The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] - Page 8

ria

@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 13 years ago

hi

the up is really superb

u have describe dthe story very very nicely

so coming to the up mayyank he is really a shy guy but i liked him th econo with jethomoni is good

and the best part is nupur wow she is adorable and livly girl

and mayank liked her

plz cont soon and pm me

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

aww feeling sad for mayank but loved it plz make my mayank happy

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow. really nice part..

OO my sweet shy mayank...

really loved it

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice story and updates

thx alot for the pm

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ginny munjal

@ginny09

Goldie

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Posted: 13 years ago

gr8 part !

n gr8 mayur meet :D

nice job !

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

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Posted: 13 years ago

Just amazing my 'mangal graher jeeb'...
Loved the way u described the morning atmosphere...I ws so lost...
And i loved our mayur's meeting...Nupur is just like the original one...So bubbly and nautankibaz...This wll be a great pair...A bubbly nupur and a innocent cute mayank...And he's already falling for her...So cute...
Cont soon my ajob jeeb...

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-NightDreamer-

@-NightDreamer-

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

WOW!! it was really amazing update...2day itself i read....i likd mayank's character n nupz to pehl se hi by god hai...she is just superb...!!

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itzMYattitude

@itzMYattitude

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Posted: 13 years ago

amazingggggg update dear

just loved it to the core

ver well written *thumbs uppp*

awwww

mayu my boy is really sweeeeet

loving him in this ff

amazingly written dear

sorry for nbeing late

continue sooooooooooon =)

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

Goldie

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey suja its sucha lovely update i really love ur ff's keep writing

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516247

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jiya_angel
hey sujata....very nice update dear👏
Mayank the shy boy is soooo cute😳
and Nupur to Nupur hai bhai...wo kahan sudharne waali hai😆😆

awesome work.....do continue soon😊

thnx 4 de pm🤗

**yippee....me first....

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