The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Auroni.92
Lovely update...Loved ur sketch...Its brilliant...👏👏
And u dnt like shorot...😲😲...Time for my surprise.😆😆..Well everyones choice is different...Like i dnt like bonkim...😆..Ok thnxx for the name of the author and the book...
Im enjoying it and also the 'bangla' in it...😆...cont soon...

Thanks for liking d update 😊 i knw, almost cent percent bengalees r love Shorotchandra........bt his novel md me sleepy 😆 .... so i like Bankimchandra, n nt only u....my friends r call me 'mangal graher jeeb' 😆 as i like Bankimchandra 😆. Thanks for liking d sketch......Thank u so much for ur precious comment 😊

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti
Nice part n waiting 4 mayur meeting.😊

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Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
awesome job

my fav was the pic

ur pencil shadding is awesome

gr8 job

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Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti
Wow

I'm liking this

cont soon

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Originally posted by: RiddhiB
nice start!
so..umm..nice story with a bengali touch!
"Jeetumoni"..I loved the name..
Loved how Mayank Sharma emerged as Mayank Roychoudhary
Cont. soon

Thank u so much for liking this story 😊 i also love "Jethumoni" 😊 Mayank Roychoudhury was very much different of Mayank Sharma, but u cld see some similarity later btwn them 😉 Thank u so much for ur precious comment 😊

Originally posted by: chilluppp
this pencil sketch made by u???
ok
amazingggggggg update dear
loved it to the core
mayank was really sweeeeet
excellant work
fabbbbbbbbbbbbb

precap sounds interesting
mayur meet finally
so do continue sooooooooooon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you so much for linking this story.😊

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Thank u so much guys for pressing the Like tab and also urs precious comments.😊

here is the next update........i hope u like it........😊

so, tell me how it is..................waiting for ur comment😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey sujata....very nice update dear👏

Mayank the shy boy is soooo cute😳

and Nupur to Nupur hai bhai...wo kahan sudharne waali hai😆😆

awesome work.....do continue soon😊

thnx 4 de pm🤗

**yippee....me first....

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sujaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
oit was beautiful beautiful very beautiful update
u dont knw how much i love this part dear

ahhhhhhh i loved all the things frm first to last

in the morning mayank was mesmerized by the the sweet sound of mail voice- it was Azan right .
aww i loved this part

and then i love my maynk more and more when he was roaming around the garden and praising it fom his hear
i could imagine the whole thing....

This was the best morning of my life ....... I saw a beautiful sun rise. A red bindi slowly rising ...... gradually increase its size to a red-golden plate ..... the sky was red ...... birds ware flying between white clouds .... mild cold breeze touched my soul ...... the red-golden plate slowly rising ........ I never forgot that sun rise ....... It is the best memory of my life.

the way u describe the beauty of the morning scene- by GOD i m amazed with it. spcially when u said -a red bindi slowly rising and gradually its size to a red golden plate- ufff i loved this sentence

OMG mayur were met on the fruit garden- hahahahha nups is guava-thief
awwwwww she is so sweet.
i loved her innocence

so love at first sight - right
maynk feels something special for Nupur-His mind said nupur is his girl
wow thats great

the flashback part was quite sad
i felt sad for mayank...
anyway awesome update dear

just too good
i loved it frm the core of my heart
plz do update next aprt soon

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manjeet

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Posted: 13 years ago

superb update

the morning scene u describe was mindblowing....n luved the mayur meeting...nupur was soooo sweet n adorable n mayank liked her at once.luved the mayur n jethmoni scene

flashback part was sad...u write vry well

cont soon

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

its such a beautiful update

poor mayank....but he such a nice boy ..happpy with hs imperfect life....happy living in himself..doesnt want to explain himself in frnt of any1..who cares..actually i can relate to him..so im loving ths story mor n more....

n nupur is a full on rollercoster

cont soon

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Gul

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wao Mayur meeting is so cute

and Nupur amrod choor .Ha Ha ha

I really love this part

thankU so much for Pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

oshomvov shundor..........guava chor nupur nd bookworm mayank.......what a jodi..........loved it..........waiting for next part.......cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

OMG!
loved it
But why was his father so rude
He bought a cycle for Gunjan 1 year before Mayu
So its really obvious.. Nahi?
But anywayz
Loved ur update
And that 'abhi meri shaadi bhi nahi hui' cracked me up
But seriously
U r an awesome writer
Keep it up
And please apna ss bhi update kar na
Please!!
With love,
Annie

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