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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged

Hello guysHug my next poem is on dimri's favorite...that is Naksh's MISUNDERSTANDINGSCry Cry right from their courtship period till one year of their marriage... their intense love have always been stagnated and displaced bcoz of the growing misunderstandings between themConfused however sometimes it's easy and sometimes it's difficult but I feel the strength to move forward lies only within usBig smile Sooner we realize this it's better for us, because after all life is all about trying to move on and finding our paradise LOL LOL


Misunderstandings in Naksh relation is quite often,

As 'roothna manana' is part of their life & only option...

 

Natik hits akshi hard with verbal acrimony, 

And she repulsed back with equal hostility...

Although they didn't show, their heart sunk deep within, 

Tears didn't come but they knew they were dying within...


Shattered pieces of emotions on one end, 

And true love on the other side, 

There's a void that exists in between, 

How to fill it up, are the thoughts that come to their mind...


Then the silence comes between them, 

Even when they know things can be patched up,

Maybe they are hesitant so as to not hurt each other any more...



They take their time,

As they feel there's no need to hurry...

And as the time passes by,

Hurry will not then change into anxiety and worry...



They know they'll love each other always,

And their love for each other will never fade...

Patience and hope is what their relation demands, 

And their love indeed sails through storms, strong n calm...



Edited by gutky - 22 January 2011 at 9:40am

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Awsome di very nice poem yar

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 10:21am | IP Logged
very good yaar Vini....Big smile too good....Clap very nicely dexribed thier misunderstands which is of course part & parcel of Naksh's life...Big smile LOL MU bina toh Naksh exist hi nahi karte....

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 12:18am | IP Logged
Nice poem vini ClapClapClap...

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 12:42am | IP Logged
owowoww...dimrii's fav...LOL
mast poem dii..good jobbClapClap

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 1:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tafseer

very good yaar Vini....Big smile too good....Clap very nicely dexribed thier misunderstands which is of course part & parcel of Naksh's life...Big smile LOL MU bina toh Naksh exist hi nahi karte....

thanks taffy....Hug yaar i've wasted 3 hours of my life for describing dimri's crap...LOL LOLnow tho i'm  really scared of their romance bcoz its an indication that MU is on its way....Cry Angry

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smart.akaisha

owowoww...dimrii's fav...LOL
mast poem dii..good jobbClapClap

aur kya dimri ka fav hi hai...LOL neways thanks akaisha...Wink

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