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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 7:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pixie_n

hey sanWink hawww so you guessed it was meLOL
umm ohkey i must tell u dat u r fab at writing. u rlly hv a talent to describe a most touchy scene in a vry pure way mixed with saniya's special humour. though i missed saniya's antics here Big smile..seriously i adored dis story. it sounded lyk a fairytale. i no wenever u write i keep on praising u u mite feel ki m buttering u up bt u cn feel it 4 sure cuz i jis cant help myself. i do comments on others ff too, sometimes just 4 d sake of reading, sometimes 4 praising, as here r many many good nd awesum writers including u jaan. but honestly speaking i feel attached to u though i hv recently joined if nd urs writings too. bt wenever i comment 4 u its frm direct dil se. hehe. i dunno y but there is surely a connection.Wink 
aww i am always touched  by ur longggggggg comments which i love to the coreBig smile hehe chill ur gonna get saniya's antics in my mr aWink man i also wait for ur comments dil seEmbarrassed i felt like so happy when you said that u feel attached to my storys. thank you. sure man there has to be a connectionLOL
ok coming back frm ma weird connection senseLOLto os. well it ws again beautifully written.nd i loved de concept. the feelings which sabina went through it felt so rite nd true. well i also think ki i vil go for arrange 4 sure bt stil i dun get the idea getting married to someone whom u dont know. hw cn u b sure ki he/she will keep u happy. although wud be couples talk on ph and meet too but still. but the other way round. its beautiful to, living and falling 4 a person slowly slowly. getting happy 4 small small things. it is damn confusing. wish it cud be love cum arrange widout ny problems.. look i turned into a moral sc. teacher. blah blah blah. yeah it me i do get philosiphical sometimes.ha ha LOLLOL
thank you. well you sound like one romantic soulLOL eee am like so not into marriages, so i won't even go there LOL well yeah arranged marriages do seem cute but then after sometime everything becomes like a routine (same in love marriage) so it's better to choose the right guy from before only. sameee even i go philosophical sometimesLOL
ok i loved" GO SABINA GO SABINA" it ws cute. omg so damn cheesy lines u use, i love dese cheesy comments the most after ur beautifully expressed story ofcourseSmile... dat ladoo part ws rlly cute nd funny. shaadi widout a dulha nd virgin mommy. roflmao...it ws toooooooooooo gud. aww loved dere confession. i liked d name ayaan nd it ws easy to relate it with armaan. they kissed nd den confessed added to dere already unique lovestory..acha did ur frnd rlly lyk ran away fm marriage. it must b fun ya. wow like bollywood. wow(dreaming)SmileSmile lovely os
and saniya plz update ur ffs too waise i hv realised i love ur os' more cuz dey r more based on real u. i love ur writings based on os cuz u get urself purely nd truly indulged in dem. ok now enough of ma talks. u mite b bored nw. m zipping up
haha u see am like the queen of pick up and cheesy lines even collegeLOL i just named the guy ayaan as it sounded good with sabina. nooooooo sabina is still 16 LOLLLLZZZ she didn't run from marriage. it was a fictious storyLOL yeah bbz i'll continue ffs as well. sabar baalike.LOL and i can never get bored of ur ramblingWink
cya
lots of love
nisha
P.S. do update ur ff's otherwise i vil get naraaz nd its mushkil to manaofy me

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 7:28am | IP Logged
hiii san.
thanks for writing this stoty for me and tributing to me.
i really liked it and i very well appreciate the hard work and effort that u have put in writing this story just for me.
i really liked sum bits such as setting the first part of the story in malawi which is my first home for lyf tym and after getting ma degree i will defo move bak dere. lets hope i find MR right whilst travelling by air.
i travel literally every year or twice a year to malawi and i swear down i do meet sum FIT guys buh i dont lust all over dem i just be fwends wid dem thinking am too young to do all of this stupidity like getting to know each other. i seriously dont have tym for this thinngs. but san by writing this story it has inspired me that love can occur anytym and anywhere.
you have very correctly cought out this part of travelling from Uk to malawi so i guess dis do relate to me which makes me feel part of this story besides using my name SABINA.
and yess karim is onli ma realli gudd fwend and i guess ma true best fwend for lyf and i will never luk at him in a diff way than a fwend. am always dere for karim buh marriage NO WAY. not ma type c'mon he lyks yellow and me a navy blue fan, total opposite. yes san i love using the word pidde because u kno know am abit of a gangster pidde yyo. so dont mess wid me Wink.
hey san i promise from this very day that i will right a story on u which will be totally realistic and da future of that story will be handled by me cuz i think i kno u enough and i will put the ending as dramic as you ARE. so trust me piddeee.
sfe and cya u later in college
luv u janemanXXXX
 

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 7:42am | IP Logged
ladddoooooo anytime man. and eeekkkss like so can't wait to read da story. don't worry i'll love it no matter how you write it. yo piddie do tell me the name of the storyLOL
i know bbz that i couldn't do justice to ur character but it was like my first time i am writing from someone else's POV so mistakes happened. don't worry in future i'll write more and better :D haha i know that about karim thats why i put the guys name as karim onlyLOL
i knowwww u don't lust behind guys. thats my jobLOL but i had to put some humour innit so changed a bit. 
eekkkss i swear i can't wait to read from ur POV. lets see how u bring my hero ur story. hey it better not be any of my old crushes. i hate them allLOL bring it on laddoo will wait for it
love
san

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 8:29am | IP Logged
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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 8:36am | IP Logged

Wow never knew you go to college in Africa twinzy LOL jk!


OMGsh typical arranged marriage *sighs* Wouldn't it be so awkward getting married with your own close friend Ermm?Awww poor girl, pata nahi khudh ko kausni musibat mai dakel diya deal with it now. && sari's aren't that difficult, why do people complain?Confused Though I personally  have worn sari only once in my life Ermm ROFL Tongueahem ahem San is Sani- right? YAY this is an interesting very interesting story now. Dulan to bhag gayi ab saddhi kaise hoga? LOL ROFL


Eeeeekssssss aapni saddhi se bagi nahi dusre larke pe line marne lagi. *haayee* Ayaan kitna sweet name hai nah Wink Aww this guys sounds so super cute. Accha kiya jo Sabina saddhi se bhag gayi. Kuch to aacha mila iss ko. LOL fake husband yeah way to go! Kya pata kuch hi waqt mai real bi ban jaye Wink ROFL O gosh- I really pity Ayaan for all these troubles he is into. Poor he and his parents Sabina, ko to ghar mil gaya aur kya chaiye. Emotional drama jindabaad eeeks!


Just a quick question Sabina knows right, this is all fake and not actual reality. Wow I am impressed, abhi ghar se bagi hai and she is so chilled out. Haha Ayaan ka kamra ab uska nahi raha. ROFL laddoos: but hey I agree not all round things are called laddoos. Kash humare parents ye baat samajte. "Pregnancy carving" What a drama queen man!


Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww what a cute man Ayaan is. Not every guy is like this, you know? Just get this couple married yaar they are so meant to be together. Day Dreaming


Gosh twinzy Sabina reuniting with her family is dam emotional yaar. Sachi mai Ayaan is god gifted. Anyone would love him for who he is. Co-incidence? They are back to all way where the story started. Hayyeee much in love couple way too dramatic & different gotta love em.


Simple adorable and fantabulous Thanks for sharing it's marvelous! Clap



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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 9:02am | IP Logged
OMG that was sooo good!  Shaadi without a dulha, a virgin mommy, and what not!  Di, you are just awesome!  I loved the part where Sabina shouts out, 'Because you are the one that made me pregnant!'  That was hilarious.  Their reunion was very cute.  It reminded me of this movie that I had watched before.  And did all this really happen?  If it did, then damn, Sabina is lucky!  Thanks for the PM, and continue your FFs super soon.

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 9:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Medzi_ARian...

OMG that was sooo good!  Shaadi without a dulha, a virgin mommy, and what not!  Di, you are just awesome!  I loved the part where Sabina shouts out, 'Because you are the one that made me pregnant!'  That was hilarious.  Their reunion was very cute.  It reminded me of this movie that I had watched before.  And did all this really happen?  If it did, then damn, Sabina is lucky!  Thanks for the PM, and continue your FFs super soon.
eeek did it remind you of jab we met?LOL btw sabina's character was only real the story was fictious. that girl is still 16LOL and thank you so much for ur commentsTongue

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 9:22am | IP Logged
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thnx 4 d PM

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