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Asmaani Rang Ho ~ AR Mini FF~Part 3 -pg 9 (Page 4)

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 2:02am | IP Logged
loving the start..seems gud..
i'll love to plzz pm me wen u update..

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 3:48am | IP Logged
PMs to be sent later.
Part 1 -
' Tringgg Tringgg' went the alarm ,
Armaan got up , rubbed his eyes and went in the bathroom to freshen up and get ready for his first day as an intern in Sanjeevani Mumbai
He came out in a white shirt with blue jeans , ate breakfast , took his bike keys and went out
He was just a few metres away from the parking of Sanjeevani ...

Vroooom Vrooom , went the bike ! It was going in full speed and blew the wind with it ... 
Suddenly a dupatta came and landed on the drivers face and he stopped the bike 

Hes thinking " Arrey meri aankhein kharab ho gaye hai kya ? Yahaan sab kuch red kyun hai !" and then suddenly in a jerk she approached his face and slapped the dupatta away from his face
"Owwww" he said ! and got off the bike and then saw a lady dressed in a red churidaar trying to cover herself with the dupatta.. Then she just glanced at him once and froze in her spot .. He too was out of his senses ... Those same blue eyes were intensely staring into her green ones ...And her eyes also were staring into his ..Both frozen on the spot staring at eachother regaining those memories of the past 2 yrs ...
'Snap Snap' Atul snapped his finger in between their lock breaking it ! and as soon as they snapped out of their thoughts...
"TUM!!!!!" screamt both of them 

Atul - " Arrey ! tum ek dusre ko jante ho??"
Nobody replied
" Hellloo?!?!"
Suddenly all three of them felt some drops of water falling upon them , and realise it was drizzling and would rain very soon
They all just ran in the hospital and went to the Nurse Station where Dr. Kirti would congratule them for their first day and appoint their duties ..
There they met a few more interns - Dr Nikita, Anjali , Rahul , Muskaan

After Dr.Keertis welcome speech and duty appointment all of them headed for their duties at different places...
It was lunch time ..... Riddhima was heading towards the canteen and  suddenly she felt a pari of strong arms pull her in...
It was Armaan who pulled her in the Fire Escape and immediately shut her motuh with his hands....
She did not do anything but just got lost into thos blue eyes again..
"Armaan" she whispered
"Riddhima" he whispered back
Now both of their faces coming closer , and closer , and closer ....
And now their lips just millimetres apart .. and soon enough both were in a deep kiss
They kissed till finally they were out of breath .... Armaan hugged her tight
"Riddhima I missed you so much ! tum mujhe chor ke kyun chali gayin haan?"
"Armaan 'sob sob ' mein tumhe chor ar nahi gaye... tumhe pata nahi kya tumne kya kiya ?"
and immediately she broke the hug realising she was doing somthing very wrong..
"Kya kiya maine riddhima ?"
"Tumhe nahi pata?" "Nahi"
"Toh fir khud pata karna , aur ahinda se agar tumne mere marzi ke khilaaf aisa kuch kiya toh dekh lena!"
and she ran up back heading towards the canteen
 "Riddhimaa ! kaahhan ja rahi ho ??"He screamt but it did not work out...
'I love you' He mumbled
She went into the locker rooms changing room before going into the canteen .. as she entered 
she was blushing deep crimson and touched her lips softly , blushing and trying to capture the moment
'Kya kiya usne Riddhima ?? haan ? kuch nahi kiya... sirf tumse pyaar kya!'said her inner voice
'Pyaar nahi ! woh mujhse kabhi pyaar nahi karega ... mein uske baki girlfriends ki tarah hoon jisse woh pyaar nahi karta!!'said another inner voice of hers
'Karta hai ' 'Nahi''haan' 'nahi'! argued he inner voices with eachother!
"No No shutup !"she cried bitterly ...
She thought ' Ridz he hasnt done anything give it a thought and lets see what happens ..'
'I love you Armaan' She mumbled and went towards the canteen..

Edited by nikiksgian - 23 January 2011 at 3:49am

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 4:18am | IP Logged
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Great Update..
Loved It...
The 'Fire Escape' Nobody Can 4gt Dat Place..

Update Soon 

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 4:48am | IP Logged
2nd to comment hehee LOVED IT! ahahaah Typical Ridhimma gets into the kiss then blames Armaan (as she always does when something goes wrong) LOL anywho the fire escape scene was amaizing hope both badhus realize they love each other and actually confess that hahaa UPDATE SOOON :)

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 4:50am | IP Logged
awesome part Clap
loved it Star
continue soonSmile

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 5:12am | IP Logged
nyc part

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 6:03am | IP Logged
awesome part=

continue soon

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 6:07am | IP Logged
Hey hun...
Superb concept
pls pm me
do cont soon

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