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Asmaani Rang Ho ~ AR Mini FF~Part 3 -pg 9 (Page 7)

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 3:55am | IP Logged
Hey guys ... so here is part 2 ... thanks alot for liking and commenting ... Well yeah last part was a little short i agree ... Ive tried to make this part longer ... As i get the hang of it im sure i can give ull huge parts soon ... Also i decided this FF will not only have 4-5 parts but about 12 - 13 ... So please if you want me to have so many parts .. then do continue commenting .. Thanx alot Smile

Part 2 -
The rest of the day went in a click .
All interns were busy with their work and hardly got time to breathe since it was their first day.

Riddhima was in her room thinking about Armaan ...
' Armaan kya tum mujhse pyaar karte ho ? ' She thought .
' Nahi woh nahi karta hoga .. kyun karega ? mein tho sirf uski baki sabhi girl friends
ki tarah hoon ... a total time pass ! ' She thought
She got up from the bed and went towards the counter where a tissue box was kept and started removing all the tissues...
"He loves me ""He loves me not" "He loves me " " He loves me not "
Riddhima kept on removing all the tissues one by one saying these lines and finally lay down on her bed crying ..
She couldnt sleep at all !

Armaan in his room too was thinking about Riddhima 
'Dude you actually kissed her ! What must she be thinking man !! ' 
" Mujhe usse maafi mangni hogi " He said and picked up his phone ... He suddenly remembered he did not even have her number !
'Silly me , kal usse number le loonga .. Pakka ! ' 
'But im so sure she hates me now , but I really love you Riddhima , please wapas aa jao ... ' He thought ..
He was sitting on the window ledge thinking and crying .. and then fell fast asleep .

Dr Keerti - " So interns aaj aap sab ka dusra din hai .."
"Dr . Atul , Dr. Rahul , aap dono general ward mein . Dr Anjali , Childrens ward , Dr.Nikita OPD , Dr Armaan , Dr Riddhima , aap dono ICU mein ..."
' Arrey nahi ! Maam ko bhi aaj hi iska duty mere saath rakhna tha kya ?????? ' Ridz thought ...
' Good chance Armaan ... aaj usko sorry bol de ! Yes ! '

Armaan and Riddhima were in the ICU and both were just taking glances of each other again and again ...
Armaan - "Riddhima , Im so sorry , kal jo hua , woh nahi hona chahiye tha ... Mein sirf apne aap ko control nahi kar paaya ."
Riddhima just stood still listening to him , she did not even say a word. 
"Riddhima im Sorry , Please ! " "Riddhima ?"
"Theek hai Armaan , mein tumhe maaf karti hoon , lekin aage se dhyaan rakhna please. " She said
" Riddhima tum aaj bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho . "Armaan said and thought ' Wow she looks so beautiful in red! '
Riddhima just looked down and blushed .. "Thanks " was all she could say ... and the whole day went by .. Both of them staring at eachother ...

Riddhima was standing on the road trying to find a ricshaw to go home just till Armaan saw her ..
He stopped his Merc in front of her and opened his window ... " Riddhima tum kaise ja rahi ho ? "
"Auto se , kyun ??? " She said 
"Hop in ! I'll drop you home ..." 
"No Armaan its okay mein chali jaungi !"
"Come on !!!!! " He streched his last word and she just nod and entered in without saying a word...
" Riddhima  .... umm ... to tum kaisi ho ? "
" Theek hoon .. Tum ? " 
"Im great as always ! " He said in a happy mood ...
"So Riddhima , tum mere saath coffee pe chalo gi ? We can talk a bit too ... "
"Umm.... "
"Ok now prob if you cant come ... Next time !"
"Actually Armaan i dont mind ..."
"Ok then lets go !!" He said in a happy voice !
Riddhima saw his happy face ' He looks so cute and adorable when happy !
"Armaan ruko ! mera ghar yahi paas mein hai .. Kya mein change kar sakti hoon ? Sirf 2 min lage gein ... "
"Ok sure ! "

He was standing outside the car leaning on the bonnet waiting for her to come out ....
His jaw dropped when he saw the sight in front of him .. She was wearing a red dress a little above the knee length with Black boots and a black clutch bag
" R'r'r'r'rr'r'iii'''dddhimaa .... you look amazing!! "
"Thank you !! " She said looking down and blushing ...
"Ridz how about we go out for dinner somewhere ? Since you and me are so dressed up .. We dont deserve having coffee..."
"Especially a sexy lady like you ... I would wanna take you somewhere else "
She blushed crimson as he claimed her 'Sexy' 
Ridz- " Umm ok ... how about we go to Mainland China? "
"Perfect ! " Said Armaan 
He drove over there and now they are sitting inside the restaurant ...
"Riddhima tumse ek baat puchoon ? " He said after a long period of silence ...
"Haan kya hua ??"
"Riddhima tumne kal kaha tha ke maine tumhare saath kuch galat kiya hai .. lekin kal raat maine iske baare me bohut socha ..Maine kya kiya hai ?? "
She smiled seeing his nervous expression and put her hand on his hand which was on the table ...
"Armaan , tumne kuch nahi kiya , bas mein pagal hoon , ur really special to me , a good friend ?" 
He smiled listening to that .. "Nothing more than a good friend ?? " He said raising his eyebrow ..
She give him a mischiveous grin and said " Not so fast mister ! " and winked
'Shes so adorable ' He thought
Both of them were talking generally ... Riddhima was telling him about her parents ....
"Armaan jab mein choti thi tab mere ma papa dono ek car accident mein mar gaye the ... "
She could feel the tears sting her eyes but yet found the courage to tell him everything...
He now saw her tears and consoled her... Since both of them were sitting together on the same couch .. Armaan wiped her tears away and gave her a comforting hug ..
After sometime Riddhima pulled out and said "Thanks Armaan 'Sob' tum bahut ache ho .. " She said as the tears dried out and she felt relieved ...
Both of them ate their food and when they left Armaan suggested that both of them could go to the beach for a walk ...
Now both of them just arrived the beach ............

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pinkfeather IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 4:29am | IP Logged
awesome part...
loving the way the story is progressing..
keep it up

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 4:29am | IP Logged
aww too adorable.....
loved it completely.....
thanx for the pm and update asap....

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Amoon.88 Goldie

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 4:39am | IP Logged
aww..........lobed it...
thnx 4 da pm

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Riddss IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 5:19am | IP Logged
heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon


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ammyluvridzi Senior Member

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 5:49am | IP Logged
Luvd it cont sun

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anushkajain Goldie

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 5:53am | IP Logged
nice part Star
loved it Big smile
continue soonSmile

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..KaJenDelena.. Senior Member

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Cute Update! Ridhimma is so cute LOL @ her trying to decide if he loves her or not from the tissue box hehee, Armaan as usual his charming self, i like the fact that they are starting things slow but ofcourse AR are AR & I hope for them to get together sooon! Update soon :) 

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