self as father..to hell with him..wah wah whn now he is a rich business man tu ur proud, u even didn't knew wch uni he  joind,  where he is going, u always wanted to him to be in hell so here he is all in hell

The true mayank dies the day he threw his picture

 

 

Ah I so loved the name blue bird..i loved it..but this name of his company made me think sumwhere mayank is still alive….

 

 

they were terrified of their boss Mr. Mayank Roychoudhury, a man without heart….rather soul

 

so it was meant to be..him being like this was meant to be

 

suja dear gr8 work the way u transformed them into sumthing new was awesum. It was a new chracter cketch… u gave them a second strt in this ff…lovly work..

it was painful to see them killing them self, given pain to themselves, n sumhow enjoying it to….

 

Lovly thnks for quick update

I hope it continues

Lov ya

 

 



Edited by drfizaahmed - 19 September 2011 at 12:01pm

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Fantastic update
Loved nupur-udita scene.
Mayank became heartless n rude person.nt gud
Looking forward

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Thnx for the update..
Mayank has changed a lot..the sweet loving guy has turned to a ruthless man..
hope he meets Nupur soon...

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged

by mistake... LOL



Edited by drmaha - 19 September 2011 at 12:18pm

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Lovly part.

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Sujaaa ji
thank u so much for ur update
So finally  nups return back to her home town after 5 years
she missed  her family and her hometown...
wow so pranjal and gunjan is goinng to marry each other- great yaar. akhir koi tou khush hai...

Nups and mynk both changed a lot... nups was not jovial at all. she seems so lifeless... she is nothing without maynk...
and Maynk- BY GOD- he becme so heartless. he was too rude to his employee specially to suahani. so maynk dad called him.but he dint talk to him..
i wish mayu will come gunjans weeding and we will back our old mayu thro nups..
suja hun- it was fabulous
amazing dear
just tooo good
keep it up

Note: Btw i loved his office name- Blue Bird International...




Edited by -Faria- - 19 September 2011 at 12:28pm

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

res
yeah kamal kasy hoa
update
humary naseeb mein update
 
eidted
 
 

They strt was so painful'..the way she was searching mayank..

Was so obvious, u lost herself way back..n today she lost even the reason of doing all this too

 

N maynk's parents can nevr evr be right n good'thy just donot have  a heart'.sun j***k

 

Its feel so painful to see her in such state yaar..so much

She gave life to him, n lost her life

 

mouth is stronger than eyes ... it has a great ability to hurt people in words

 

I so loved this dialogue. so tue'lovly line suja

 

I really loved the way uday reacted to the situation but also the way chitra handles it

Its true they were punished of a sin thy nevr did'.

 

N n all it was a gr8 update ms filler

 

So mayank even chaged his name''

Five years OMG'.suja im dying to read abt maynks chnge'.fearing it to much

 

 

Gr8 update..painful n pitfull

 




Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

Fiza, u r right ... nupur lost the reason of living ... she gave life to him, bt lost her life ... n she did it intentionally ...  she knew, she was the only person of mayank's life ... bt she dint think abt him, n herself.

thanks for liking this line ... a alwz scared to write such kind of line u knw ... i alwz think, such kind of lines so cheesy ... bt thank u for liking this lineBig smile

no, maynak dint change his name ... there was another reason behind it. Wink
i ll reveal it soon.
ab agar tune bhi mujhe filler kahegiAngry
i hate uAngry

ps: waise, tune bataya nhi tujhe meri shayri kaisi lagiWink

Ur more thn welcum dear

U know im too much in this ff

 

Jab tu khud ko ms filler khan chor day gi tu hum bhi choor day gay samhji

 

Kaun se shiar yeah teri signature'pata woh jo humara discuion than a why we hate relations wala mjhy us ki yaad dilata hai

 


signature nhi ye shairi ...

khin dehe khorbokay
mudo tahe bhari
jasorer koi jeno
naromurti dhari

ab par isse aur bata mujhe kaisi lagi???

hay laah
tu mjhy bengli mein galiyah dayti hai
ya khuda
very bad suja

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