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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: -Faria-



Sujaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
oit was beautiful beautiful very beautiful update
u dont knw how much i love this part dear


ahhhhhhh i loved all the things frm first to last

in the morning mayank was mesmerized by the the sweet sound of mail voice- it was Azan right .
aww i loved this part

and then i love my maynk more and more when he was roaming around the garden and praising it fom his hear
i could imagine the whole thing....

This was the best morning of my life ....... I saw a beautiful sun rise. A red bindi slowly rising ...... gradually increase its size to a red-golden plate ..... the sky was red ...... birds ware flying between white clouds .... mild cold breeze touched my soul ...... the red-golden plate slowly rising ........  I never forgot that sun rise .......  It is the best memory of my life.

the way u describe the beauty of the morning scene- by GOD i m amazed with it. spcially when u said -a red bindi slowly rising and gradually its size to a red golden plate- ufff i loved this sentence

OMG mayur were met on the fruit garden- hahahahha nups is guava-thief
awwwwww she is so sweet.
i loved her innocence

so love at first sight - right
maynk  feels  something special for Nupur-His  mind said nupur is his girl
wow thats great

the flashback part was quite sad
i felt sad for mayank...
anyway awesome update dear

just too good
i loved it frm the core of my heart
plz do update next aprt soon







Thank u so much for ur sweet lovely n long comment.

yes, d sound was azan.......actually this was my personal xperience. my cousin lived in mumbai, when he came to visit my place n heard d last azan, he acutally asked, what was that sound!! so, i add this on FF.

isnt it funny that someone dont knw abt azan!!!

thanks for ur sweet comment.

love u.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

superb update

the morning scene u describe was mindblowing....n luved the mayur meeting...nupur was soooo sweet n adorable n mayank liked her at once.luved the mayur n jethmoni scene
flashback part was sad...u write vry well
cont soon


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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

its such a beautiful update

poor mayank....but he such a nice boy ..happpy with hs imperfect life....happy living in himself..doesnt want to explain himself in frnt of any1..who cares..actually i can relate to him..so im loving ths story mor n more....
 
n nupur is a full on rollercoster
 
cont soon


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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Wao Mayur meeting is so cute

and Nupur amrod choor .Ha Ha ha 
I really love this part 
thankU so much for Pm


Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

oshomvov shundor..........guava chor nupur nd bookworm mayank.......what a jodi..........loved it..........waiting for next part.......cont soon

 

Originally posted by: -Annie-

OMG!
loved it
But why was his father so rude
He bought a cycle for Gunjan 1 year before Mayu
So its really obvious.. Nahi?
But anywayz
Loved ur update
And that 'abhi meri shaadi bhi nahi hui' cracked me up
But seriously
U r an awesome writer
Keep it up
And please apna ss bhi update kar na
Please!!
With love,
Annie




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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is really superb
u have describe dthe story very very nicely
so coming to the up mayyank he is really a shy guy but i liked him th econo with jethomoni is good
and the best part is nupur wow she is adorable and livly girl
and mayank liked her
plz cont soon and pm me


Originally posted by: mahakmev

aww feeling sad for mayank but loved it plz make my mayank happy


Originally posted by: -moona-

wow. really nice part..

OO my sweet shy mayank...
really loved it


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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: ginny09

gr8 part !

n gr8 mayur meet :D
nice job !


Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Just amazing my 'mangal graher jeeb'...
Loved the way u described the morning atmosphere...I ws so lost...
And i loved our mayur's meeting...Nupur is just like the original one...So bubbly and nautankibaz...This wll be a great pair...A bubbly nupur and a innocent cute mayank...And he's already falling for her...So cute...
Cont soon my ajob jeeb...


Originally posted by: nightdreamer_mn

WOW!! it was really amazing update...2day itself i read....i likd mayank's character n nupz to pehl se hi by god hai...she is just superb...!!



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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: chilluppp

amazingggggg update dear

just loved it to the core
ver well written *thumbs uppp*
awwww
mayu my boy is really sweeeeet
loving him in this ff
 
amazingly written dear
sorry for nbeing late
continue sooooooooooon =)


Originally posted by: varsh-mayur

hey suja its sucha lovely update i really love ur ff's keep writing


Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

Nice part


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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you so much for linking this story.😊
 
 
 

 

 

 

 
 

 
Thank u so much guys for pressing the Like tab and also urs precious comments.😊
 

 
here is the next update........i hope u like it........😊
 

so, tell me how it is..................waiting for ur comment😊 
 

 
 
Love
suja❤️
 

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Posted: 13 years ago
uffffffffffff sujaaaaaaaaa toame ei ff er update porte amar eto bhalo lage eto bhalo lage j ki bolbo
i really enjoyed ur each and every update of this ff
ALLAH e jane keno - kintu ei update er moddho kemon ek dhoroner 1ta simplicity, ek dhoroner maya ase............
r tume j vabe scene gulo describe koro - ekdom oshdharon
the beautiful nature, maynk and Nupur- i just loved them

mayank ebong nupur er scene gulo chilo shotti khub bhalo
hmmmmmmmm so nupur o maynk er jonno onno rokom kichu feel korse???
hahaha dui jon ek e nayer(boat)  majhi
oshdharon legese tomar ei updte-shoti bolsi
porte boshle mone hoy r o pori r o pori

khub nice ekta story suja
thank u so much amader shathe share korar jonno
plz next part taratari update koro

(aj pura comment Bangla te dilam. tumi raag koroni tou?)

Edited by -Faria- - 13 years ago