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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 103)

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 11:40am | IP Logged
comment edited pg-96

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 6:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

res
yeah kamal kasy hoa
update
humary naseeb mein update
 
eidted
 
 

They strt was so painful'..the way she was searching mayank..

Was so obvious, u lost herself way back..n today she lost even the reason of doing all this too

 

N maynk's parents can nevr evr be right n good'thy just donot have  a heart'.sun j***k

 

Its feel so painful to see her in such state yaar..so much

She gave life to him, n lost her life

 

mouth is stronger than eyes ... it has a great ability to hurt people in words

 

I so loved this dialogue. so tue'lovly line suja

 

I really loved the way uday reacted to the situation but also the way chitra handles it

Its true they were punished of a sin thy nevr did'.

 

N n all it was a gr8 update ms filler

 

So mayank even chaged his name''

Five years OMG'.suja im dying to read abt maynks chnge'.fearing it to much

 

 

Gr8 update..painful n pitfull

 




Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

Fiza, u r right ... nupur lost the reason of living ... she gave life to him, bt lost her life ... n she did it intentionally ...  she knew, she was the only person of mayank's life ... bt she dint think abt him, n herself.

thanks for liking this line ... a alwz scared to write such kind of line u knw ... i alwz think, such kind of lines so cheesy ... bt thank u for liking this lineBig smile

no, maynak dint change his name ... there was another reason behind it. Wink
i ll reveal it soon.
ab agar tune bhi mujhe filler kahegiAngry
i hate uAngry

ps: waise, tune bataya nhi tujhe meri shayri kaisi lagiWink

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 6:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

res
yeah kamal kasy hoa
update
humary naseeb mein update
 
eidted
 
 

They strt was so painful'..the way she was searching mayank..

Was so obvious, u lost herself way back..n today she lost even the reason of doing all this too

 

N maynk's parents can nevr evr be right n good'thy just donot have  a heart'.sun j***k

 

Its feel so painful to see her in such state yaar..so much

She gave life to him, n lost her life

 

mouth is stronger than eyes ... it has a great ability to hurt people in words

 

I so loved this dialogue. so tue'lovly line suja

 

I really loved the way uday reacted to the situation but also the way chitra handles it

Its true they were punished of a sin thy nevr did'.

 

N n all it was a gr8 update ms filler

 

So mayank even chaged his name''

Five years OMG'.suja im dying to read abt maynks chnge'.fearing it to much

 

 

Gr8 update..painful n pitfull

 




Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

Fiza, u r right ... nupur lost the reason of living ... she gave life to him, bt lost her life ... n she did it intentionally ...  she knew, she was the only person of mayank's life ... bt she dint think abt him, n herself.

thanks for liking this line ... a alwz scared to write such kind of line u knw ... i alwz think, such kind of lines so cheesy ... bt thank u for liking this lineBig smile

no, maynak dint change his name ... there was another reason behind it. Wink
i ll reveal it soon.
ab agar tune bhi mujhe filler kahegiAngry
i hate uAngry

ps: waise, tune bataya nhi tujhe meri shayri kaisi lagiWink

Ur more thn welcum dear

U know im too much in this ff

 

Jab tu khud ko ms filler khan chor day gi tu hum bhi choor day gay samhji

 

Kaun se shiar yeah teri signature…pata woh jo humara discuion than a why we hate relations wala mjhy us ki yaad dilata hai

 

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by valliyah

ab unres ka wait karo jaise hum update ka karte haiStern SmileLOL...!

chal unres kardete hai tum bhi kya yaad karogi kis dildar se pala pada EmbarrassedLOL...after all kal update ka sawaal hai warna yeh resss bhari padhta Cool jaise humko update ka intezaar pada Stern SmileLOL...!


suja i just loved this update...i wanted them to feel the pain n u made sure to fulfill my wish Approve...but the humiliation part still remained for mayank's so called pathetic family...make sure they repay every ounce of it...its pay back time for all Stern Smile...!

well nupur's father regrets but ab pachtayit kya hoat jab chidiya chuk gayi khet...okk lets give him one more chance to mend things just for sake of mayur...!

btw i like nupur's friend...a friend in need is a friend indeed n he indeed is a true friend...he made sure not to leave her alone when she was in need...!

well don't u think nupur should thank mayu for only bcoz of his inspiration she was able to comp her MBA n made a mark for herself Ermm... pyar mein thanks nahi hota i know par pyar mein dhoka bhi to nahi hota jo usne kiya phir reason kuch bhi ho she acted selfish so she deserved this pain...!

okk i think ur gonna intro mayu but ladki use wapis paane se pehle sab se khub papad belwanaLOL...itne din uska pain hum bardasht kiye ab sabko uske aage jhukta dekhna chahte haiEmbarrassed...make sure i do enjoy this part do...unko milwana but aaram se koi jaldi nahi LOL...!

i love ur siggie for this update...its gorgeous...!

LOL



Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

Valli,  thank u unresingHug ... actually mujhe pata hai ...tum bht dildar ho ...tumhare dil ko miter ya kilometer se nhi LightYear se measure karna paregaROFL
how big ur dil isShocked
dont worry ... mayank's family ll pay for theri every deeds.Smile
par sift wolog nhi...nupur's father ki bhi kuch pending hai ...Wink
yes, nupur should thank mayank ...par phle meeting to hone do ...  nupur ko ek bara sa surprise milnewala hai ... u knw na, what m trying to say.Wink
well, papad to belwana hi parega ... akhir unlong ne kia hai aisa hai ...Ouch uss humiliation repay karna baki hai

@ bold : i love it ... it was truly truly truly my feelings ... n i love u so much that u felt waht i wanted show.Hug

thank u so mcuh for like this siggi ... n i just love ur muhawra ... i really like it.Big smile

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

res
yeah kamal kasy hoa
update
humary naseeb mein update
 
eidted
 
 

They strt was so painful'..the way she was searching mayank..

Was so obvious, u lost herself way back..n today she lost even the reason of doing all this too

 

N maynk's parents can nevr evr be right n good'thy just donot have  a heart'.sun j***k

 

Its feel so painful to see her in such state yaar..so much

She gave life to him, n lost her life

 

mouth is stronger than eyes ... it has a great ability to hurt people in words

 

I so loved this dialogue. so tue'lovly line suja

 

I really loved the way uday reacted to the situation but also the way chitra handles it

Its true they were punished of a sin thy nevr did'.

 

N n all it was a gr8 update ms filler

 

So mayank even chaged his name''

Five years OMG'.suja im dying to read abt maynks chnge'.fearing it to much

 

 

Gr8 update..painful n pitfull

 




Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

Fiza, u r right ... nupur lost the reason of living ... she gave life to him, bt lost her life ... n she did it intentionally ...  she knew, she was the only person of mayank's life ... bt she dint think abt him, n herself.

thanks for liking this line ... a alwz scared to write such kind of line u knw ... i alwz think, such kind of lines so cheesy ... bt thank u for liking this lineBig smile

no, maynak dint change his name ... there was another reason behind it. Wink
i ll reveal it soon.
ab agar tune bhi mujhe filler kahegiAngry
i hate uAngry

ps: waise, tune bataya nhi tujhe meri shayri kaisi lagiWink

Ur more thn welcum dear

U know im too much in this ff

 

Jab tu khud ko ms filler khan chor day gi tu hum bhi choor day gay samhji

 

Kaun se shiar yeah teri signature'pata woh jo humara discuion than a why we hate relations wala mjhy us ki yaad dilata hai

 


signature nhi ye shairi ...

khin dehe khorbokay
mudo tahe bhari
jasorer koi jeno
naromurti dhari

ab par isse aur bata mujhe kaisi lagi???

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 6:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 18anila1

thanks for updating...Smile
loved it lodsssSmileBig smileSmile
awesome update dear...ClapClap
awww feeling really bad for Nupur...DisapproveDisapprove
i hope ap mere MayUr ko jaldi se mila dengi...Confused
btw i like wht Uday said to his father dat man deserve dis...Evil Smile
n wht abt dose 3 demons...Angry
ups i mean Maynk's family...Evil Smile
unhe kab akal ayegi...Angry
waiting eagerly for d next update...Big smile
plzzz update soon...Embarrassed
love ya...Hug



Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

dont worry Anila, mayur jaldi mil jayege ...par thora twist to ho jane doWink

dnt worry abt 3 demons ...they ll pay for their deed ... this the time of their repay.

i ll update soon.

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chandu-mayu

heart wrenching part. beautiful thank u so much for this update. plz plz continue soon


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

i knw, it was a sad update .. bt it has been necessary for next story.



Originally posted by DhanakZ

O suja that was so sad 
But Iam happy that every one realized there mistake
per Ye log 5 sal bad mila ga hay Bechara kasa raha ga alag alag
But Nice Update and plz plz  Update Game soon na 
I am dying to read it na
thanks For pm 
cont soon


Thank u so much for ur lovely commentSmile

Thank u so much for liking this update.Smile

dont worry Gul ... i ll update Game soon.

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 6:53am | IP Logged
i'm waiting for the update suja...kab milegi hume wo eid ka chand i mean updaate...

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