The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] - Page 84

Originally posted by: Maria.

yaar but u have to promise u  ll give us next update very soon😳

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WISH ALL MY BENGALI & NON_BENGALI FRIENDS ... A VERY VAERY HAPPY MAHALAYA 🤗Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 12 years ago

OH GOD

Wht he has done to himself….matalb suicide nhi tu slow poising he sahi…

He is going tht way

Ahh thnk gOd Jethumoni called him, I donot want him to back to attend gujan's weding but I want him to be there with her, to see her….to have her…

 

With winds a realy wnt to join n say even me too never saw such love

This was such a janu flower

 

Suja I love this in this ff, it make this story so heavenly , pure as nature

 

Haa…suthing never chnges …to hell with his father….father does he knew the meaning of this

Wht I felt wit song n nupurs expression I donot want to comment to spoil its beauty

Pata nhi I cant define wht I felt in between this song…feels like a miracle if the find there way together

 

Im afraid abt his reaction n nupurs courage…

 

 

 

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago

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sob cheye aagey Subho Bijoya 🤗...!

so something burned inside his so called father when he received jethumoni's call while ignored his, n i soo love to see this insulted feeling in him...but wait this is only the beginning i guess😊...Mr. yeh to trailer tha picture abhi baki hai so aage aage dekho hota hai kya 😈...!

He not only received Jethumoni's call but agrees to attend wed proves their is still hope for his comeback...comeback as the real mayank who is lost in dark...his arrogancy rudeness all gone just in mere second as soon as he heard Jethumoni's name... remembrance of the love n appreciation that he got from him proves there still remains some traces of emotions somewhere, only needed to bring out and nurture from the deepest dark inside...!

a part of me is soo pleasantly enjoying this helpless n miserable Nupur...i stated earlier she truly deserve this...actually deserve lottt more...oh so miss selfish bohat confident hai ki woh mana legi as he truly loves her...yaha bhi uske pyar par bharosa hai jab ki khud apne waqt back out kar gayi...wah kya pyar hai...suppose agar Neel se shaadi hojati to abhi apne life mein busy hoti madam tab kaha jata yeh rona aur manana...mayank may forgive her BUT itni jaldi bhi kya hai...i warn u suja NOT SO SOON 😳...!

what i feel for Mayank is beyond words...though he may show the rough n tough exterior but the pain he is going through since years is unexplainable...dying minute by minute to live with the truth that he has family but none is his, that the person he loved the most only betrayed to the extreme...n here ppl wish to get back him soo easily  as if nothing changed in years, pathetic will be the least to say...!

Perfect song selection...it synchronised perfectly...!

Ahh here we get those golden moments of their sweet innocent love(though as flaskback)...nature always was a silent(though they had their own sweet convo) spectator of their pure love...mayank need not words to express, his gestures told loud abt his caring possesiveness n the depth of his love...it was his care when he saw her panting and came back, wiped her sweat and asked for his punishment...he was possessive when he asked her to write just 1 copy of their lovestory so that the three golden words remains only his possesion...before living he plucked that cute flower and tucked in her hair followed with a hug only showed the depth of his unconditional love...though love couldn't be measured but needless to say here mayank's love always was superior than hers...!


Finally he arrived...its actually his Aagaman from a journey of past(dark) to present(towards light)...!

P.S...Title credit dena jaruri tha, ab de hi diya hai to hum bhi formality pura kar hi lete hai THANKYOU😳...Sigg is beyond superb...it has all that of this update...his rise, those deep blank eyes...and the darkness(pain) in and out of him...mindblowing...ab jaldi aao so that i can Halla Bol...u know why 😆...!
Edited by valliyah - 12 years ago

beautiful amazing. di mayank was living in terrible pain . oh my god. nupur is waiting for mayank. but mayank is different person now. continue soon

It was too Good and heart wrenching part 

Suja thank u for this update

i swear i want ask u update b4 i saw ur pm 🤗 tight1

n the update was Marvelous

u know even if ur update is sad we always got sweet flashback which is worthed...

i'm feeling both Mayurs pain n now my nups is waiting her Mayank bt her Mayank is changed can't wait wat happend wen they see each other after long 5 yrs..

loved how they conceling each other whithout being there as true person

i really gonna miss this ff while ur gone... but i'll read early update wen Mayur were happy 2ther...

loved these line it was sweet mayu 2 said that to her

"kyunki main nhi chahte k tum kissi anjana reader ko I love you bolo ... through you books" he shrugged as if its a matter!

n hey enjey ur time in ur Home n the Puja

Suja can u try to updae b4 u go GAME? PLZZ if u can't i can understand

thanks once once again for the update n the pm 🤗

i loved it lodsss...😳 Edited by 18anila1 - 12 years ago

Amazing updat