Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

CaliforniaGirlsWe'reUndeniable -FF M&G/A&A(Pt4Pg8)

Armaan_Maan Groupbie

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 8:35pm | IP Logged

Hey Everyone !

Well most you guys probably don't know me but my name is Maahi ! Im a silent member in this forum... quietly reading all of your topics and FF.

My FF is called California Girls, We're Undeniable (Just like the song lol) and you will know why after reading the story lol

So after reading soo many FF I decided to write my own. Just a warning before I start I'm not a good writer at all and sorry if Iam not descriptive enough lol.

Okay so characters:

Geet Handa:  20 years old, was raised and born in Canada but just moved to California. She's a very talkative and bubbly girl once you know her but she's very shy and quiet at first especially to strangers.  She's going into the Business Program at UCLA very smart and got a full rise scholarship so that's why her parents let her move there. Also, she has been to Cali many times as her cousins live there and two of them got married.

Arohi Sharma: is Geet's cousin that lives in California. She is the youngest out of three daughters in her family she is 22 years old.  Arohi is a very smart girl, and very outgoing she has many interests and has many friends.  

Arjun Punj: A very successful business man that owns P &M company his father's company that he runs now. He is a very outgoing guy just like Arohi, loves to go out and is in sports.  He is 25 years old.  Arjun and Arohi have the same circle of friends so they know each other. He also lives in California. He is best friends are Armaan, and Maan.

Armaan Malik: he is a flirt (just like his character in the beginning of DMG) He changes his girlfriends every day and just likes to play around but he never hurts or misuses any girl. He respects them. He is very smart and is also studying at UCLA in medicine to become a doctor. He is 21 years old.  Also, his family is very wealthy just like Arjuns and Maans is.

Maan Singh Khurana: He is just like his character in Geet. Very serious and arrogant. He is a very successful business man (25 years old). He is one of the youngest people to achieve fame this fast in his life.  His business is in California and he lives there with his Daadi. He just doesn't like girls, he thinks that they are just a waste of time and are annoying but loves his Daadi very much.  Even though he doesn't like girls he is friends with Arohi they are really good friends because Arohi doesn't like him in that way and doesn't throw herself on him like all of the other desperate girls. And his best friends are Arjun and Armaan he is a totally different person with them and would give up everything for them.

Also, if anyone wants to be added to my pm list please add me as buddy on here its is easier to send out pms that way...


Part One - Page 1

Part Two - Page 3 

Part Three - Page 6

Part Four - Page 8

Edited by Armaan_Maan - 02 February 2011 at 10:32pm

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muskanp IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 8:38pm | IP Logged
all the best sweet heart maahi.
looking frwd to the part 1

Edited by muskanp - 22 January 2011 at 8:38pm
MaanGeetkiSimmi Senior Member

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 8:39pm | IP Logged
You should name  it "California here I come" you know just a suggestion if yur gona show Geet's journey in Cali. CONTINUE SOON THOUGHT =D
shah10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 8:45pm | IP Logged
great intro.
cant wait 4 the 1st part
do contineu plz.
add me to yr pm list.
simi91 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
interesting concept pls cont soon add me pm list
Armaan_Maan Groupbie

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 9:14pm | IP Logged

Part One:

Geet arrives at LAX Airport. She is looking for her cousin as she told her that she was going to pick her up.  After trying to find her for 5 minutes she pulls out her phone and calls her.

Geet:  Arohi..Where are you?

Arohi: Sorry Geet was trying to find parking I'm on my way.

Geet: okay see you soon !

10 minutes later Geet sees Arohi approaching her. They hug as they haven't seen each other in a while.

Arohi: How are you?? I missed you soo much

Geet: Im fine.. and yes it has been way to long.

Finally, Geet and Arohi reach the parking lot and get her luggage and everything settled. During their car which is one hour they catch up on everything. Arohi is telling her all about Arjun, Armaan and Maan.  Geet is just enjoying her stories as Arohi is warning her to stay away from Armaan cause he is a flirt lol.

They reach Arohi's house where Geet will be staying because her parents only let her go to California on one condition that she would stay with her aunt and Geet didn't really have a problem because she loved her aunt and cousin they were all like sisters.

Geet called her mom and dad letting them know that she has arrived safely and will talk to them tomorrow because she is tired and wants to sleep. It's been a long day for Geet with all the airport hassle and getting to L.A. so she decides that she should go to sleep because tomorrow she has to take care of a few things regarding her admission and some documents.  She goes into her room and gets ready to go bed and she hears a knock at her door...

Arohi: Hey it's me

Geet: Yah come in !

Arohi:  After your school work we are going out with my be ready to meet them all..I have already told them about you.

Geet: Sounds like a plan.

Arohi: Okay than...good night take care

Geet: Good night and take care


The next day, Geet wakes up early to take a shower and get ready for a busy day. It's 9 am and Arohi and Geet are leaving the house to go to the UCLA Campus.  Even though its June and the semester doesn't start until late August, Geet had to get in a few documents in first and do some tests so that she could register for classes. Geet goes to the admissions office and hands in her highschool and university transcripts this way she is a transfer student.  She writes the basic English and math tests as they are required even though she went to a Canadian university. She also went to go see a counsellor to check which one of her courses would transfer over so she didn't have to retake any classes and to her surprise all of her classes were transferable.  Geet was very happy about that because it saved her trouble of having to take the same classes again pushing her behind. It was 1pm and Geet finally finished she called Arohi to tell her that she was all done. Arohi was at the mall nearby while waiting for Geet to do her stuff as Geet didn't have her own car yet.

Arohi: Soo are you done with everything? and how did everything go?

Geet: YUPP ! and Guess what??!! All of my classes transferred over so I don't have to repeat anything !!! :D

Arohi: WOW ! that's really good...

Geet: okay im hungryyy !! lets go get some chipotle ??!

Geet Loved chipotle (its Mexican food) and they didn't have one in her city in Canada so when she would go to California she would have that all the time.

Arohi: You read my mind lets go !

At Chipotle...

Arohi: So I was talking to Armaan and he said we are going to go bowling and then out for some shisha (hookah) ..Sound cool?

Geet: Yah sure (Geet was a bit nervous as she was meeting these people for the first time and didn't know who they were and what they would think of her but she was excited to go bowling)

Arohi: Okay so we are going to meet them at like 7 so we have tons of time lets go shopping? ?

Geet: Yah sure I want to buy tons of clothes for summer as I need to change up my wardrobe to Cali style :P

Arohi and Geet left Chipotle go to shopping..


PRECAP : Geet meeting the gang...

Sorry guys I know this part might have been boring but it's an introduction to get the story going. And I don't know how to create a PM list so if anyone knows please tell me or message me.

Thanks :) 

Edited by Armaan_Maan - 22 January 2011 at 9:15pm

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simi91 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 9:19pm | IP Logged
cant wait for Maaneet to meet awesome my dear pls cont soonnnnn
shah10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 9:21pm | IP Logged

love it.

cant wait geet to meet the gang..
do continue plz

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