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THE WINE CLUB #4 (welcome MAANEET) 1/22/2011 (Page 26)

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 3:16pm | IP Logged
vich idea mona...mayb i must hve missed it in the previous club cos i was not much there...
really

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
@ren. It was only a small idea for a Maaneet scene on page 23. Not the best though.

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 3:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by HIPHOP50

Originally posted by mgdg_2010

wow both of u hav such a huge family......LOL
so bohot maje kiyee....na...LOL

i love big families the noise, the sharartey. once a week we will get together friday or saturday at mum and dads sometime with our families sometimes withoutLOL it has become a tradition.
same like me...my F*Ly 2 joins in the weekend...otherwise im at my parents house where we all siblings meet ...my mom cooks our fav dishes.. week by week..

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
wats wid the moles mona...do write na yaar...wnt 2 see sme xrated ideas of urs...

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 3:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mehraan

Originally posted by HIPHOP50

Here mehr tell me what you think of this as after marriage scene..its my first and last!LOL

 

 

Geet slowly wakes up and rolls toward maan but the bed is empty and cold. Geet quickly sits up and looks around the room for any sign of maan. Her glance falls upon the pillow where there is a folded sheet of paper with a red rose on top of it. Geet slowly leans forward, picks up the rose and smells it with a small smile playing around her lips. She picks the folded sheet of paper and smiles shyly as she opens it. 

 

"Gone to work. Have dinner ready, Maan"

 

Geet blinks and reads it again. The words are still the same. Geet can feel her anger building. All signs of shyness have now vanished. Geet starts muttering to herself "Who does he think he is........Have dinner ready.....I'll give him dinner". Geet could feel her anger building. She flung the note and bedcovers to one side and climbed out of bed. She held onto the rose.

 

Its not the roses fault if Maan is an idiot she thought. He could have woken me but NO!...this is MSK why is he going to do that. No he does as he pleases and on top of that gives orders....have my dinner ready! 

 

Geet quickly showered and started to get dressed. She was still angry as she glanced at the bed and caught a glimpse of the piece of paper. " Have dinner ready" she mummbled. " Don't you worry MSK, I'll have dinner ready.....Cockroach soup! thats what I'll cook, hah" Geet continued to mutter all sorts of names and dishes she would serve MSK.

 

As Geet finished applying her lipstick, she felt a shiver down her back. She knew without turning around who was behind her, remembering the note, she carried on applying her lipstick completely ignoring Maan.

 

She felt maan start to walk up slowly behind her but before he could reach her she swung to one side out of his grasp and walked towards the wardrobe.

She glanced over her shoulder at Maan and said tartly. "What are you doing here aren't you supposed to be at work. I'ts not dinner time yet and i haven't had time to follow your orders or maybe you've come back to give me another order". She turned back to the wardrobe and missed the naughty smile on maans face. 

 

"No Geet i have came to pick up a file, thats all". Maan said oh so softly and seriously.  He again approached Geet slowly, his intense gaze capturing Geet's. Geet couldn't move away she tried to make her feet obey but Maan's gaze rooted her to the spot. 

 

Maan slowly reached out to put his hands on Geets waist "whats up mishti" asked maan softly.

 

Geet blinked and remembered the note. Geet slapped his hand away.

"Whats wrong, I'll tell you what's wrong" Geet tried to move to one side but Maan blocked her. Geet moved to the other side quickly, caught her foot on the rug causing her to lose her balance and fall towards maan. Maan caught Geet but the force of the momentum caused both of them to lose balance and fall to the floor.  Maan angled his body, taking the weight of the fall and Geet collapsing on top of him. Maan closed his eyes as he caught his breath.

"Maan, Maan, are you ok?" asked Geet as she ran her hand over  Maan's cheek, head and neck. 

 

Maan kept his eyes closed enjoying the caresses and feel of Geet as she lay on top of him, her earlier anger forgotten in her concern. 

"Maan...... Maan, open your eyes are you ok?, please Maan". Pleaded Geet.

Maan opened his eyes slowly and could no longer hide his smile. "Geet you don't need to find excuses to touch me. I'm  yours to touch whenever you want" whispered Maan, as he slowly ran his finger down Geets cheek.

Upon seeing the smile and teasing light in Maans eyes, Geet realised he was pretending to be hurt. 

 

Her earlier anger returned, She thumped his chest and said so you were pretending...you are always making a fool of me" Geet pushed against Maans chest to get up but maan quickly put his arrms around her waist to hold her in place. 

 

"Let me go Maan, I'm really cross with you" said Geet. as she pushed again on his chest. "first you don't wake me when you leave for work, then leaveorders! to cook you dinner and now you're making a fool of me" she pushed harder to get up but Maan just continued to gaze at Geet intently.

 

Geet pushed again on maans chest, "let me go Maan". Quick as a flash, using a tai chi manoeuvre Maan had Geet on her back with her hands pinned above her head, with his body pressed intimately from chest to Knees.

 

Geet gasped and stared up at him dazedly.Her body was slowly coming alive. Geet caught her breath as Maans fingers slowly stroked from her forehead over her eyes pausing at her lips.

 

"Why am i going to let you go when i have you where i want you, mishti" Maan murmured softly as his  gaze dropped to Geets lips  and he began to stroke his thumb over Geets bottom lip.

 

"Maan" whispered Geet breathlessly. I......I need... I have to.......

 

"Geet". Interrupted Maan. " Why do you think I left you that note? Hmmm. Because I wanted my dinner ready on time...no...i left that note because I knew how cross it would make you"..... Maan raised his gaze to meet Geets startled ones. "And"...Continued Maan, while stroking  his fingers over her chin down her throat....pausing on her pulse which was now  beating wildly. " Give me a reason to mollify you"  

Maan watched Geet as she slowly closed her eyes "Look at me, Geet" ordered Maan softly. Geets passion filled eyes jerked open and collided with Maan's.  Maan continued to capture Geets gaze as he moved his fingers to her shoulder where he began to loosen the knot which was tying the front and back of her blouse together.

Geet tried to pull her hands free, which were still pinned above her head.

"Maan...please" whispered Geet breathlessly as she continued to struggle, unknowingly pushing her body closer to Maan.

"Please ...what ....Geet" Maan whispered huskily as he lowered his head and captured the wildly beating pulse with his lips........the rest girls I have to leave to your wild imagination....

 

 

WHO SAID TIS IS THE LAST ONE????Wink i demand now wid utmost respect 2 u please please completeeeeeeeeeeeee...my imaginationsr running wild...shazzy ur such an xcellent writer..where were u dear??muah muahEmbarrassed 2 u 4 mkng me feel so shiveryWink  ..i liked the line...its highlated...wonderful piece of writing... do post in tat thread vhere i had given the link...
pla shazzy continue na ....requesting u

maan said highlighted bit. i want a hot floor scene as geet is always falling. the note bit was an exucuse for maan to tease and manana her in a hot and heavy way....iwas going to continue but then i would need to censor it.ROFL 

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mehraan

wats wid the moles mona...do write na yaar...wnt 2 see sme xrated ideas of urs...
When I get the time I will write it down. Sadly I'm not a very good writer but I'll try my best.

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mehraan

Originally posted by HIPHOP50

Originally posted by mgdg_2010

wow both of u hav such a huge family......LOL
so bohot maje kiyee....na...LOL

i love big families the noise, the sharartey. once a week we will get together friday or saturday at mum and dads sometime with our families sometimes withoutLOL it has become a tradition.
same like me...my F*Ly 2 joins in the weekend...otherwise im at my parents house where we all siblings meet ...my mom cooks our fav dishes.. week by week..

omg that sounds just like my familyLOL
mum cooking fav dishes....
i remember 1 year mum gave all 7 of us surprise birthday parties one by one ( we were all in late twenties and thirties). it was really fun for our kids to see mummy or daddy have a party.

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 3:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rahmona_pakswe

Originally posted by mehraan

wats wid the moles mona...do write na yaar...wnt 2 see sme xrated ideas of urs...
When I get the time I will write it down. Sadly I'm not a very good writer but I'll try my best.

hey mona,
give it a try you saw my first and last attempt....the rest will happen in my imaginationLOL

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