The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] - Page 17

Originally posted by: -Faria-

Suja - jiya is right- dont dare call this boring
it was mind blowing update
i have changed lots of things on this update and made it more beautiful
i loved mayu and sutras scene
they hav enjoyed a lot.
at least mayu enjoying his life here- he is a boy of soft mind.
even sutra admit this fact
but i dont knw why his mom and dad alwz insult him
why dont they understand his feelings and emotions
GOD give them some brain....... they alwz praise gunjan and insult maynk.
its very sad yaar- i felt really bad for Mayu
i hope his parents will understand his value soon and will give him the same priority as gunjan
i loved the song- it was wonderful dear
and maynks imagination with nups was too good
loved the whole update
fantastic job SUja
keep it up

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti

@sujal

 

Beautiful update

 

Mayur were soooo sweet

 

plzzz do continue soon

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Mujhe to rotten tomato aur eggs ki jaga ek virtual hug deneka mann kar raha hain...Toh yeh lo..🤗🤗...Ek ke saah dusra free...😆😳
And r u like mayu's parents jo itni sweet update ko boring bol raha hain...This update ws just like mayu...Sweet, simple and soothing...
Mayu's parents r really blind...They cant see the simplicity and the golden heart of their son...And he is a matured guy...How cud they alway insult him infront of his younger sister...They'r so annoying...😡😡...Poor mayu...
Ok now the best part of this update ws the song and MN in it..😳. I mean the environment, moonlight, guitar and MAYUR...😍😍😍 all ws so dreamy...
All in all an amazing update...Do cont soon...

Originally posted by: nightdreamer_mn

Beautiful update.........amazing mayur ...scene..... 

waiting 4 ur next update...👏 

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is really good

so mayank is changing day by day and this is due to the atmosophere as well as the effect of nupur

so mayank went to sutra house and there he had enjoyed a lot

sach mein mayank's heart is really nice and caring he stops sutra from killing the bird

but yaar yeh mayank ke parents yeh usse bas boring aur unsmart kun kahete haai they are his parents they should try to understand him agar woh log he usse nahin samjhenge toh woh aapne feeling kis ke saath share karega

i really dont like this kind of attitude of his parents

but anyways nupur is a good friend of him aur friend se kuch zada he ban gaye haai woh mayank ke liye

but mayank is feeling scared to express his feeling to her

plz cont soon and pm me

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

fabulous update

luved mayank n sutra scene.....n also luved mayank thoughts abt nupur n mayur convo were really sweet...

why his parents alwayzzz insulting him n praise gunjan...dnt like dem

aweeeee....the song part was amazing...luved mayur

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

oki dnt u dare call it boring ...

im late as usaul as i dont read ths ff in hurrry...i spend time with it....cause i love it...it makes me so peacful...i hope mayank dream get fulfil ....the song his imagination....eveything was so beautiful..lovely

gr8 update