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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: -Faria-

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Sujaaa

Thanx GOD ' at last u updated my fv FF..

i was waiting for it ' but u d lazy girl d dint update it on right time'

any way I just want to say it was fab update as usual

awesome one re''''

I knew it- I knw Uday got married to chitra without his dad's permission'.

And I think  that's why  he hate love issue '

 

Accha tell me who is Niladri- iska chakkar kya hai

Now plz don't tell me that- nups dad is going to fix nups marriage with Niladri- then I'll kill u for sure'..

 

 

Awww my mayur-they r just amazing yaar

Haye nups was in red and white saari- and she looks beautiful

Mayank tou gaya ' he was totally mesmerized by hear beauty

Loved mayur scene a lot''

Loved their convo

GOSH mayur scene was too good- so cute and lovely'

But why u stopped at crucial point???

U said 2 ppl noticed them-one was happy and another was not happy'

Who r dey???? Hmm  person who was not happy may be nups dad but the person who was happy- kaun hai who- jethumoni????

Ok lets c- btw plz next time update soon

  Take care

 





Thank u so much for ur lovely commnet.๐Ÿ˜Š
Thank u so much for liking this update๐Ÿ˜Š
i knw fari, i was late...nt this time only, bt everytime.๐Ÿ˜ณ
actually i am busy ths days...n i knw, u understand my situation.๐Ÿ˜Š
n Neeladri ka chakkar to baad me pata chalega...par he is most important person in this FF.๐Ÿ˜‰
so dnt be impatient...just wait n watch...n give me LONG comment.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
well iss saree me nupur ko dekh kar to kai bhi flat ho sakta hai...to mayank kya cheeze hai๐Ÿ˜†
n d razz of two people will revel soon.๐Ÿ˜‰
keep replying๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

it was superb...i can see the whole scene in front of my eyes...loved it...i hope everything will be alright...waiting for next update...update soon



Thank u so much for ur lovely commnet.๐Ÿ˜Š
Thank u so much for liking this update๐Ÿ˜Š
OMG!!! u imagine it๐Ÿ˜ฒ...ohh...thank u thank u...m very much happy to read ur comment.
u dnt knw, hw i feel.โ˜บ๏ธ
its like out of the world.๐Ÿค—
thanks again.๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

hellooo

im so glad to c the update yupii...finally ..
ohh so tht was the reason her baba ssint want to talk to uday neither he like rich people...ohhh hooo...
 
hmm is ka matlab tu mayank aur nupur k beech mein is baba k laynay wali hai...hmm...
 
n tht bengali sarii ...ay hayyy...u know i love these sari..n the way it is puted on shoulder ahhh i soo love it ...n thn the moment was sooo ...he took her picture the fight ebruythng...
they r so lost in there moments tht thy even cant think anythng els...
per yeah do loog kaun thy ...ek tu pakkka her baba...gai behass pani mein...
 
MS SUJATA ...IF U PLANNED SUTHNING BAD FOR MY MAYUR I TELL U ME N FARIA BTH ...R GONAAA...๐Ÿ˜ˆ



Thank u so much for ur lovely commnet.๐Ÿ˜Š
Thank u so much for liking this update๐Ÿ˜Š
i knw iss saree me nupur ko dekh kar koi bhi flat ho sakta hai๐Ÿ˜†
me too liking my bengali saree a lot๐Ÿ˜‰...par occasion me hi phen sakti hun...wo bhi Maa ki help leke๐Ÿ˜†
mistry of two people will revel soon.๐Ÿ˜‰

chalo, ab mujhe mera will banwana hi hoga...pata nahi kab tu ya Fari mera murder kar de...ab to valiah bhi tum logon k sath hai
par kya yaar...abhi to meri shadi bhi nahi huyi aur tumlog mujhe marna chate ho??*pouted*

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: kirti123

nice part๐Ÿ˜Š



Thank u so much for ur lovely commnet.๐Ÿ˜Š
Thank u so much for liking this update๐Ÿ˜Š


Originally posted by: maria-soniarti

@sujal

 
it was beautiful update...
 
Mayur scenes were beautiful...lovely...
 
i loved it...
 
plzzz continue soon



Thank u so much for ur lovely commnet.๐Ÿ˜Š
Thank u so much for liking this update๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

fantastic update

luved the adorable n romantic mayur...luved the poja scene n their convo
hope nupur;s father dose nt create any problem fr mayur
cont soon suja



Thank u so much for ur lovely commnet.๐Ÿ˜Š
Thank u so much for liking this update๐Ÿ˜Š


Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

Wow amazing update

loved it

cont soon



Thank u so much for ur lovely commnet.๐Ÿ˜Š
Thank u so much for liking this update๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by: binotaroy

wonderful update. thanks for the pm.



Thank u so much for ur lovely commnet.๐Ÿ˜Š
Thank u so much for liking this update๐Ÿ˜Š

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur



Thank u so much for ur lovely commnet.๐Ÿ˜Š
Thank u so much for liking this update๐Ÿ˜Š
i knw iss saree me nupur ko dekh kar koi bhi flat ho sakta hai๐Ÿ˜†
me too liking my bengali saree a lot๐Ÿ˜‰...par occasion me hi phen sakti hun...wo bhi Maa ki help leke๐Ÿ˜†
mistry of two people will revel soon.๐Ÿ˜‰

chalo, ab mujhe mera will banwana hi hoga...pata nahi kab tu ya Fari mera murder kar de...ab to valiah bhi tum logon k sath hai
par kya yaar...abhi to meri shadi bhi nahi huyi aur tumlog mujhe marna chate ho??*pouted*

tu tu shadi ker k marna chati hai..dekh vr good people...v dont want two people to die..humary gang mein se kisi se bhi shadi kerny wala...wasy hi suiside kerlya ga...tu kyun do do jany barbad keray ...๐Ÿ˜ƒ..haina
.
shadi per itna bara lectur diya tha...ja wajood dobara read ker ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†..abhi shadi shadi ..ufff...lolzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is good
so mayank and nupur met as usuall and here nupur 's dad is remembering the older days
anyways the way u portrayed nupur in the bengali saree its just awesum
mayank got mesmerised by her look wow
and nupur is was blushing
mayank took so many pics of her
but yaar who are the two person who saw mayank and nupur together
anyways we will knowing it soon in ur next up
so plz cont soon and pm me




Thank u so much for ur lovely comment๐Ÿ˜Š

Tnank u so much for liking this update๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: -Faria-



Yesss i m with u...






arrey, Fari, tere daant ko kya hua????๐Ÿ˜ฒ

kisme itni himmat hai k tere daant leke bhag jaye???

๐Ÿคฃ
๐Ÿคฃ
๐Ÿคฃ
๐Ÿคฃ
Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

tu tu shadi ker k marna chati hai..dekh vr good people...v dont want two people to die..humary gang mein se kisi se bhi shadi kerny wala...wasy hi suiside kerlya ga...tu kyun do do jany barbad keray ...๐Ÿ˜ƒ..haina
.
shadi per itna bara lectur diya tha...ja wajood dobara read ker ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†..abhi shadi shadi ..ufff...lolzzz


Fiza, hamare gang ka naam sweet n sour group kyun hai???๐Ÿ˜•

iska naam to Terrorist Girls hona chiye tha๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

tune thik kaha, humse jo shadi karega...uski to khair nahi๐Ÿ˜ˆ...hum majbur kar denge suicide kare k liye๐Ÿ˜ˆ

hehehehahahaha๐Ÿ˜ˆ

haan, shadi shadi...wo kya hai na...mujhe NUPURLITIES ho gya hai...tere paas koi medicine hai iske liye๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur


arrey, Fari, tere daant ko kya hua????๐Ÿ˜ฒ

kisme itni himmat hai k tere daant leke bhag jaye???

๐Ÿคฃ
๐Ÿคฃ
๐Ÿคฃ
๐Ÿคฃ


it was not my face. its ur future  face...
if u'll try to apart my mayur than i will make sure that ur face will turn to above one

any way waiting for update

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Posted: 12 years ago
-: PROMO :-


"NUPUR NUPUR" suddenly she heard her father's  shout, "WHAT THE HELL IS THIS !!!! NUPURRR '"


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"why she's here??? I don't want to see them." he pressed his teeth together, "don't you know, Neeladri will come at any moment and I don't want to create a scene in front of him."


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"I love you Nupur, please marry me." Neel caught her hand tightly.


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"party for what Dad?"

"its none of your business." Abinash turned to leave, "do what I told, and don't forget this party is one of the most important for my business."


**

Today she again realized the depth of Mayank's love.


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"I love you Mayank, I love you." She cried her heart out.


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She kissed the rose lovingly before placing back into the book.


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She had made a decision.


******


So Friends, here is a lil promo for u.๐Ÿ˜Š

I know, u all waiting for update n m giving u a lil promo.

Its very disappointment for me too, but Friends, m helpless๐Ÿ˜ญ

I know, u all making plan to kill me, but m really very sorry.

But surely update asap.๐Ÿ˜Š

Plz bare me.๐Ÿ˜•

LUV U โค๏ธ

๐Ÿค—.




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Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 12 years ago