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Posted: 13 years ago

Fantastic update Suja
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-
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yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Sujaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
By GOD kya update tha janu-
muah muah muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

love u dear
it was the bestest update of this ff................................................

Hayeeeeeeeeeeeeee - finally my mayur confessed their love.

OMG Nups confessed it first- hahahahaha ye tou thoda ulta he hogaya........but i loved it suja......
i feel really very good to see them happy.............. both r perfect 4 each other...........
i can say mayu is very lucky that he has got nups loves.
and nups is lucky too.......................both r innocent,down to earth, and vey good human being

at first u started it with the convo of uday and mayu which was very nice
but when myus family joined with then and made fun of mayu i couldn't control anger.......
isnt it too much
why they alwz insulted mayu???
he is too shy to response- is it his only fault????
did they give any chance to proof himself??????????????
they alws praised gunjan- disgusting
r a koi tou saath dena chaiye na- its one type of mental torture yaar........

i hope maynak ko apne apko defend karneka mauka mil jati.
anyway forget it...............

coming to the most beautiful partof this update.
mayur scene near the lack- it was totally out of world
haye nups daar gayi thi and thats why she slapped nups
u know what when maynk said-"gir jata to mar jata ' aur kya"-my heart ached.
wokitna dard k saath ye baat kaha- hai na
but now everything is fine mayur jo saath saath hai

and the convo b/w wind and sun- by GOD it was outstanding
i have no word to desctibe this beautiful convo
and then moon mama also joined them- sujaaaaaaaaaa u r awesome writer..........

what a beautiful update
mind-blowing
acha i forgot to tell one thing- uditi and mayu scene was very sweet
even this lil baby recognize hw sweet and nice maynk is.

btw i think its enough of my non-stop bhashan
plz buda maat manna
thoda padne ki kasht karlo

love u dear
take care
and do update next part soon

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i knw, mayur confession thoda ulta ho gya..........par tujhe to pata hai na............mera FF me sab kuch ulta hi hota hai😛

nt only u, bt everyone angry on mayanks family..............bt dnt worry............with time they would realized it😊

maynak is very very reserved person.......thatsy he couldtn expressed his feelings😊

m happy that u like nature's convo😊

i love to read ur non stop vashan⭐️

thanks again😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jiya_angel
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Grr!! Fari first aa gayi😡

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uff!! i loved the confession😍
and i told you the sun-moon-wind convo was super cute😳... see, even fari agrees
grr!! I hate Mayank's parents😡... who does dis to their own child🤔
poor mayu... "gir jaata toh kya hota... marr jaata" no wonder he said that😔
but I am so happy for him now😃... Nupur is here to ease all his pain😃

Thnx for the pm

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i knw, mayur make everyone happy😃...............thatsy they are the best couple 😃

u r right, jab nups mayank k sath hai, to kya problem hai⭐️

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chandu-mayu
amazing story. beautifully written. u are very good writer. I am bengali so I can relate to the nature. plz update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Originally posted by: mahakmev
lovely and amzing feeling sad and happy for mayank

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Originally posted by: ridi_onasis
i'll kill mayank's family.......how could they did this to mayank.......😡
bt i'm very happy for the confession.........this was one of the best confession.........loved it......finally they confessed........

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thanks again for liking this confession...........i was really scared before posting............actually it was very first confession i wrote😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kirti123
omg felt bad for mayank how his family was humilating him
but wow mayur confessed that was superb
just loved the nature talk
thanks for the pm
do continue soon😊

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m really glad that u like nature's talk ...........n confession too⭐️

Originally posted by: valiyah27
So pure n serene............only Mayur can create this magic...............full of innocence...................great update....................................but dear what abt other FF's plssss update soon.....................thnx for pm..............!!!

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m really very happy to see ur comment😃

offcourse dear.............i'l update all my pending FFs.............just give me sometime😊...........m really tied up with works these days

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!dat was beautiful update
mayur confessed their love...totally mesmerizing
they r sooooo sweet cute n adorable....luved them
bt hate mayank family...why they r so rude with him n humiliating him
the last part was amazing.....wind moon n sun convo....dat was amazing
beautifully written
cont soon n tnx fr pm

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Thanks again for liking this confession scene.....,,,,,,,,,,,n nature's talk⭐️

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed
awwwwwwwwwwwwww......heavnely heavnly
this was so beautiful....

strt was so painfull....so much..i hate them ...y people dont think once before saying .....aww

n thn the slap......so full of love she has for him....this was awesum...

thy she confess ...the innocnce he had....

n the perfect thing is whn nature talks.....awww...this style of this ff make is blissd .....beyond sumthing....

lovely ....gr8 gr8.....

n ya ya im cuming up with long updates

lov ya

awww..im going back to read it again

Thank u so much for lovely comment😊

Thank u so much for liking this update😊

well, some people like that Fiza.............we cant help it

Thanks again for liking this confession scene............n nature's talk😃.............u dnt knw, m alwz waiting for ur comment😃

u r going to read again😲...................ohhh........u r lost ur mind

Originally posted by: DhanakZ
O Wao They Finally confess
I am so happy
The way U portray the whole scene was so beautiful
The Conversation of wind sun and moon was so so beautiful
thanks for lovely update
cont soon

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m really glad that u like hole update⭐️

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti
@sujal🤗

wow sis what a beautiful update....

MaYur confession😍😍😍

loved it

i loved all Mayur scenes,their hug😍😍

do continue soon

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m really happy that u like mayur confession⭐️

Originally posted by: .PINK.
hey nice part
do continue soon :_)_

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Auroni.92
Awwwwwww, hayeeee, OMG, ishhhhh, 😍😍😍...cant help but giving this expression...
This ws sooooooooooooooooooo romantic suja...
I lost myself in Mayur dreamland...😍😍
Ettoooo sundor kore je ki kore likho...Mone hoche sobkichu jeno amar chokher samne ghotche...
They CONFESSED!!!!! 🤪🤪Im dancing in happiness...
Sobcheye valo legeche batash r surjer kotha...Mone hochilo puro world jeno oder love witness korche...😍😍
Oshomvob sundor ekta part chilo...👏
Cant wait to read more nd more romantic update like this...
Joldi update koro...🤗

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m really feel very happy that u like entire update⭐️...............n specially mayur confession n nature's talk⭐️

abosso...........e chara ei update a r kichu chilo na😆

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Originally posted by: nightdreamer_mn
IT was really amaizng m speechless...hw can any1 write so deeply n touching...da conversion btw moon,sun n wind was superb....😆..really luv u r amaing writer seriously....n finally mayur r 2gether poor mayyu...really felt very...bad 4 him...u noe in our sicitey it actually happns....

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m really very happy that u nt only like this part............n also feel it⭐️

Originally posted by: mayur-ki-diwani
awwwwwwwwww its lovely

mayur were awesomeeee

the nature talk was very sweet

loved it alottttttt

continue soon

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m glad that u like mayur n nature⭐️

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur
Saja wat a beautiful n romantic update
i hate mayu's family 😡
but my nups is allways star ⭐️
n u hun thanks for the amazing update ur ⭐️
i loved the confo between the wind n the sun hilarious
thanks for the pm

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thanks again for like mayur n nature's talk⭐️

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Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti
Amazing part.

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Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti
Beautiful upd8

loved it

cont soon

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Originally posted by: Alisha-MJHT
Fantastic update Suja
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Originally posted by: itzMYattitude
omgggggggggggggggg
amazinggggggggggg update dear

finally the confession

yupeeeeeeeeeeeee

the scene was out of the world

much more than my expectations yar

hats off for such an amazing job

awwwwwwwwwww

mayu is really sweeeeeet na

loving his character more n more

dialogue writting just outstanding

the wind n sun part was cuteee

love reading it

sorry for being late

m a lil busy these days

do continue sooooooooooon

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m in cloud nine⭐️

m really very very happy that u like this update that much⭐️

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria
hi
the up is good
so everyone is n chatting mood
but mayank as per his nature he is all quite
and this quiteness of his is irritating his parents who considered him as un smart and shy
this kind of behaviour is really torturing mayank he is feeling really low and sad
his eyes are becoming all teary
but his pain cant be understand by anyone except nupur
nupur took mayank with her so that he could overcome his pain
the confession is really sweet
finally nupur and mayank confessed and i love it
plz cont soon and pm me

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